Sonic پرستار Characters Article: AN EXAMPLE OF A MARY-SUE

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posted by gyrothehedgehog

NAME: مالٹا, نارنگی the Hedgehog
GENDER: Male
POWERS: He can control fire, he can control ice, he can control electricity, he can control earth, he has super-speed, he can fly, he is super-strong and he is invincible
GIRLFRIENDS: Every girl in the series
LOOKS: An مالٹا, نارنگی hedgehog with black eyes
BACKSTORY: His hometown was destroyed سے طرف کی Eggman so now he wants revenge on him
SUPER FORM: His super form is darker مالٹا, نارنگی and he still has black eyes and ALL THE POWERS IN THE WORLD!!!OMG!!
HYPER FORM: His hyper form is exactly like his Super Form except he is neon orange
DARKSPINE FORM: His super form with white stripes and no pupils
DARK FORM: The same as his Darkspine form
WEREHOG FORM: He is exactly like Sonics’ except orange

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Brilliance of the Sun

posted by thetacoman

Milendor was مزید than happy to leave his four children in the care of his beautiful bride.
The four of them always made a ruckus, and he longed for the time before them, when he and Selena themselves were children.
Milendor was equally unhappy that he, the King of the Few, should be tasked with the task of keeping down the Old One's own son.
'I may be wary of my children, but I never sealed them underground' thought Milendor.
It thought into Milendor's head, forcing itsself to be heard;
'What gives a father a right to nearly kill his son, یا trap him in the ground? It is as آپ said, آپ would...

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How Sierra and CarBuckle Met

posted by sierradawn9

"CarBuckle! Let's bail! I hear the cops!" the other gangster yelled to CarBuckle. The grey hedgehog's head jerked up in the direction of he siren.
"DAMNIT!" he yelled. They bolted away from the bloody corpse that lie in the alleyway. They took a right turn into another tunnel that wasn't a dead end. There stood a female hedgehog with a gun pointed at the two.
"Stay right there!"she commanded. CarBuckle noticed the police badge on her shirt. He saw that her brown eyes were death-staring both him and the other gang member.
"Woah, hold on honey. Don't get your panties in a twist. Just......

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Ragnarok 5: Shattered Glass

posted by thetacoman

Estelle once again lay in a dark pit.
Broken.
Spiritless.
Dead.
The blood lapped and receeded at her wounds, never enough to heal her, but never enough to dissapear.
The moments when the blood healed her, she cherished.
But when the blood left, the pain seemed to increase.
"WHY?!" she screamed in agony.
She was foolish.
Now, she was doomed.
No one would summon her now.
No one would end her suffering.
Not even her beautiful glass sword would help her.
How could it, when it was driven straight through herchest?

It was a long time before she felt the energy.
It stirred within her, like snakes in a hole.
And,...

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Ragnarok 4: Aftermath

posted by thetacoman

The King toiled in his bed.
He wouldn't fall asleep again.
Not after that awful night-terror.......

There was a man in a dark purple چادر, فرغل with his presumed son strode around a carcass-strewn battlefeild.
"Daddy?" the son asked.
"Why are we here? And where's Mommy?"
The father continued to walk, examining the dead. "What wonderful new soldiers," he mumbled to himself, completeley ingnoring his son.
"Daddy?" the son pulled on his father's cloak.
The man had grew tired of answering to people a long time ago.
He pulled a چھری from a man newley killed.
"Here," he shoved the چھری into his son's face.
"Lick...

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Ragnarok 3: Prelude to Insanity

posted by thetacoman

This one's kinda, laugh at the chaos and death, y'know? NOT FOR THE EASILY SCARED *coughmomcough*
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The happy دوستوں roamed the streets painting the town red. یا crimsion, if آپ wanna be specific.
Estelle gave a child a plaything Seth had hidden a bomb in, and they ran off to avoid the loss of their kidneys.
Five منٹ later, BAM! Little girl blood covered them.
They continued on their rampage, slowly losing their grip on reality.
"Hey," کہا Seth as they strolled across a flaming alley munching on squeedley-spooches. "Lets have a contest! Whoever can make the most funny kill, wins!"
Estelle...

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.:The Wrath of the Glass Sword: Part 1 ~ From Diamonds and سونا to Homeless and Old:.

posted by PhoenixRoyale

“We all know about those days when criminals break lose at the most unexpected times. We all know about those crazy, insane, sometimes even psychotic people, that have the tendency to kill off many innocent beings for no apparent reason. But this woman…is no different.”
“She started off her childhood at a rough pace. She was a murderous demon, trapped in the soul of an innocent woman of age nineteen. Many spirits beyond the grave never understood the reason why they were killed off. She caused others to commit suicide, یا die of a broken heart.”
“She...

