Ok so I'm not too good at reviews but lets see what I got.
Twlight:
The start of Twilight is the Cullens hunting I think that is a gret start but what could have been another great one? Maybe one of Alices visions یا Bellas nightmare? Then Bella digging a cactus I love it! I think it is something آپ woud do to have a little bit of ہوم with آپ and phil calling I love آپ both but we have a plane to catch sutch a typicall guy! Thenn when Bella was with charlie and they were talking about her hair growing so funny! Then when Bella hit Jake with the truck and didn't give a damn that was also funny. At school Jessica was so jaulous<- soz bout spelling. When she seen Edward in Biology آپ could feel the tension from then on. The baseball scene اگلے then..... With Rose and Emm so funny and cute but when the three others come up well آپ cant help but scream. Then the ballet scene soooo scary but I was so realived when Edward turned up and felt so sorry for him when he had to drink Bellas blood. The hospital was such a sweet scene. And finally PROM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 The best scene ever it was soo sweet!!
Twlight:
The start of Twilight is the Cullens hunting I think that is a gret start but what could have been another great one? Maybe one of Alices visions یا Bellas nightmare? Then Bella digging a cactus I love it! I think it is something آپ woud do to have a little bit of ہوم with آپ and phil calling I love آپ both but we have a plane to catch sutch a typicall guy! Thenn when Bella was with charlie and they were talking about her hair growing so funny! Then when Bella hit Jake with the truck and didn't give a damn that was also funny. At school Jessica was so jaulous<- soz bout spelling. When she seen Edward in Biology آپ could feel the tension from then on. The baseball scene اگلے then..... With Rose and Emm so funny and cute but when the three others come up well آپ cant help but scream. Then the ballet scene soooo scary but I was so realived when Edward turned up and felt so sorry for him when he had to drink Bellas blood. The hospital was such a sweet scene. And finally PROM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 The best scene ever it was soo sweet!!
Hello Everyone! I'm bringing another story that I'm writing called Bedroom Confessions! I'm posting the link, hoping آپ will take a look at it. This story is for mature audiences only as it contains violence and murder. 9 chapters & 487 reviews!
Summary: Edward was investigating the perfect murder. Part of his job was to protect the only witness's identity from the murderer. But can he control his feelings for her, and can he handle the secrets she hides? AH/AU;E/B
If آپ like this one, make sure to check out the other stories listed on my profile! Thanks, and I hope آپ enjoy it!
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Summary: Edward was investigating the perfect murder. Part of his job was to protect the only witness's identity from the murderer. But can he control his feelings for her, and can he handle the secrets she hides? AH/AU;E/B
If آپ like this one, make sure to check out the other stories listed on my profile! Thanks, and I hope آپ enjoy it!
Link---> link
With Eclipse on the horizon it would be fun to share our پسندیدہ Eclipse quotes. Quotes should be left as تبصرے and with a page number so we can all see them in context. So what is your پسندیدہ line in Eclipse?
I love it on page 58 when Bella is recalling watching Edward and Alice play chess: "Edward and Alice playing chess was one of the funniest things I'd ever seen. They'd sat there nearly motionless, staring at the board, while Alice foresaw the moves he would make and he picked the moves she would make in return out of her head. They played most of the game in their minds; I think they'd each moved two pawns when Alice suddenly flicked her king over and surrendered. It took all of three minutes."
I love it on page 58 when Bella is recalling watching Edward and Alice play chess: "Edward and Alice playing chess was one of the funniest things I'd ever seen. They'd sat there nearly motionless, staring at the board, while Alice foresaw the moves he would make and he picked the moves she would make in return out of her head. They played most of the game in their minds; I think they'd each moved two pawns when Alice suddenly flicked her king over and surrendered. It took all of three minutes."