Hey, can آپ guys rate AND comment? it's kind of annoying to have like 4 rates and 1 comment. So I don't know who is actualy rating. Thanks! (also Mary meets the Cullens here.)
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I watched the scenery fly by. So I could tell when she slowed and pulled off the road. Her eyes went blank, but still drove.
"What?"
"Nothing, just put these on." She threw me some clothes, that looked just like the ones she had on. Were we going to confuse her coven. I had the same jeans, shirt, jacket, hat, shoes, everything matched to hers. We looked so alike.
We even smelled the same. I doubted they could tell the difference. Following the long, windy drive we pulled infront of a huge white house. Someone came out the door, she looked nice.
Blonde hair, golden eyes, with jeans smeared with car grease. Alice told me to stay she got out and greeted the vampire as 'Rosalie'.
I could hear the conversation going on between them.
"Alice. We were so worried, Carlisle came ہوم without you, where did آپ go?"
"I had an unexpected visitor."
"You've never not 'seen' someone. Was it one of the werewolves?"
Werewolves?
"Nope. She did catch me off guard though. Mary!"
She turned towards me, wanting me to come out.
I took a deep breath and opened the dor, grabbing my binder of my drawings and pictures.
Rosalie gasped, then growled. Automaticly, I dropped the binder, and growled back. Years with the newborns tought me to react as they did.
I heard the door open and heard the doctor.
"Rosalie, Alice!" He called.
I shot a glance to Alice, Rosalie, then the Dr.
How many vampires were here?
"Alice, why is there two of you? Rosalie." I straightned up.
"I'm not Alice, kind of."
He looked confused.
Me, Alice, and Rosalie followed him inside. I pulled the ڈاکو, ہڈ and hat off, دکھانا that my hair was longer.
"I'm Mary Alice Brandon. I'm named after my aunt."
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I watched the scenery fly by. So I could tell when she slowed and pulled off the road. Her eyes went blank, but still drove.
"What?"
"Nothing, just put these on." She threw me some clothes, that looked just like the ones she had on. Were we going to confuse her coven. I had the same jeans, shirt, jacket, hat, shoes, everything matched to hers. We looked so alike.
We even smelled the same. I doubted they could tell the difference. Following the long, windy drive we pulled infront of a huge white house. Someone came out the door, she looked nice.
Blonde hair, golden eyes, with jeans smeared with car grease. Alice told me to stay she got out and greeted the vampire as 'Rosalie'.
I could hear the conversation going on between them.
"Alice. We were so worried, Carlisle came ہوم without you, where did آپ go?"
"I had an unexpected visitor."
"You've never not 'seen' someone. Was it one of the werewolves?"
Werewolves?
"Nope. She did catch me off guard though. Mary!"
She turned towards me, wanting me to come out.
I took a deep breath and opened the dor, grabbing my binder of my drawings and pictures.
Rosalie gasped, then growled. Automaticly, I dropped the binder, and growled back. Years with the newborns tought me to react as they did.
I heard the door open and heard the doctor.
"Rosalie, Alice!" He called.
I shot a glance to Alice, Rosalie, then the Dr.
How many vampires were here?
"Alice, why is there two of you? Rosalie." I straightned up.
"I'm not Alice, kind of."
He looked confused.
Me, Alice, and Rosalie followed him inside. I pulled the ڈاکو, ہڈ and hat off, دکھانا that my hair was longer.
"I'm Mary Alice Brandon. I'm named after my aunt."
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Danie turned into a blob of سیب, ایپل sauce, then shape-shifted back into a human. "There" She said.
"Hey Erin! So I see آپ got my text."
"Yeah! Congrats! آپ have to tell me all about this Parick."
"No, آپ tell me about آپ being part of the Volturi."
"How did آپ know?"
"Well me being a vamp and everything, I get one power which is shape-shifting."
"What does that have to do with it?"
"Oh nothing I just needed to tell you."
"Ok, how did آپ find out?"
"Your friend Alice told me."
