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posted by NocturnalMirage
Useful tips for making an OC

Greetings!

Okay, so I bumped into some... hmm... how to put this delicately? Some OC's on different MLP websites over the past few days, which were considerably less than innovative... So I decided to make this guide, based on my personal experiences, sharing the possible difficulties one may encounter when creating an original character. Below آپ will find the factors, I think are vital for making a good OC.

1,Visual design

In most cases, the process starts with this, no matter if آپ use one of the ٹٹو creators یا draw your character سے طرف کی your self. I wouldn't want to go into details about choosing a race (earth, pegasus, unicorn), because if you've already decided to make an OC, you've most likely decided what shall be its race as well. But things can go wrong in the very beginning. When forming the character's appearance, many people seem to make the mistake of using wrong color schemes. Meaning, they use colors that doesn't go well together, they don't harmonize. Sometimes, an extraordinary appearance can work, but there's a high probability it won't. The exterior design of a character is just one thing, alone, it will not make the character special. Most of these OCs that fit into this category; either have too bright, neon-like color schemes, which makes them look like they were colored with highlighters, یا as I said, the colors doesn't really harmonize together. For example, royal blue/dark blue and red, dark brown and neon green, یا neon green and bright neon pink/magenta. In addition to all of this, there are some hues that go well together, but deviate too far from the original canon's atmosphere and depiction. The best example for this is black and blood red. Avoid this combination like the plague! I know, because when I was a newbie in the fandom, my first OC looked like that. Yeah... bad decision. Anyways, try to use colors that won't attract too much attention; meaning, it is best if your OC could stand in the background with the other ponies in an episode, but wouldn't stand out from the crowd. Suggestions: white goes well with almost any color, if used as the primary color for the coat. Warm, medium brown harmonizes with golden yellow, ocher and beige. Cream, یا مکھن yellow can go well with light red. Sky blue/royal blue colors can harmonize with darker colors, but as I said: black is only an option for the mane and tail.

2, Background story

This is as important as the visual appearance! Many OCs lack this particular trait. The character comes to life with a well thought out back story. This is the part that depends entirely on your creativity. Just set your mind free and let it roam to different “lands”! However, there are some restrictions, some things that should be avoided. The most common example for this is when people relate their OCs to main characters یا royalty. Daughter of Twilight, son of Celestia... Yes, it's fun to dream, I know, but this concept is very risky and works only in a few cases, where the creator of the OC has an extraordinary talent, way above the average. I'm talking about fanfics, of course; in Rps, it doesn't really matter. So the main objective here: don't disturb the original canon too much with your character's back story. If your OC interacts with canon characters within a fanfic, and forms different kinds of relationships with them... that's acceptable and good, but it shouldn't be a starting point. Also, here's another concept that works only in every 60 moons یا so: try to avoid the tough orphan/last of its kind thing. It's been used many-many times. Excluding the above mentioned concepts, the possibilities are limitless. It all depends on you; just be creative and open minded. Don't be afraid to set your skills free!

3, Personality

This part is also essential, especially if you're planning to write a fanfic about your character. I've seen it many times, that people make too perfect characters. The traits of these OCs, are usually based on the combination of the personalities of the Mane 6. Don't do that, try to create an original personality that is the characteristic of your ٹٹو only. Also keep in mind, that nothing is perfect. Luna and the Mane 6 are the best examples for that. Their characters have flaws, which makes them مزید “human”. It's a useful technique to write a فہرست of your OC's strengths and weaknesses. Don't be afraid to add some flaws; it'll only make your character stronger and deeper. What I do is, I always add a mental handicap to my character's personality; a mild psychological disorder if آپ will. For instance, among my OCs, Nocturnal Mirage has inferiority complex, Summer Pride is a well functioning border-line personality, and Evergreen Whisper is obsessive and sometimes unable to دکھائیں compassion for other ponies. This is only my way, there are several other methods آپ can use to implement some flaws in your character's personality; however, these positive and negative traits will determine your OC's interaction with other characters. Also, if آپ do not have a single idea about your character's inner self, don't be frightened یا sad! It is my experience, that participating in a few roleplays can easily fix that problem. Just شامل میں an RP and go with the flow of events in a natural way and you'll see how the other players will help آپ to form a personality around your OC in a jiffy. It is also a good technique to read some successful fanfics relevant to your interests and observe how the pros are doing it. To test how deep your character is, آپ can simply ask others to describe your OC, using attributes. The better the description, the deeper your character is. The non-plus-ultra scenario is, when the تفصیل of other people matches the one in your mind, which means آپ managed to convey your character's personality to others successfully.

