Hey.. mmm.. i am not a pro یا really a musician.. and i tried making a song for my girlfriend.. and i'm planning to send this, sing this on our 10th monthsary.. hehe.. i was wondering if آپ could rate it? opinions? reactions? thanks!

Crazily Beautiful Impact

I.
At 3 in the afternoon
موسیقی starts playing with a lovely tune
Heard the bells tolling
With my best suit at the wedding
And when I glanced outside
There, I saw آپ riding in a trike
Such a pretty lady – who would’ve guessed
With her bang-up sunlit dress

Pre-Chorus I:
Right there I knew
It’s you
It’s absolutely you
Rocking my دل again and again
So, yeah let’s begin

Chorus:
آپ shake me up
آپ fill me up
آپ picked me up off the ground
And like an angel, آپ flew
With me to the clouds
آپ crushed the walls
آپ cushioned my fall
Gone are the coldness in my heart
A brand new story’s about to start
Unafraid, stimulated, now a chance-taker
And that’s a fact
With آپ in this crazily beautiful impact

II.
As our gazes locked in contact
In a تقسیم, الگ کریں of a سیکنڈ آپ got my دل hi-jacked
Injected your mirages in my head
Stitched the holes in me with your thread
It just seems so unreal
Sweetly enticing’s what I feel
Love’s warhead detonated
Explosive attraction now has started


Pre-Chorus II:

Disturbance spreading inside
Sadness died
Ripples out through my life
I’m falling now in ecstasy
Come on baby, fall with me

(Repeat Chorus)

Bridge:
A supernova within this dark sky
An angel descended in this existence of mine
Forever changing
My reason for living
Instantly engraving
Your name in my being
Reviving the dying love in me
For آپ have come finally…

(Repeat Chorus)

This crazily beautiful impact
This crazily beautiful impact
This Crazily
Beautifully
This crazily beautiful impact