I am a harsh critic so apologies if آپ are offended. 2 Study human anatomy, you'll benefit considerably. Add texture, shading for depth and details on the clothes. Add a مزید interesting background, it looks boring and overly simplistic. as if it was drawn سے طرف کی a little kid. Work on the face, that's a bit off as well. The arms are too short, the torso is too long. I am an artist too and I do not sugarcoat things, that cripples you. Practice, آپ WILL get better.