I wrote some songs! please tell me what آپ think! there are 4!

True Friends
Boys may come and go.
But best دوستوں always show,
they love you!
Boys may leave your side.
But best دوستوں are forever.

Chorus:
True friends.
Are there till the end.
True friends.
Always make آپ smile.
Tell me you'll be my true friend.
Forever.
Tell me you'll always be there for me.

Best دوستوں there.
When آپ need a shoulder to cry on.
They aren't pretend.
I know i'll always have one.

(chorus)

I have a true friend.
And she has me.
I know she'll be there.
When im on my knees,
and crying.
Everyone knows,
that shes the best.
I'll never forget.
that shes my bff.

(instrumental)

(chorus)


Burn
What?
What am i supposed to do?
When you're the one that did it?
I know we used to be best friends.
All of us.
But what happened between us?
A couple stupid sentences.
And this is what happens.

Chorus:
But your gonna be the one to fight.
Cause im not staying here all night.
Discussing our friendship.
And how its over.
Does this even matter to you?
Cause im not the one who کہا who cares.
I am the one who tried to blow out.
All the fires that آپ just burned with.
Cause i am not the one who کہا whatever.
Oh, آپ think your so clever?
Huh?

Well, lets not fight forever.
I think its done.
But thats exactly what آپ کہا before.
But now your changing around all my words.
I cant believe آپ even had the nerve to do that.
Well, i guess آپ did.

(chorus)

WHY?
Why do i try so hard to forgive you?
And why?
Why do i always get stabbed in the back سے طرف کی my best friends?
This is exactly how it ends!

(chorusx2)

Three words(duet)
Girl: I can see it in your eyes.
Something's wrong.
There's no disguise.
Is there something on your mind?
Let it out.
آپ dont have to tell me twice.
آپ were up all last night.
What were آپ thinking about?
Tell me. Trust me.

Both: Chorus
Cause those three words.
Are not enough.
To دکھائیں our love.
I love you. I miss you. I want you. I need you.

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Singing جوابات

Sutelc22 said:
great job.i appreciate songwriting because i write songs myself.
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thanks for the support.
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I LOVE IT
Heritage112 posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک
Kibahina96 said:
The song is really sweet but sounds مزید like a poem.
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pikakel19 said:
I think the songs are great i just wish i could hear it

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