ارے guys!Okay,my friend is writing a vampire series(please don't judge it yet)and she doesn't know whether یا not to keep writing.I'm gonna post these stories on here and can آپ please تبصرہ on whether یا not she should keep writing.BTW,it is supposed to be weird,strange,crazy,stupid,funny,ect.
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Hey,my name is Allie and I'm in high school.I'm 17 and have this weird secret...i'm a vampire.
I can't live a normal life because everytime i get close to a human,i start to smell their blood.I try to resist,but sometimes i can't
I really like this guy,Nick,but I think it would be weird if we were in the middle of a تاریخ and I'm sitting there sucking his blood.Yeah,creepy.
Well,I go to Emmett High School in Aliceville.I live with my mom and stepdad.My mom and dad know my secret,but my stepdad doesn't.
I really wish I could just live normal.I want to have a boyfriend and normal friends.
My best friend is Rosalie.
So مزید about Nick.He is handsome,has a face of an angel.Hi is SO hot.
I really like him but I don't think he feels the same way.
Well,I'd better get to school.I walked into my 1st period class,Mr.Cullen's.This is my class with Nick.I took my نشست اگلے to him.
The گھنٹی, بیل rang and I walked to Mrs.Lovato's class.
"I hope I pass this test,"I کہا to Nick.
"Me too.Hey,do آپ want to go out sometime?"I heard him say.
"Are آپ talking to me?"I asked him.
"Yeah,what about Friday?"
"Umm"Oh,no.I can't.I could kill him."Sorry,I've got plans."
"Oh,O.K. I don't mind being rejected."
"Oh,no.That's not it.Rosalie and I are gonna have a G.N.O."I turned around and worked on the test.
The اگلے day,me and rosalie saw twilight.I couldn't take my mind off of nick.
Maybe I could just try to go out with him.If it didn't work out,I wouldn't try again.
When I got home,I called him."So,how about that date?"
"Oh,how about tommorrow?I'll pick آپ up at seven.We'll eat at ٹیکو Bella's."He got off the phone and probably started working on his abs.He is so SPICY.
So the اگلے night,we were eating at ٹیکو Bella's.He gave me a present.It was a dog.He was as white as Casper the Ghost,so I named him Jasper.he was so cute!
When I took Jasper ہوم he WENT on my bed.I don't use it anyways.Since I'm a vampire and all.
I called Nick the اگلے day.He was crabby.Said something about getting food poisining."Worst sushi tacos ever,"He mumbled.
Later,Rosalie came over to my house to watch a movie.Then out of nowhere I SMELLED it.The blood.It smeled so good.
So it happened.I bit her.I had to taste it.She screamed but I couldn't stop.
Then,all my nightmares came true.Nick walked in"AAAAUUUUUUUUUGGGGGHHHHH!!!"He pulled me off.
Nick took Rosalie to the hospital.They کہا she would be fine.I hope so.
He came back and said,"So that's why آپ didn't want to go out."
"Yes,please don't tell anyone.Though I'd rather tell EVERYONE my secret to have a chance with you."
"I won't tell.I told the doctor she hit her head on a hammer."
"They believed you?"
"Yep,and I like you,too."
I smiled."Come on.I need to دکھائیں آپ something."I took him to my room.
He looked around."Umm,Jasper took a dump on your bed."
"I know I don't sleep,anyway.
"Right.I'm still getting used to having a vampire for a girl friend."He said,ever so casually.
"Girl friend?!?!?"
"Oh,so آپ don't want to be my girl friend?That's fine.There's always Taylor.She's hot."
"Well,Zack is spicier than you"We both laughed.
We went to see a movie the اگلے weekend.I thought Nick was going to kiss me but he didn't.Boo-Hoo.But he did kiss me when he dropped me off at my house...on the cheek,but it counts.I think we're gonna have a good relationship.
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Hey,my name is Allie and I'm in high school.I'm 17 and have this weird secret...i'm a vampire.
I can't live a normal life because everytime i get close to a human,i start to smell their blood.I try to resist,but sometimes i can't
I really like this guy,Nick,but I think it would be weird if we were in the middle of a تاریخ and I'm sitting there sucking his blood.Yeah,creepy.
Well,I go to Emmett High School in Aliceville.I live with my mom and stepdad.My mom and dad know my secret,but my stepdad doesn't.
I really wish I could just live normal.I want to have a boyfriend and normal friends.
My best friend is Rosalie.
So مزید about Nick.He is handsome,has a face of an angel.Hi is SO hot.
I really like him but I don't think he feels the same way.
Well,I'd better get to school.I walked into my 1st period class,Mr.Cullen's.This is my class with Nick.I took my نشست اگلے to him.
The گھنٹی, بیل rang and I walked to Mrs.Lovato's class.
"I hope I pass this test,"I کہا to Nick.
"Me too.Hey,do آپ want to go out sometime?"I heard him say.
"Are آپ talking to me?"I asked him.
"Yeah,what about Friday?"
"Umm"Oh,no.I can't.I could kill him."Sorry,I've got plans."
