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Do آپ like this?

its a poem i made about school (its just a joke thats not how i feel about school):

school is not cool
it's just cruel,
teachers want آپ to do maths
because its one of their wrath,
they'll make آپ in detention
and when آپ ask they just won't mention,
they'll give آپ tests
so آپ do your best,
(but really they just do it to torture us)

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lol i liked it do u write little poems like these a lot?
ryofangirl posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک
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ya i do and thank آپ
StarGirl1721 posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک
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Bananaaddict said:
I think it's funny! But here are some suggestions:
1. آپ should capitalize the first letter in each line, unless you're trying to mimic e. e. cummings.
2. I don't know if 'wrath' can be used in that context یا as a plural noun.
3. آپ can't 'make' someone in detention. How about put?
4. The last line doesn't rhym, with doesn't really matter since it could be free verse, but the rest of the poem does rhym, so it's sort of messing with a pattern آپ already laid out for yourself.
Of course, آپ don't have to do any of that. They're just suggestions.
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thanks i will try to do it اگلے time
StarGirl1721 posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک
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hahah i کہا detentions cause i have heard of some teachers they just make u in detention and when آپ ask they won't answer and change the subject so thats why i گیا کیا پوسٹ that
StarGirl1721 posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک
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No detention is fine, it's just that someone "make" آپ in detention makes no sense. It would be better if it was "put" آپ in detention.
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