~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Chaper 1 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
" Mom, why did آپ and Papa get divorced?" asked Lydia. Miss. Pheonix sighed. She waited a few سیکنڈ till she replied," Sweet heart, if I tell you, آپ shall not tell anyone ok?" Lydia nodded."Well it's a pretty simple story. I'll try to tell it in a short way as possible. Papa and I got divorced beacausehe fell in love with another girl." کہا Miss. Pheonix. "But Mother! I'm old enough to know more!" pleaded Lydia. Ms. Pheonix shook her head slowly. Lydia left the room quietly and slowly walked to her room. Lydia was already 16 now and her mom thought she still wasn't mature enough. She sat on her bed. Suddenly, a girl appeared to her. "Who are you? Why are آپ here?" asked Lydia. "I'm Enchantical Essence. A fairy to be exact.Who are you?" کہا the girl."I'm Lydia Pheonix. Now why are آپ in my room?!"........
TO BE CONTINUED
" Mom, why did آپ and Papa get divorced?" asked Lydia. Miss. Pheonix sighed. She waited a few سیکنڈ till she replied," Sweet heart, if I tell you, آپ shall not tell anyone ok?" Lydia nodded."Well it's a pretty simple story. I'll try to tell it in a short way as possible. Papa and I got divorced beacausehe fell in love with another girl." کہا Miss. Pheonix. "But Mother! I'm old enough to know more!" pleaded Lydia. Ms. Pheonix shook her head slowly. Lydia left the room quietly and slowly walked to her room. Lydia was already 16 now and her mom thought she still wasn't mature enough. She sat on her bed. Suddenly, a girl appeared to her. "Who are you? Why are آپ here?" asked Lydia. "I'm Enchantical Essence. A fairy to be exact.Who are you?" کہا the girl."I'm Lydia Pheonix. Now why are آپ in my room?!"........
TO BE CONTINUED
Okay, well I want to start writing a Fantasy Book, and I have come up with a couple starting sentences, but I can't think which one I should start with, please give me your honest opinion on which one I should start with......
1. Mr.Johnson's math class joined together in room B3, and sat down at their desks like any other day, but it was anything but that.
2. Once upon a time, there was a school in Grand Rapids, called St. James and thats where our story begins.
3. The school دن at St. James in Grand Rapids started out like any other دن for the kids of Mr. Johnsons math class.
4. Our story begins with room B3, a classroom in St. James in Grand Rapids.
1. Mr.Johnson's math class joined together in room B3, and sat down at their desks like any other day, but it was anything but that.
2. Once upon a time, there was a school in Grand Rapids, called St. James and thats where our story begins.
3. The school دن at St. James in Grand Rapids started out like any other دن for the kids of Mr. Johnsons math class.
4. Our story begins with room B3, a classroom in St. James in Grand Rapids.