"Oh,O.K. I don't mind being rejected."
"Oh,no.That's not it.Rosalie and I are gonna have a G.N.O."I turned around and worked on the test.
The اگلے day,me and rosalie saw twilight.I couldn't take my mind off of nick.
Maybe I could just try to go out with him.If it didn't work out,I wouldn't try again.
When I got home,I called him."So,how about that date?"
"Oh,how about tommorrow?I'll pick آپ up at seven.We'll eat at ٹیکو Bella's."He got off the phone and probably started working on his abs.He is so SPICY.
So the اگلے night,we were eating at ٹیکو Bella's.He gave me a present.It was a dog.He was as white as Casper the Ghost,so I named him Jasper.he was so cute!
When I took Jasper ہوم he WENT on my bed.I don't use it anyways.Since I'm a vampire and all.
I called Nick the اگلے day.He was crabby.Said something about getting food poisining."Worst sushi tacos ever,"He mumbled.
Later,Rosalie came over to my house to watch a movie.Then out of nowhere I SMELLED it.The blood.It smeled so good.
So it happened.I bit her.I had to taste it.She screamed but I couldn't stop.
Then,all my nightmares came true.Nick walked in"AAAAUUUUUUUUUGGGGGHHHHH!!!"He pulled me off.
Nick took Rosalie to the hospital.They کہا she would be fine.I hope so.
He came back and said,"So that's why آپ didn't want to go out."
"Yes,please don't tell anyone.Though I'd rather tell EVERYONE my secret to have a chance with you."
"I won't tell.I told the doctor she hit her head on a hammer."
"They believed you?"
"Yep,and I like you,too."
I smiled."Come on.I need to دکھائیں آپ something."I took him to my room.
He looked around."Umm,Jasper took a dump on your bed."
"I know I don't sleep,anyway.
"Right.I'm still getting used to having a vampire for a girl friend."He said,ever so casually.
"Girl friend?!?!?"
"Oh,so آپ don't want to be my girl friend?That's fine.There's always Taylor.She's hot."
"Well,Zack is spicier than you"We both laughed.
We went to see a movie the اگلے weekend.I thought Nick was going to kiss me but he didn't.Boo-Hoo.But he did kiss me when he dropped me off at my house...on the cheek,but it counts.I think we're gonna have a good relationship.
Prologue Look at the world, yeah go on and look at it. Now tell me, What do آپ see? Home? Life? Secrets? Death? Anything? Well most people always see it differently. But they never see what’s right in front of them.
When آپ look at the world آپ always see the small things. آپ never see the big obvious things that lurk in the shadows of every dark corner .
Well some of us see it, others… don’t. You’d be surprised سے طرف کی ever secret, every hidden thing yet to be discovered… یا never will.
And I know we shouldn’t be telling you, but آپ ought to know.
So look at the world, that’s right look at it. Because it’s going to change forever…
When آپ look at the world آپ always see the small things. آپ never see the big obvious things that lurk in the shadows of every dark corner .
Well some of us see it, others… don’t. You’d be surprised سے طرف کی ever secret, every hidden thing yet to be discovered… یا never will.
And I know we shouldn’t be telling you, but آپ ought to know.
So look at the world, that’s right look at it. Because it’s going to change forever…
Okay this fits to be مضمون worthy. I have this budding idea for a story about a girl named Skye(real named skylar) who discovers that she and her two دوستوں are Sirens ( a different kind than آپ think). They all have ibdividual powers like Skye can use other peoples power, Hazelle and Gabriel,s powers are conjuring آگ کے, آگ and Hazelle can shapeshift objects. Their parents were دوستوں and there dads, and hazelle and gabriel have one parent while skye has none, she lives with her aunt and she has this lost sister who thinks she is a Siren but is their kinds' enemy. Meanwhile Hazelle and Gabriel are dating but skye and him are close because their moms were دوستوں and wjen her parents died she lived with them for a while as kids. So eventually they like each other. This story is confusing and jeeds work but its what i have. Tell me should i tweek it یا leave it alone. Also give me insight into what to do to fix it. Thanks.
Falling...
Sometimes she’s down سے طرف کی the river
یا other times سے طرف کی her tree
Sometimes she thinks about the things she can never see
But when the rain falls down, she’d cry
There’s no reason why
She’s always walked alone
No one’s ever shared her ride
No one’s ever felt close to her, no one’s ever سے طرف کی her side
She’s avoided سے طرف کی everyone
And never has any fun
Now darkness is her favourite thing
She thinks there’s no hope
No on ever throws her a rope
When she’s falling…
Sometimes she’s down سے طرف کی the river
یا other times سے طرف کی her tree
Sometimes she thinks about the things she can never see
But when the rain falls down, she’d cry
There’s no reason why
She’s always walked alone
No one’s ever shared her ride
No one’s ever felt close to her, no one’s ever سے طرف کی her side
She’s avoided سے طرف کی everyone
And never has any fun
Now darkness is her favourite thing
She thinks there’s no hope
No on ever throws her a rope
When she’s falling…