"Oh,ok. Yeah, so آپ know my dad is Aro and my little sister is Jane."
"I didn't even know that!" Alice said."Why didn't آپ tell me?"
"I wasn't ready to yet."
"Erin, آپ are my best friend; I tell آپ everything, آپ should tell me the same."
"Ok,sorry."
"It's fine. Now come on, let's go shopping for your friend's big day."
"Ok, let's go."
Two hours later, Alice, Erin, and Danie were still roaming around when they found the "perfect dress".
"Hey Erin! So I see آپ got my text."
"Yeah! Congrats! آپ have to tell me all about this Parick."
"No, آپ tell me about آپ being part of the Volturi."
"How did آپ know?"
"Well me being a vamp and everything, I get one power which is shape-shifting."
"What does that have to do with it?"
"Oh nothing I just needed to tell you."
"Ok, how did آپ find out?"
"Your friend Alice told me."
"Oh,ok. Yeah, so آپ know my dad is Aro and my little sister is Jane."
"I didn't even know that!" Alice said."Why didn't آپ tell me?"
"I wasn't ready to yet."
"Erin, آپ are my best friend; I tell آپ everything, آپ should tell me the same."
"Ok,sorry."
"It's fine. Now come on, let's go shopping for your friend's big day."
"Ok, let's go."
Two hours later, Alice, Erin, and Danie were still roaming around when they found the "perfect dress".
1.Erin is part of the Volturi, but she is half human-Spoiler!
2.not everything will be exactly like the books,it will be dramatized a little.
3.Erin is my best friend in real life, so I try to make her as realistic as possible.
4.This one is مزید about me:I don't like cussing in my stories because I don't cuss a lot in real life, but it makes my stories funnier,agree?
5.We might make a movie out of this when we are done-Spoiler!
6.Erin was telling me about one of her friends, Danie, and she might be in a few chapters-Spoiler!
7.Erin tries to kill Alice later in the story-Spoiler!
EDward took off his shirt.His abs were hawt.I then went under the covers.I then felt his cool skin agaisnt mine.
U sure Soph
yes
I felt it the sex of course
I then felt my neck being nibbled
Edward! damn that hurt
I the nsaw it wasn't edward
J-J-J James.
Oh don't worry love آپ will be one of us
No where the hell is edward
well the volturi is dealing with the Cullens
I will kill you
Just give up آپ know tat it will spread
It's burns STOP IT IT BURNS.I then felt my death.
My دل beat sronger than usual.I felt sclience.
ALl in my دل was vengence on James on The Volturi Adn on the werewolves!....
U sure Soph
yes
I felt it the sex of course
I then felt my neck being nibbled
Edward! damn that hurt
I the nsaw it wasn't edward
J-J-J James.
Oh don't worry love آپ will be one of us
No where the hell is edward
well the volturi is dealing with the Cullens
I will kill you
Just give up آپ know tat it will spread
It's burns STOP IT IT BURNS.I then felt my death.
My دل beat sronger than usual.I felt sclience.
ALl in my دل was vengence on James on The Volturi Adn on the werewolves!....
ok, i know she loves both but its probably ovious who she loves more, but im not sure is it edward یا jacob.
i think that if she chooses edward like she did in eclipse, there will be pain for not being with jake, but she already went through not being with edward and it almost killed her, and at the end of elcipse she had pain but it wasnt as bad. like she کہا when edward asked her,
" are آپ sure آپ made the right choice, i have never seen آپ in so much pain"
and she says "I have known worse pain"
does that mean, the worse pain was when edward left her
does anyone get what im trying to ask, if not ill try to explain better
i think that if she chooses edward like she did in eclipse, there will be pain for not being with jake, but she already went through not being with edward and it almost killed her, and at the end of elcipse she had pain but it wasnt as bad. like she کہا when edward asked her,
" are آپ sure آپ made the right choice, i have never seen آپ in so much pain"
and she says "I have known worse pain"
does that mean, the worse pain was when edward left her
does anyone get what im trying to ask, if not ill try to explain better