4, No alicorns!

Based on what I've seen in about two years, since I've been a brony; an alicorn OC usually doesn't work. Why? I've کہا it before, but I'll say it again! Don't disturb the original canon too much! In my opinion, there are way too many alicorns in the دکھائیں already. Alicorns are supposed to be a special race; the highest elite in equestrian society, if آپ will. An alicorn should be considered as a "rarity". Haha, see what I did there? ;) Okay, that was a terrible joke, I admit. I do not wish to judge anyone, but many people choose to create an alicorn OC is because they just want to stand out of the crowd. These characters often have shallow, vaguely described personalities (mainly getting inspiration from the six Elements of Harmony) without any weakness at all. They are all-knowing and all-powerful, but there's not much else. Of course there are some exceptions, like Faith, from the fanfic Faiths and Doubts (one of the best fanfics, I've ever read), but most of these characters could be an earth pony, a pegasus یا a unicorn, based on their back story and personality traits. So, if آپ don't feel a highly gifted, professional writer; I'd suggest آپ to avoid making your OC into an alicorn. There's so much potential in the basic three ٹٹو races, leave the royal duties to Celestia and Luna. Sigh... okay, Twilight and Cadence too.

Oki-doki-loki, I think that's all, but don't forget that these are merely my own PERSONAL impressions, observations and ideas; I cannot guarantee success, although I hope آپ found these few lines to be helpful. :)
So in this Dan Rants there gonna be مزید عملی حکمت shit and some Criticitism toward this club.

This club is pretty much... Eh...
We don't have so much alive people and well some good people are rip. So I shall ask آپ - let's boost it up.

So in first episode I کہا about "user of the month" thing. So I thought of making it happens but I don't know how many ووٹ would drop. آپ can expect پولز possibly made tomorrow (will try to put most people in them but choose will be free آپ will be able to add it for yourself)


So I get alot of criticism on "to آپ don't like Sword art online and Free ? Wow he...
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posted by Aph-Finland
 Candy Sunshine
Candy Sunshine
at Alicorn City, there is a young ٹٹو named Candy Sunshine. her mother Gem Sunshine wanted her to see the land of Equestria and every ٹٹو there. when she got on the train her mother was crying tears of joy and waving her hoof in the air. meanwhile at PonyVille, Every ٹٹو was trotting and flying in ponyville. the mane 6 was standing اگلے to the train station. they knew a train was not coming to pick them up to go to Canter-lot because it was early in the morning and the train driver might still be sleeping. "the train is not coming every pony" Twilight said. every ٹٹو started to be sad....
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
August 22nd, 1959. 8:52 AM, Lahaina train station.

Two Black ponies are wearing purple suits with yellow ties. They're both carrying brief cases.

Larry: *Watching them, on their left*
Adrenaline: So, is that them?
Larry: Yeah. That's what the don said.
Adrenaline: So, what's the plan?
Larry: I go to the back of the train with them, and دکھائیں them this. *Shows a fake Movie Director ID* I tell them that I want them to act in a movie, and during that, آپ check their cases to see if they have any info going against us. After آپ find it, we kill them.
Adrenaline: Sounds good to me.

The train arrived,...
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added by Jade_23
Source: Equestria Daily and Deviantart
posted by Seanthehedgehog
Date: June 20, 1961
Location: Cheyenne, Wyoming
Time: 12:57 PM
Railroad: Union Pacific

A few road workers had to use jack hammers to crack the road, making it easier for Percy, and Jeff to take out the rails.

Jeff: *Taking out the bad rails with his magic* Percy, can آپ get us our tools from the speeder?
Percy: Right away Jeff. *Walks to the speeder*

But soon, he saw something that made him worry.

Percy: Jeff?!
Jeff: What is it Percy?
Percy: There's a train coming towards us, but it looks like it's going too fast!
Jeff: Shit, that could only mean one thing.
Percy & Jeff: Orion.
Orion:...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
Date: June 15, 1961
Location: Cheyenne, Wyoming
Time: 7:06 AM
Railroad: Union Pacific

The yards were busy when the Military ponies woke up.

Military ٹٹو 2: Okay, let's continue with our inspection.
Military ٹٹو 1: Right. *Sits down in the Jeep with his partner*
Mike: *In front of Hawkeye, and Stylo as they enter the yards* ارے lads, guess what.
Hawkeye: What?
Mike: Me, and Dan have a plan.
Stylo: For?
Mike: Getting rid of the military ponies.
Hawkeye: And that is?
Mike: To convince them that we're not communists.
Hawkeye: Okay, that's great. *Walks past him*
Stylo: *Follows Hawkeye*
Mike:...
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added by FabulousChicken
posted by Seanthehedgehog
Tim and Julia were helping clear the traffic from the accident, caused سے طرف کی Ultimate Deadman in his Jeep.

