Shadow The Hedgehog Article: how it happend

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posted by kimmy_wolf

befor i begin there might be a few misspellings

ok one دن i went to a party with my best freind blaze we were layghing every now and then sonic would tell us to not to tell amy were he is at, but it was funother wise then i herd amy say "shadow git back her!" i asked blaze how shadow was she کہا so guy black red آپ know how it is so i left the party with blaze and she droped me of at the park because i asked her too.
i wondered intoo the forst when i was pilled into the bushes were a secret clift was hidden quite well it was butiful the moon was full a clear river was sparkiling then i look at how grabed me i asked who are you. the red and black hedhog کہا in a quiet voice "im shadow who are you" i کہا im kimmy, he grabed me close and kissed me in the sweet moon light read my اگلے story for مزید oped آپ liked it !!!

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kimmy_wolf i love to make these!!!!

SymmaGirl2 That really sucked. It made no sense whatsoever. I'm thoroughly confused, especially since they had apparently just met, and suddenly are kissing.

SymmaGirl2 And also, a few misspellings? Pretty much every single word was spelled wrong. I don't think droped is a word.

segafan Agreeing with SymmaGirl2 on that. A story needs to be more stretched out, and your full story should be about 5 or 6 times the length of that. Make it more realistic. You wouldn't kiss Shadow right when you meet him. You get to know him, he asks you out or something, etc. You don't just get kissed right on the bat. I know you're really excited to get to the kissing scene, but give it time. It makes the readers want to read more and more and more. Also, about this misspellings: Copy and paste it to Microsoft Word, if you have it, to proof read it before posting it.

snootygirl50701 I'm sorry ,but what was that? Don't answer that! I will write a story of shadow and a new girl to show you how it is done!

snootygirl50701 I just made one! 'Grace and the Beast of Shadow '!Check it out!!!

kimmy_wolf ok srry its so cunfusing but thats the chatch it supos to mean that he kinda rused into it sorta not to talk crap about him but its not supost to be canfusing srry

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1. Poof! It Already Happened

posted by ShadowsShade

This is my first fanfic, so plz تبصرہ :)

Hey, it's me, Shade! You'll get to know my history very soon, but I'll start with a particular دن at high school: sports day. I was about sixteen and just a normal girl: I had nice friends, loved to go shopping, knew some pretty good places in town to go for a drink, etc... I still do, but... it has changed, in a certain way. So, it was sports day, and I was like:
"Meh, sports day."
It would be boring, like every year, only football, hockey and tennis, آپ know. I went to school because I had to, otherwise I would've stayed home. I walked up to my...