You got her eyes perfectly, but her body is a bit small, even for a chibi. For some reason, her ponytail looks weird. But what am I saying? I can't even draw on a computer. orz"
You Got the Eyes, Just as Cutepet said, But the Body/Head Size Ratio Is Off, the HEad is Too big for the Body so I'd Suggest Expanding/stretching the Body so that the Ratio for "Chibi" works out, the Mouth is Crooked and the Ponytail is too pulled out to the Distance Between her Head and Hair is Unusual, the amount of Hair You put on the back edge was Too Long and Didn't Mix with her Natural hair, either Remove it or add more Between her Head and the sideburns, also the Heads Shape is Slightly different from the Original and the Tip on the Side was a Little, How do I say... "Too Sharp"