Julia: *Controlling the traffic, making everyone go to the left of the accident*
Tim: *Talking to two ponies on the right side of the road* Do آپ know how this happened?
Stallion 66: Some guy in his Jeep was off roading when he jumped onto this road, and floored it.
Tim: Did آپ catch the license plate?
Stallion 66: No sir, but the driver is a red pegasus.
Tim: Okay, thanks for your help.

When the traffic was back to normal, Julia talked to Tim as they were on patrol

Tim: I talked to one of...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
 Ultimate Deadman's Jeep
Ultimate Deadman's Jeep
Ultimate Deadman was at his house, a big log کیبن in the middle of the woods. He had a long drive way, and a گیراج اگلے to his house.

Ultimate Deadman: *Under a Jeep* Now we just اقدام that here, and اقدام this to where that used to be, aaaand perfection. *Gets up* I gotta challenger Big Tire and Silverado to a race. *Goes into his house, and calls his دوستوں on a cell phone*
Big Tire: Hello?
Ultimate Deadman: Big Tire? This is Deadman. Ultimate Deadman. I have something special to share with you. Get Silverado, and meet me at my house.
Big Tire: We're coming.

Song: link

 Big Tire and Silverado both drive a truck like this
Big Tire and Silverado...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
Song: link

Canterlot, 6:50 AM

The sun was just rising as a convoy left Canterlot. In the convoy was a Lincoln, two Chryslers, and a 1954 Cadillac convertible. Each car was shiny, and black, and Twilight's in the Cadillac. The front of that car has two purple flags with her cutie mark on it.

Episode 3: Christmas Trees And Assassinations

Special Guest Stars, Twilight Sparkle, Princess Celestia, and Princess Luna as theirselves.
SeanTheHedgehog's Tom Foolery as Brett Flasch

In Gran Turismo, everypony heard that Twilight Sparkle was coming to visit.

Tim: *Listening to the radio inside his car as he...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
What to expect in this episode.

Twilight Sparkle: *In a black کونویرٹئبل, متحول سیار with two Royal Guards. A bullet hits the door of the کونویرٹئبل, متحول سیار they're in*
Royal Guard: Princess, get down!

---

Captain Jefferson: Someone tried to assassinate the princess as she entered our town.

---

Twilight: Why would somepony want me dead?
Toby: That's what we're trying to find out.

---

Tim: *Gets punched three times سے طرف کی a blue unicorn. He gets punched one مزید time, and his glasses break*

Intro
Song: link

Julia: *Driving her police car on the round freeway*
Tim: *Sitting اگلے to her*

Gran Turismo

Starring Larry Wilcox as Tim Miller
قوس قزح Dash as Julia Rose

Tim: *Talks on the radio*
Julia: *Increases speed in the car while turning on the police lights*

Also starring Sean Jefferson from SeanTheHedgehog
Toby Linnehan from SeanTheHedgehog
And Red Velvet from Dragonaura15
posted by SomeoneButNoone
What would آپ do if an plauge would come to your land and corrupt all the land آپ knew and loved.

Named "The V-Virus" was made سے طرف کی Celestial corporation as special medicicine that would bring revolution to world. It did brought revolution to world - in a wrong way. What was told us that virus would kill any type of sickness including things like cancer. It was a dream for all... The "medicine" was spreader over whole Equestria and more. Noone suspected a thing untill ponies were found choking on their blood and mutating. The scientists found a lot of gene changes inside tested Ponies bodies...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
Tim, and Julia met up in the parking lot near their station after their shift ended.

Tim: آپ wanted to see me?
Julia: I need a ride to Local Consideration.
Tim: Okay. *Walks with Julia to his Viper*
 Tim's وائپر, واپار
Tim's Viper


Halfway to Local Consideration, Julia decided to talk to Tim.

