Hello MJ family, remember me? R.I.P CollageQueen(also known as powertothefoxes) What do آپ fellow شائقین think about my classic, original, story?

WARNING: this might contain some parts آپ may not like, if آپ disagree with it, آپ can tell me. one دن in the future I'm going to make a mini clip یا movie out of this. آپ could give me some suggestions یا something to tweek the story a little if آپ ever dislike my creativity. anyway, hope آپ enjoy the mini story:)P.S: Peterdaddy,MJpixy, I'm sorry I was offline because it was like an emotional rollercoaster for me. P.S: آپ might want to look closely.