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posted by TakTheFox
On this club, one of the biggest things people try to do is get noticed. We all want to دکھائیں our stories, our art, our ideas, etc. Most of the time, people will pay the most attention to the art, یا the roleplays. It is not very often that people will read other people’s fanfictions.

So why is this? Here’s a فہرست of reasons why people don’t read them, and reasons why people can get upset.
1.    Laziness. I think this is the largest. Now this branches off into a few other categories, but laziness is the big generalization of the bunch. People can either have problems reading, they are too busy, they have other stuff they want to do; this is the internet. It’s like ADHD with an on and off switch. It’s a constant entertainer, and many people want to do something that can completely fill their enjoyment. And reading something on a screen can be tiresome, so they might try it for a while, then stop because it’s simply too hard.
Solution: If someone asks آپ to read their story, either save the story to a personal file, and read it offline, so آپ aren’t distracted, یا print it so آپ can read it without the temptation of the computer.
2.    Lack of feedback. This is something I can relate to personally. A lot of the time I find myself assuming I have no readers, so I might complain a bit, یا a lot, only to find out later that people are reading, they just don’t comment.
Solution: The people that are reading the stories should either پرستار the story, یا تبصرہ about it. People won’t know you’re reading their stories if آپ don’t tell them.
3.    How it’s written.
Now this one is much longer.

Here’s a فہرست of the things that people in the general public do when writing.

1.    SHORT
Almost all the time I find stories that are half a page long at most. This kills a lot of the joy of reading because if آپ are able to get interested, the سیکنڈ آپ do, it suddenly stops, and آپ have to wait till the اگلے “chapter” is uploaded. And while we’re on that topic, why are they called chapters? In my opinion, chapters for stories should be AT LEAST two pages long, یا more. If they aren’t, they should be called “Scenes” یا “parts”. Otherwise it’s misleading.
2.    GRAMMAR AND COMPANY
Here we’ve got GRAMMAR, SPELLING, PARAGRAPHS, and. Most of the time these are all there together and not well done. The grammar I can live with most of the time, as it doesn’t make THAT big of an impact because آپ can usually tell what it was supposed to be like. But spelling and paragrphs make me stop reading stories all together.
When I see a sentence that goes “He flue up two da sky n a big plaen.” آپ know I’m not going to read it. If I see “He flew up to da sky in a big plane.” I STILL won’t read it most likely becaaaaaaaaaaaause “da”. When people replace “The” with “Dah”, “two” with “2”, یا “red” with “read” it shows that they weren’t trying. It makes it hard to follow and understand, and no one wants to read that.
When I say paragraphs, I should say paragraph, because it almost always means just ONE. If I see a story that goes.

“Stuff happens. مزید stuff happens. Fight fight fight. Stuff happens.”

I can barely keep up with the story. But if I see it spread out. “Stuff happens”
“More stuff happens.”
“Fight fight fight.”
“Stuff happens.”
I can actually tell that this has moved to a different scene, and that a different topic is in hand.

It’s like listening to someone saying everything in one sentence without spaces. “Iwanttogototheparktodaybutmydogissickandihavetotakecareofhim.” Imagine having to read an entire book put like that.

3.    Writing TYPE
WHY DO PEOPLE LIKE WRITING AS IF THE STORY WAS A ROLEPLAY? I DO NOT LIKE THESE! I DO NOT LIKE RP-STORIES AND HAM, SAM I AM! THESE ARE HARD TO READ! I’ve gotten to the point of laughter at these when I see something that goes *Uses ultra beam of wisdom and obliterates foe*. Wouldn’t it sound مزید epic if it was “Then in a single strike he fired his Ultra beam of Wisdom, obliterating his foe.” Either way sounds cheesy, but all I can picture when I see *does something* is an RPG game.

When آپ write, do NOT do this type of writing. Think to yourself “How would this look in a book?” and then write it.



4.    Common courtesy
If آپ want someone to read your story, and they do so, یا even if they don’t, take it upon yourself every time آپ ask someone to read your story, to read someone else’s and GIVE feedback. Nothing is gonna happen if we’re all just running around saying “Readmahstuffreadmahstuff!” then no one reading anyone’s. That’s kind of selfish don’t آپ think?