Julia: Do آپ enjoy working with Toby?
Tim: Sure. How's Red treating you?
Julia: She has a crush on you.
Tim: I see.
Julia: What do آپ think about Toby?
Tim: He thinks you're smoking hot.
Julia: These new guys both have a crush on us.
Tim: I know how to get Red away from me, but I'm not sure how to stop Toby.
Julia: I know...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
Theme song >>>> link

Taxi Ponies: *Driving taxi cabs to the station*

Ponies On The Rails

Starring

Pierce Hawkins "Hawkeye" From SeanTheHedgehog

Snowflake & Orion From Alinah09

Metal Gloss From DragonAura15

Railway Pony: *Driving freight train across a bridge going over the train tracks at the station.*
Metal Gloss: *Drives freight train under bridge*
Pony: *In the station, buying a ticket. As soon as he gets the ticket, he runs across the platform, and boards his train.*
Hawkeye: *Preparing train for departure*
Stylo: *Looking at orders on paper*
Hawkeye: *Blows horn twice*...
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posted by Canada24
قوس قزح Dash and the ladies finally arrived at Canterlot.

They met up with Celestia.

"I bet your here for Scootaloo" Celestia grinned.

"Just please tell me she's alright!?" Dash cried anxiously.

"Yes. Ditto and I saved her from Ganger and his gang. But it wasn't easy" Celestia insisted.

"Oh thank god for that" Dash cried, though still having trouble calming down.

"Come, I'll bring آپ to her and Ditto" Celestia insisted.

"Please do" Dash cried anxiously.

"Follow me" Celestia said, motioning for her and the others to follow her.

-------------------------------------------------------------------

They...
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Eggman arrived just in time to see his airbase destroyed.

Eggman: I want the son of a کتیا, کتيا responsible for this!!
Nazi: He's probably gone سے طرف کی now Doctor.
Twilight: *Arriving*
Nazi: Sir, *Points a gun at her* It's one of them!
Eggman: Stand down, she's not attacking us. We won't attack her.
Twilight: *Lands in front of Eggman* Man, I wanna شامل میں آپ guys.
Eggman: Why?
Twilight: Because Celestia's an asshole! That's why I killed her and Luna, along with hundreds of her guards!
Eggman: آپ did, eh? Well then, welcome to my army.
Nazi: Doctor, have آپ lost your mind?
Eggman: Yes, I lost my mind...
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Before we get to the part that takes place in Equestria, we are going to look at a new character in this series. Wind. He is currently in Hyrule, and the king wants to talk to him.

Wind: *Standing in front of the king*
King: *Sitting in his chair* آپ sir, are the worst person in this entire kingdom.
Wind: Do I look like Ganondorf to you?
King: You're worse than Ganondorf! You've only been here for two days, آپ killed five of the guards, and آپ don't even like Zelda!
Zelda: *Sitting اگلے to the king*
Wind: Well, what is there to like about her? She's very unattractive.
King: How dare you! She...
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posted by Elundhati
I realize that you've always been an outcast
It's not everyone at school who likes to think
To find a student that's like you
I've had one یا maybe two
But the good ones dissapear before I blink

(Oh, wuh-oh-wuh, oh
Oh, wuh-oh-wuh)

Now I understand آپ have your reservations
It's hard to have a brain as large as yours
But if we don't win these games
Well, I think I've made it plain
What will happen if we have the losing scores!

(Oh, wuh-oh-wuh, oh
Oh, wuh-oh-wuh)

Unleash the magic
Unleash the magic
If we lose, then you're to blame
They all have used it
Maybe abused it
So then why can't we do the same?

(Oh, wuh-oh-wuh,...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
 Larry Wilcox is on the left and Erik Estrada is on the right
Larry Wilcox is on the left and Erik Estrada is on the right
In the first CHiPs پرستار fic, the Canterlot Highway Patrol dealt with ponies stealing cars. Now they're going to deal with robbers.

For future reference, آپ can find every CHP pony's picture from the roleplay. Their pictures are on pages 1-7: link

SeanTheHedgehog Presents

Larry Wilcox as Jon Baker
And Erik Estrada as Frank Poncherello in...

Jon & Frank: *On their police motorcycles, riding on the highway*
Frank: I can't wait to get my brand new Camaro partner.
Jon: I can't wait either. You've been talking about it so much, I think that everyone we chase drive's one of those, and I mess up our...
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posted by Canada24
Now.. We all know at this point.

That I don't consider this THE GREATEST دکھائیں EVER MADE..

In fact. Sometimes it's just plain terrible.
There's only so many episodes I even watch anymore.

And I once stated Discord and Scooty are the only ones I like anymore.

Even Pinkie's adorability is raring off sometimes.

I often say the دکھائیں should of ended after Twilight defeated Tirek.

But season 5 is keeping me happy.
Their giving us serprised, and giving background characters chances to sign.
(though I sometimes have mixed thoughts about AJ. She's a bit of a country girl steriotype), but I like her anyway.

Anyway....
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