my drawings 3

The اگلے few nights Moonstar was disturbed سے طرف کی the same dream. It was the night of the gathering and I still wanted to stay in the warm moss and feathers of my nest and have Jaycloud beside me to keep me warm. I got up and opened my eyes and it was barely dawn. I got up without stirring Jaycloud. I looked out the entrance of my ماند, خلوت خانہ and looked out at the clearing before me cats coming in from dawn patrol, I saw the nursery become alive with the faint shrieks of playing kits. I walked out of my den. Lightheart was padding up to me. "Morning Moonstar I have something to tell you." I nodded at him...

Hi! I'm Cedarstorm, یا Cedar. I'm an artist and writer, and this مضمون is for people who are just beginning writing- and have no idea what to do. Let's talk cats.

First, the cats in the Warriors series aren't spelled like "FireStar", "Fire Star", یا "Fire star". They're spelt as though it is one word; "Firestar". Many people don't study the کتابیں enough to write the names like that.
Second, the cat's don't just walk. They limp, stumble, pad, dash, and bound through the forest, tails streamed out behind them.
"Cedarstorm dashed through the dense wood, dodging branches and leaping over rocks."...

Okay i think Hollys still alive so i want to write this about Hollyleaf its the first chapter tell me if آپ like it and ill write more!(I tryed to make the Rats names Stuipied سے طرف کی the way and slso i LOVEEEE گلہری, جائے وقوع AND LEAF!!!!)
---Chapter 1---
Hollyleafs eyes whent wide and claped her paws.
"E-e-eating g-g-good t-t-tonight"eyes titches as she drags a مچھلی from the river to the portected ماند, خلوت خانہ from teh flood the rats all whent around her and she hissed
"GET!!! GET!!!Hollystar eats first"chuckles evil as the rats run away she hade named everyone and she was leader of them she took a bite of the...