I honestly think this isn't my best work but I would like honest تبصرے please, and if آپ want, rate

Quil

Since I had imprinted on her when she was two, I was a big part of her childhood. When she was two, we played non-stop hide-and-seek. When she was six, we colored with chalk and played Barbie make-over (on me). When she was twelve, I listened to her tell me all about school and teachers, giving her hugs when she got a bad grade, and a high five when she did something good. When she got her driving license, we had gone out to celebrate; she had driven. And now I was at Claire's eighteenth...