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.:The World is mine, and mine only:. ~Estelle The Rockstar

posted by PhoenixRoyale

The following مضمون is a story behind Estelle Potter and the brutal past that brought her to become a dark, unforgiving soul, along with an extreme sense of greed to take every sparkling jewel and evergreen dollar for herself.

There is also a twisted ending that آپ would never expect...

HINT: One of The Fifth Experiment characters is dead for the whole fanfiction and the official thing. And the 'Estelle being dead' statement that I told آپ in the fun facts was a lie. It is somebody else. I won't use that The Fifth Experiment Character, except in RPs.

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"Raaaaaaargh!"

Screams of terror came...

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ME GUSTA .:Epic boredom story:.

posted by IntrepidKeris

Random flashbacks about Bieber opinions:

~At School~
Syd: I hate him! He sounds like a girl!
Aly B: Me too.

~At friend's~
Izzy: Justin's so cute!
Bre: Yeah!

~At my house~
Me: I dunno if I like his singing یا not...
*finds Love Me سے طرف کی Justin Bieber*
...
*clicks* Me gusta.

*after brushing teeth*
I'm gonna finish my Gatorade!
*drinks*
FFFFFFFFTERRIBLE-but not as bad as مالٹا, نارنگی juice.

Yeah...super-duper bored...

OH! Btw, I'm thinkin' up an AWESOME new story! It's gonna be called...
The Christian Chronicles!
Yes, it is a Christianity-based story, about someone's struggle with faith and life. If آپ are offended سے طرف کی it, I suggest آپ not read it.

Cast:
Skiibe(skee-bee) Hone the Hedgehog
Angel Andrews the Wolf
Tibeste Marcus the Creature
Mint the Cat-Dragon-Dog
مزید chars to come! :D

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.:The Fifth Experiment: PREVIEW:. Nazo's Palace

posted by PhoenixRoyale

Another trailer? Yes indeed. :3 I have a new character, who works for Zak. His name is Nazo the Dark-Spotted Cheetah. Look for the image of him in this club--He is a distant relative of Shiro.

ON to the Preview.

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Myka peeked inside the door and saw a toasty little fireplace. She saw an unfamiliar figure who kind of looked like Shiro, but he was much taller, and had black spots. Half of his chest فر, سمور was black, the insides of his ears and tips of his bangs were black, and his hands were black, too. He was sitting on a leather chair, in front of the fire, his back to the door.

Myka tried to open...

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Aries Adventures Chapter 1 :The LATE beginning.

posted by nanacrystal

I stumbled Out of bed.

"7:30?!" I کہا to myself.

I was hopping on one foot trying to get my pants on. All i could hear was "Aries! Aries, آپ are going to be late for school!" That was my uncle tails.

"Uh.."I hesitated. I threw unfinished homework in my school bag.

I rushed downstairs and threw a piece of بیکن into my mouth. "Aries, Did آپ do your homework?" My uncle tried to ask. I tried to avoid being grounded.
"Uhh, cant talk, Got to go." I did not regret my previos تبصرہ and rushed out the door.

I ran as fast as I could. Which wasn't very fast compared to what my dad could run. I dont...

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Burning Shadows ~ PART 2

posted by PhoenixRoyale

Javinx

Vivina followed the blood to the back door and quickly ran down the steps. When she pushed the door that leads to outside, she bumped into someone and fell to the ground. She rubbed her head and got up. "Why don't آپ w--" she froze when she saw a black hedgehog with red eyes standing in front of her, with blue streaks.

"Why don't I what?" he کہا in a dark voice.

"N-nothing..." Vivina said, blushing.

"Who are you?" the hedgehog asked.

"V-Vivina...w-what about you...?" she asked.

"Javinx. I'm a vampire." he replied coolly.

Vivina jumped back. Her eyes turned red and her medieval flail flashed in....

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Ifuen the Hedgebat bio

posted by bustacap96

Forge, Ifuen
Rank: Sergeant
Date of Birth: February 3, 1987
Gender: Male
Species: Hedgehog/Bat mix
Height: 3'7
Weight: 55 lbs
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Blue

Ifuen, the de facto leader of Bravo Team, has always been a private man who keeps his pain to himself. But the strain of facing even مزید lethal enemies set on destroying humanity is starting to show. His nightmares are مزید frequent and filled with تصاویر of his late father and دوستوں he’s seen die. In Frostmourne 3 he learns a bittersweet secret about his father’s real fate that renews his determination to finish the Dragon Code and the...

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Jayde's Possession

posted by shadowgirl101

3 yrs after Jaydes disapearance, everyone had come to the conclusion that she was dead. Even
Kyron was convinced that she was dead, he gave up his chance of finding her. Then there came
a battle, between the gang and another gang, and they had brought a weapon that no one not
even Kyron expected. in the middle of the battle they had unleashed their secret weapon. It
was a girl that looked almost exactly like Jayde. Kyron stopped in his tracks. she was
unleashing her wrath on everyone. Kyron wanted to help her. But he knew he couldnt. he ran
towards her as she was killing gang members. with a deadly...

