Alright im writing a song. How does this sound??(:

Im ready Im ready
for the end to happen
Im tired im tired
of everything and every lie
آپ made a promise
that آپ were gonna get
better now I understand that آپ just don't want to
Your like wanna of those
stuck up chicks that never wants to quit
the hitting
the names
boy your drivin me insane
i'm tired of this
i've got a black eye the size of your fist
were done
were through
the only problem is I don't know
how to get over you
آپ used to bring out the best
but no not now
Your always acting like a clown
آپ کہا آپ loved me
boy what happened please tell me
cuz
the hittin
the names
boy your drivin me insane
im tired of this i've got a black eye the size of your fist
were done
were through the only problem is i dont know how to get over you.
آپ hurt me because آپ enjoy the pain I scream
and آپ watch me cry
I want out of this
please baby
im tired of this i've got a black eye the size of your fist
im done were through
the only problem i'll ever have is I don't know how to get over you.
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peterslover said:
It's a sad song, that's for sure, but well written. What style of موسیقی are آپ gonna go with it? Maybe country/rock?
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that will work!
peterslover posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک
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مزید a soulful sound.
Itsmejordyn411 posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک
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thanks(:
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pufllys said:
It sounds awesome! :)
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robothor1111 said:
It's a sad song...is it going to be upbeat یا slow and mournful? Like some sad songs have a good beat to them, others sound really angsty. What are آپ going for?
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مزید an upbeat like i was thinking from Joss Stone's song Tell Me About it.
Itsmejordyn411 posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک
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Oh that's good! Not that I have anything against angsty songs...just saying. :D
robothor1111 posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک
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its cool im looking for مزید an original
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zanhar1 said:
cool
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totaldramarox said:
thats really good, is it your first time writing a song? I write some songs but i cant really think of one now. Are آپ in a band?
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Yes I am(: Actually but im the "Music writing" گٹار player(:
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E-rock said:
Thats good.
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Aha(: Thanks(:
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