sonic vs shadow

this is a sonic story i have been writing for about a month.my chracter is myself because i put myself in my sonic stories.my chracters name is ashley but is refered to ash for short.hope آپ enjoy it.
one claim,cool دن at shadow & ash`s house
(shadow grabs the keys and is about to head of for work)
ash-shadow,can`t آپ just take a دن off work so we can spend some time together?
shadow-you already know how deticated i am to my work.maybe the commander will let me off but im not sure.(he just leaves)
ash was feeling kinda pissed off she coulde`nt spend time with shadow.
2 hours later
ash...