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I wrote this poem who's devoted to my ex boyfriend i used to love. So,what do آپ think?

Sometimes....
When i look into past,i see you,
i see us...
The way آپ loved me,
the way i loved you,
so pure and strong...
But...
All آپ gave was built on lies,
your love was fake...
So fake while my love was so pure...
And آپ left me nothing but pain
and dreams of us....
Us,but we never existed!
Now,when i look at آپ from a distance,
i think that's the best way i can really see you...

irena83 posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک

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reneemonique said:

i love it!!:) full of emotion,you can kinda see a picture in your mind of whats going on. your a very good writer:)

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posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک

Well,yes,i'm very emotional person,deep and i wrote that straight from my heart...Thanks a lot.

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brokenheart2828 said:

oddly enough, that exactly how me and my ex were...and i hated how it ended...

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posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک

Mmh,that's the worst ending. When آپ think that آپ know the person,but actually آپ don't...

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lailalove said:

no wordssssssssss can say how amazing it is it fantasticcccccccccccccccccccccc like i کہا no wordssssssssss

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posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک

Aw thank آپ so much.... <3

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Abilei said:

I think its good. I also think آپ hit everything right on the head for the most part.( =

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posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک

Thanks....

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inexplicable said:

It´s a very good poem. آپ are a good poem writer! ;)

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posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک

Aw thanks.... ;-)

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_Frida_ said:

that was awesome,I felt the same when it happened to me

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posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک

Thanks.....

irena83 posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک

Vixie79 said:

Wow, very wavering but the writing itself has a loveliness all its own.

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posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک

Thank you... <3

irena83 posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک

You're welcome. ♥

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