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Should I keep on making short stories? (Please no rude تبصرے :))

The Not So Worm
A Short Story سے طرف کی :YoshiStar
One دن when I was at least 2 یا 3 years old I was outside with my dad. I saw something through the گھاس and I picked it up. At first I thought it was a worm. So I waved it in the air and said: "Look daddykins a worm!"
And my dad said: "Holly S***!!! That's not a F***** worm! That's a گھاس snake!"
And so I said: "OH" and droped it. And walked back into my house and ate some سٹرابیری, اسٹرابیری ice cream...

Please tell me what آپ think. Should I continue یا no? And please no rude comments:)
 YoshiStar posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک
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kittencutie119 said:
No
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posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک 
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Thank آپ for answering:) I really apreciate it:))
YoshiStar posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک
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Your welcome. With a little moe practice, آپ could eventually get a little better wth progress
kittencutie119 posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک
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thank آپ sooooo much! This helps alot:)
YoshiStar posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک
JudyNails said:
I think آپ should!
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Thank you!:D
YoshiStar posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک
Shadowmarioking said:
lol that is a hilarious story wished that'd happen to me XD

go ahead, continue :D
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posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک 
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I'd be glad to!:D
YoshiStar posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک
IHWTA said:
That was.... A really short, short story...
Kind of... random...
I say no. No offense of anything.
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Thanks anyway:) None taken BTW
YoshiStar posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک
YOUTH-UNLIMITED said:
It's not actually a story.these are the lackings of this story.try to correct your faults and practice more.
1.the story doesn't got any meaning
2.the story doesn't got any moral
3.the story doesn't got any climate
4.the story doesn't got any message and aim. So...if آپ can overcome this faults and practice more,you will be able to make great stories.good luck:)
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Thank you:)
YoshiStar posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک
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آپ are most welcome:)
YOUTH-UNLIMITED posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک
hellokittygirl2 said:
i think yes u should make it little funny and scary
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I will:))
YoshiStar posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک
Brandey said:
Hm...It's kinda strange,I don't know what to say.
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Same.
mitchie19 posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک
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Well its kinda مزید like a strange event that heppened in my life...I should have mentioned that:)
YoshiStar posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک
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Ok than :)
Brandey posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک
dreamfields said:
If آپ enjoy writing, then continue. The مزید practice آپ have, the مزید details آپ will include. Nobody sits down and writes a masterpiece on their first try. The story was really short, but it gives آپ a start to build on. Have fun!!!
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Thank you:))
YoshiStar posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک
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Your welcome :D
dreamfields posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک
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