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A دل is as fragile as a leaf in the fall
People seem to step on it without a care at all
The wind swiftly carries it to some dark unknown place
But yet it cannot fix, replace, یا erase
At least broken hearts can be helped with tender love
Naked trees serve as shells of things, with no leaves covered above
At least the wind can carry us to one who'll love us true
To one who'll help our hearts
Help with love anew
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Thank you. :)
Dwolf247 posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک
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Cherry9090 said:
Very beautiful heartfelt and creative straight from the دل I lover it
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zomeister said:
I like it !!
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Usui--takumi said:
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Thanks?
Dwolf247 posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک
ivoryphills said:
Broken my heart...
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Im sorry. :(
Dwolf247 posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک
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No! This poem is about heartache, right? So that's a GOOD thing!
ivoryphills posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک
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:( thts so sad :(
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Shadowmarioking said:
I would say that I read it all, but then I would be lying. I will only say that it's good.
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adultswimperson said:
It's not bad.
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darkwave said:
so cute!
i love it!
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InquisitiveOwl said:
....
I HATE POETRY.
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bigkate28 said:
wow :) wow first let me tell آپ that peice was so amamzing .(: and idk :(
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kittykat8005 said:
It's really good. :D
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KissOfDoom said:
This is very beautiful, well done :))
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