All right guys, as آپ all have probably noticed my last chapter was a bit of a dozer, but don't worry my اگلے chapter will be right. And just incase that آپ have not figured it out yet. Most was the chapter is correct except for the bit about going into the car. That bit will be coming up in the اگلے chapter. Also don't be afraid to give me any advice on how I can make my writing Better any critasim is welcome.
On another note this whole story will only be گھنٹی, بیل as ok and I will be doing other stories that will be like this one but indifferent povs
SOS
Love flynnismine
On another note this whole story will only be گھنٹی, بیل as ok and I will be doing other stories that will be like this one but indifferent povs
SOS
Love flynnismine
Renesme's POV
I laughed, Jacob was a great guy and very funny. I loved him, I mean who wouldnt?! He's cute smart, Buff, and Funny. I think even mom has a crush on him! "Ness!"Jacob shouted/laughed. "Huh? Oh I'm sorry jacob what were آپ saying?" I dumbfoundly asked. "I کہا do آپ want to go to رات کے کھانے, شام کا کھانا with me on friday?" He smiled. "I would love to! But I have to ask my mom and dad... My dad will probably say no.. He dosnt like you" "I know, call me ok?" He ask's. "Okay!" I say cheerfully.
1 گھنٹہ later.
"Mom, Can I ask آپ something?" I dubiously said. "Sure hunny" Then mom put down the paper and gave me a warm smile. "Well آپ see jacob kinda asked me out on a date." "Really? Well I would say yes but the final desicion is up to your dad" She کہا seriously. I sighed, I then sent mom a mind message saying, "I know".
I laughed, Jacob was a great guy and very funny. I loved him, I mean who wouldnt?! He's cute smart, Buff, and Funny. I think even mom has a crush on him! "Ness!"Jacob shouted/laughed. "Huh? Oh I'm sorry jacob what were آپ saying?" I dumbfoundly asked. "I کہا do آپ want to go to رات کے کھانے, شام کا کھانا with me on friday?" He smiled. "I would love to! But I have to ask my mom and dad... My dad will probably say no.. He dosnt like you" "I know, call me ok?" He ask's. "Okay!" I say cheerfully.
1 گھنٹہ later.
"Mom, Can I ask آپ something?" I dubiously said. "Sure hunny" Then mom put down the paper and gave me a warm smile. "Well آپ see jacob kinda asked me out on a date." "Really? Well I would say yes but the final desicion is up to your dad" She کہا seriously. I sighed, I then sent mom a mind message saying, "I know".