What went wrong with this story? It had such potential and then it just کہا fuck it and went and ruiened the story. Well, I'm going to tell آپ all about a MLP story called Rarity's New Dress and how it had a lot of potential to be good and how the ending murdered it.
Well, its about where Rarity is haveing another one of her work relaited stress moments. So, she gets Fluttershy to help her make her so-called greatest dress. So, Fluttershy gathers the others of the mane six one سے طرف کی one. Finally, Fluttershy is told to come into Rarity's celler. There, Fluttershy is tied down and she sees that all of the others were killed and parts of there bodies were sown together to make a dres. All that was missing was a cutie mark, so Rarity began to torture Fluttershy and then, left the cellar for a moment. Now, before I continue, I have to say, that, I wads actually enjoying this story a lot. In fact, I thought that it could rival Cupcakes... but, that was before we got to the dreaded ending. So, Spike comes into the cellar... for some reason, and then, Rarity comes and starts... oragasiming over Spike. Now, lets say it together. WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT!!!
Yes, and worse, tehy actually start having intercourse on سب, سب سے اوپر of Fluttershy, oh, and she dies for some reason, I can't remeber because I wanted the story ot end already.
So, yeah. Any potential that this story had was murdered-No-Obliterated سے طرف کی the ending. Why put that in here. They had a great chance for an amazing MLP creepy fanfic and they blew it. In other words, Rarity's New Dress is a disaster. But, hay, that's only my opinion. What's Your Take