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A Phoęnix's Ash part two

posted by sierradawn9

Ash shot out of bed,panting.The nightmare still lingered in her head.It was still dark out,so she checked her alarm clock:3:33am.She had done it again.3:33am was about the same time she woke up from the nightmare last night,and the night before that and so on for about a month.She never bothered to tell anyone about it,thinking it would pass.She looked into the full-length mirror and screamed at her blood-red hair.It instantly changed back to jet black.She hyperventilated,wishing none of this terrible things would happen.The nightmares wouldn't happen after she fell asleep again,but they still...

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The Phoęnix's Ash part one

posted by sierradawn9

As the لومڑی noisily sloshed through the muck and rain,he thought of where he was going.The Science Centre,which was almost abandoned,except for the mad scientist he worked for.It had been closed down not even a ماہ ago,still in good shape,which is why Dr. فنچ inhabits it.Dr. فنچ was claimed to be the most insane man in the world, but the لومڑی wouldn't believe it.Never.
He knew he was close.He could already see the very سب, سب سے اوپر of the centre,a dark,metallic dome.The young لومڑی knew his mentor was working on a secret project,because even he wasn't allowed to see it.He had only caught glimpses...

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Random story part 1

posted by crystalstream

Now my children I will tell آپ about my old ہوم the kindom of the stars.Two generations پہلے there was a princess named Sorlina the cat she was a famous Blue-blood,she ruled the kindom of stars and one دن she fell into a river and a lone Blue-blood saved her,his name was Zero.They were دوستوں and when they got married they had three children named Thorn,Blaze,and Crystal.Both of them died on the دن of their birth,Blaze was taken to anlantis so she could be محفوظ from her parents murderer,Thorn and Crystal got stolen سے طرف کی the Nocturnas clan and that's where they grew up.Later on in life they...

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Typhoon the Hedgehog. Prt 1

posted by marksmen456

It was night,no sounds except crickets chirping,and a hedgehog was walking down a boardwalk,wearing a trench coat,he waalked into a warehouse,but then he heard guns cocking,and a command that کہا "STOP RIGHT WERE آپ ARE!" The hedgehog stared up,only too be surronded سے طرف کی G.U.N Agents. A soilder,possibly the captain,yelled out too the hedgehog,"Now,You are in restricted area! If آپ do not turn around and walk back from wince آپ cam-" His throat suddenly was SLICED OPEN,Spewing blood out the captain,fell down dead. The soilders fired at The Hedgehog,but the bullets seemed too be,DEFLECTEING...

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Anna the Hedgehog Love Part 3

posted by AmyRoseReal

Anna stared up at Shadow in shock. "You...you love me...?" Shadow put his hands off of her shoulders. "Yes...I wanted to tell آپ so badly...but that stupid butthole Jack was your boyfriend and I didn't want to tell آپ at the time," Shadow sighed. Anna kissed him again. "Well...I've pretty much always liked you." Shadow smiled. "Then we should get away from school and spend مزید time together." Shadow grinned. "What do آپ mean سے طرف کی that?" "I mean we should get expelled." Anna pushed him aside. "What?! No we're not going to do something like that, we won't be able to get into college!!" Shadow...

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TAW: Book 2, The Stones (TS) plot basis.

posted by MephilesTheDark

Hope آپ all like, this is the basic plot summery, give me your opinion in تبصرے and any critics, feel welcome to do your thing. This is pretty sketchy, so not big on the overall. It may not make sense to آپ peoples... But as said, I'm only putting this up to sort out my thoughts. :D SPOILER WARNING!

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Six stones, six diamonds, and six temple-shrines dating back to Ancient Egyptian times.

Ningizzida, Rath, Vren, Ra, Amun (daughter, not fox) Thoth, some old دوستوں and some new, finally come together with their old rivals, the American Marines....

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Lucifer the Dark پروفائل

posted by BeccaDaHedgehog

Lucifer the Dark

Nickname: Luck.
Species; Genetically altered Mobian African pygmy hedgehog-demon.
Name deprived from; link, god of hell, demon, Satan, devil, light-bearer, morning star, fallen angel.
Age: Unknown, ageless. Probably about 10 in the current timeline.

Theme Song: link

Lucifer was created as a back-up for the link, in case the original failed. In a way, آپ could say that this made Lucifer and Solaris ‘cousins’. Nicknamed ‘Project Lucifer’ after the Aztec Sun God. What the scientist’s didn’t count on, however, was for the Original link to end up killing majority of them....