What do آپ think of this short speech I wrote?

Okay, so I was going through my جوابات on my پروفائل page and I came across this one answer I made. Someone asked me what I thought of the issue of child abuse, and I wrote a speech which I thought was pretty impressive (not to be stuck-up یا anything, lol), but no one else answered and she never شدہ تبصرہ to say if she agreed with me یا liked it. So I decided to copy it, make a question, paste it here, and see if آپ guys like it.

Here it is;

I ABSOLUTELY DESPISE IT...
Child abuse is one of the most dispicable crimes in the world, in my opinion. Why would آپ want to harm a young, innocent child? No matter what he یا she has done, they do not deserve to be abused. There is a thin but clear, definite line between punishment and abuse; spanking and put in a time-out chair یا corner is suitable discipline, but beating a child with a cord, slamming them into walls, burning them with cigarettes, یا even worse is ABUSE and nothing but ABUSE. Children deserve to live childhoods in peace and harmony. Our children should live in a world of happiness and love, not in a world filled with hurt and shame....

What do آپ think? :)
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I like it , i agree completly
rose12345 posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک
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Thanks :)
sapherequeen posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک
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wow impressive i agree wtih it completely =D
nessienjake posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک
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nafela said:
do people realy abuse there children. thats harsh. btw i like it
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dardarvinxxx said:
i really love it but i think آپ should add this."if child abuse happens, children will obviously have a horrible childhood and when they grow up they might do the same thing"
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exactly
nessienjake posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک
S7n said:
sure in world of crime children should be محفوظ ,living their pureness and innocent life far from any violence
that's not a wish ,it's complete right of them
parents should be trained how to deal with children
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