Ok heres the start of my new fanfiction. Enjoy.XX
I dropped the gun to the floor. I was thirsty enough not to care about what Kate would say; she needed to get a life. I mean she seriously needed to get a life. She lived off reading about the deaths her crew committed. I sprung out of the درخت landing neatly on my feet.
“Who...” The woman asked.
“Shhhh...I won’t hurt you.” What a lie I thought to myself trying to keep the smile off my face.
“What...what do آپ want of me?” She stuttered. I instantly flashed to her side, taking her hand leaning closer to her.
“I won’t hurt you.” I whispered again in her ear.
“What are you? Who are you?” She asked her voice getting slightly stronger.
“No-one آپ need to worry about.” I کہا as my teeth sliced through her neck. She didn’t scream, she didn’t have time. After a سیکنڈ she was drained and I wasn’t anywhere near satisfied. But then I hadn’t hunted for about three weeks. This was the only week I had time to get away from the rest of them so I could hunt. They didn’t know I was a vampire, not even Kate. And for me to keep something to myself was a real accomplishment.
I suddenly realised I wasn’t alone.
“Carlisle be careful.” A female voice hissed.
“I’ll be fine Rosalie.” I picked up the gun again just to be on the محفوظ side, holding it in both hands, finger on the trigger.
A blonde haired, young looking male stepped out from behind a tree, and raised his hands in the air.
“I don’t mean any harm.” He said, taking in my stance and the gun. I took a breath in and sure enough he was vampire and there were three others with him.
One was a کیریمل, کآرامال haired woman, the others where a Long, blonde haired female and A muscular looking man with short dark hair.
“What’s آپ name sweetie?” The کیریمل, کآرامال coloured hair one asked.
“Phoebe King” I کہا lowering the gun as it wasn’t going to do any harm to them.
“This is the one Alice sent us for.” The dark haired one whispered while I stood there utterly confused.
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I dropped the gun to the floor. I was thirsty enough not to care about what Kate would say; she needed to get a life. I mean she seriously needed to get a life. She lived off reading about the deaths her crew committed. I sprung out of the درخت landing neatly on my feet.
“Who...” The woman asked.
“Shhhh...I won’t hurt you.” What a lie I thought to myself trying to keep the smile off my face.
“What...what do آپ want of me?” She stuttered. I instantly flashed to her side, taking her hand leaning closer to her.
“I won’t hurt you.” I whispered again in her ear.
“What are you? Who are you?” She asked her voice getting slightly stronger.
“No-one آپ need to worry about.” I کہا as my teeth sliced through her neck. She didn’t scream, she didn’t have time. After a سیکنڈ she was drained and I wasn’t anywhere near satisfied. But then I hadn’t hunted for about three weeks. This was the only week I had time to get away from the rest of them so I could hunt. They didn’t know I was a vampire, not even Kate. And for me to keep something to myself was a real accomplishment.
I suddenly realised I wasn’t alone.
“Carlisle be careful.” A female voice hissed.
“I’ll be fine Rosalie.” I picked up the gun again just to be on the محفوظ side, holding it in both hands, finger on the trigger.
A blonde haired, young looking male stepped out from behind a tree, and raised his hands in the air.
“I don’t mean any harm.” He said, taking in my stance and the gun. I took a breath in and sure enough he was vampire and there were three others with him.
One was a کیریمل, کآرامال haired woman, the others where a Long, blonde haired female and A muscular looking man with short dark hair.
“What’s آپ name sweetie?” The کیریمل, کآرامال coloured hair one asked.
“Phoebe King” I کہا lowering the gun as it wasn’t going to do any harm to them.
“This is the one Alice sent us for.” The dark haired one whispered while I stood there utterly confused.
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I personal would like to just speak my mind. To all of آپ don't want her to be Jane, I guess I understand. But, I like Dakota Fanning. She's a great actress and I think she'd be great. Here are some reasons why I want he to be Jane.
1. She's been in TONS of movies, so she has experience.
2. She looks the role (In my opinion.)
3. She in "Push" so I would think she has some experience with things like New Moon (and the rest).
4. She's always the good-girl. For once she should be bad.
Those are only some that I can think of at the moment.
If آپ don't want her to be, I respect that. Also, if آپ think that, leave a تبصرہ saying why یا why not please!
Also, if آپ actually read this:
Thanks!
1. She's been in TONS of movies, so she has experience.
2. She looks the role (In my opinion.)
3. She in "Push" so I would think she has some experience with things like New Moon (and the rest).
4. She's always the good-girl. For once she should be bad.
Those are only some that I can think of at the moment.
If آپ don't want her to be, I respect that. Also, if آپ think that, leave a تبصرہ saying why یا why not please!
Also, if آپ actually read this:
Thanks!
1. He tells her to stay away from him.
2. She says shes not afraid of him.
3. He lets her cry on his شرٹ, قمیض and ruin it.
4. He just wants her to be happy.
5. She trusts him.
6. He didn't kill her
7. When the car threatened to crush her all he could think was "Not her"
8. The lion fell in love with the lamb.
9. He left her only for her protection.
10. He won't end her life for her.
11. He took her to the prom because he did't want her to miss anything.
12. He feels very protective of her.
13. He risked blowing the family secret to save her.
14. He is her "Prisoner".
15. He dazzles her.
16. She doesn't care that he is a "Killer".
17. He sayed with her in the Hospital
18. He watches her sleep.
19. She always forgives him.
20. He کبوتر her ہوم when she felt sick.
2. She says shes not afraid of him.
3. He lets her cry on his شرٹ, قمیض and ruin it.
4. He just wants her to be happy.
5. She trusts him.
6. He didn't kill her
7. When the car threatened to crush her all he could think was "Not her"
8. The lion fell in love with the lamb.
9. He left her only for her protection.
10. He won't end her life for her.
11. He took her to the prom because he did't want her to miss anything.
12. He feels very protective of her.
13. He risked blowing the family secret to save her.
14. He is her "Prisoner".
15. He dazzles her.
16. She doesn't care that he is a "Killer".
17. He sayed with her in the Hospital
18. He watches her sleep.
19. She always forgives him.
20. He کبوتر her ہوم when she felt sick.