My song-writing "lyrics" ..please read and tell me what u think!

Steady steps and fast heartbeats
look around, there's nothing but empty seats
trying to hold on , to stand on my feet

it's getting dark, closer to the edge
broken hearts, on a broken bridge
where we are, is closer to the end

Chorus
they're all gone, everything's gone
everything is closer to goodbye
bullets in there, blood everywhere
everything is closer to goodbye
Wishing this whole thing ends tonight

New hope, with every prayer
From the ones who really care
to someone's fighting somewhere

The World Will BE Better Than Before
When We Create Love Not War
When We Realize What We're Fighting For


Chorus
they're all gone, everything's gone
everything is closer to goodbye
bullets in there, blood everywhere
everything is closer to goodbye
Wishing this whole thing ends tonight

I Just Wanna Go Back To The Time
When Everything Was Fine
When There Was nothing Called Mine
It Was All Ours


Chorus
they're all gone, everything's gone
everything is closer to goodbye
bullets in there, blood everywhere
everything is closer to goodbye
Wishing this whole thing ends tonight

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woooowwww preettttyyyy goooddd
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Thaaank Yooou Sooo Muuuch :D
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Would آپ guys like me to post another song?
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jessy_an said:
Pretty nice I am guessing it's about war,Great subject, In third stanza why did آپ just wrote 4 lines? There should be also 6? I would like to listen this lyrics آپ know a lyrics doesn't seem a song until listener listens the tune so I would like to hear it while I was reading that it was like I'm reading a poem.
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Yeah, it's about war :) Because that was the bridge ;) Hopefully, someday I'll record it maybe :) and I'll post it here for sure
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Darkus-eliox said:
Beautiful love it best song ever I would love it if u sang it and گیا کیا پوسٹ it here
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Thaank آپ so much :D :D As soon as I record it, someday!
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joanzark said:
Oh it is wonderful!!!! Best song i've seen in fanpop! You've got a huge talent and a big soul!!! What kind of موسیقی آپ listen to?
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Thank آپ so much :D :D :D :D :D ADELE, Avril Lavigne. MIKA, Queen, Taylor تیز رو, سوئفٹ
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Oh good! Perfect...!
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:)
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Yuzuri said:
Awesome! Whats the title? Its a really good one!
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Thanks! Closer To Goodbye :) Thanks again!
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celia-chan said:
it's Awesome! (y)
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Thanks :D
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