5.    AND ABOVE ALL BE PATIENT! DO NOT GET JEALOUS! Those people you’ve seen who always get their stories read and all; they didn’t start like that. They started just like you, learning how to write, and trying their best. No one read their stories at first, but over time, how many years-long it takes, آپ will get it read eventually. It just takes time.

No matter how good your ideas are, یا how epic your plots, they don’t matter AT ALL unless آپ can write them well. آپ could be the اگلے J.K Rowling, and write like a first-grader. People won’t care, and if they do, they won’t remember. I read people’s stories, I really do. But I can’t remember any of the plots because I was too busy trying to figure out what went where and not lose my place.


Hope that Helped, have any سوالات feel free to ask.

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posted by TakTheFox
This is just a little something to help people who ask for drawing requests get what they want.



Name:

Age:

Height (Go through Small, Medium Small, Medium, Medium Tall, Small Tall, Tall, Really Tall)

Eye Color:

Hair Color(s) (If any):

فر, سمور Color(s), which parts have which color:

CLOTHING

Head

Top

Bottom

Feet

Hands

Accessories (gun, jewelry, etc.):

Suggested pose:

Facial expression:

Draw یا describe anything آپ wish to be drawn in a specific way:

Image of character if possible:
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Note: Not a rant, just a quick heads up in case anyone wants me to “upgrade” after some point.

ONE: Expressing myself
I am much better at expressing myself through writing than when talking through a mic, which leads to other reasons which will be explained later. Also this means I would have to rehearse my lines over and over to make sure I got it right, which is tedious to me, and I do not wish to be bothered with doing that.

TWO: TIMING and BACKGROUND SOUND
My computer was moved to the Dining Room in my house, and my many siblings would definitely interrupt any speaking I’d be doing at...
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posted by TakTheFox
Okay, Sonic 06-bad game, Sonic-Drift (1 and 2)-bad, Sonic Free Riders-bad, Shadow the Hedgehog-bad, but in the long run THAT IS IT.

You could argue about Sonic Labyrinth and Sonic and the Secret Rings, but while those are not enjoyable, and yes Labyrinth is a bad game, those DID what they were meant to do.

When anyone talks about Sonic, they almost always say how “He may have terrible games.” یا “He’s been dead for a while.” یا “They’re only starting to revive him now.” یا even that he’s still dead and shouldn’t be brought back.

WHY DO آپ SAY THESE THINGS?! آپ want a list...
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Okay,So for those of آپ who seen the "What is the worst thing about the Sonic fanbase" سوال asked سے طرف کی Carbonite,Then I'm sure some of آپ seen what I said,I listed quite a couple things that I really dislike about this fandom,well I figure I go in a bit deeper just to point out what I dislike...so lets being,shall we?(Please note I won't be covering everything,just some of the key points)

Recolors

Ah yes,Recolors,A subject that is liked سے طرف کی some,hated سے طرف کی other...you may ask where do I stand?Well allow me to put it bluntly,I don't mind them...though I find it lazy,there is no creativity in...
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posted by RawrMonster123
I know آپ peeps are like "I DON'T CARE!", but I don't care I آپ don't care about why I'm not here a lot. If آپ don't care, obviously don't read this. If آپ care, which I think not a lot of peeps do, continue reading.

1.) There's nothing to do

I know there's plenty to do, but there's not stuff that I'm interested in doing here. It's kinda boring now. :T

2.) Stuff bugs me here

It makes me wanna just throw my phone across the room when I see this annoying stuff, such as when a certain person writes whatever's on their mind in the دیوار every. Since. Dang. Day.
For example:
DAY ONE: Hey, guys. I'm...
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I wrote the عنوان thingy in Japanese because...I wanted to XD

Anyways...

I won't be on Fanpop for quite a while, sadly. I've been very busy lately and I don't have the time for it. Nor do I have the time for Shock's club...much. I've been busy helping my family with moving and soon, I'll be in a new home. And as of tomorrow, I won't have ANY time for this sight. I have to stay busy in order to get things moved to the new house. I'll try to be on sometimes but...don't expect me to have much time to talk یا RP. I wont, sorry...

So tonight is the last u will hear from me for a while.

Later, dudes!