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Okay don't be hating on me for this, I'm not trying to start a fight. I just think that we'd all be better off if we at least read these and thought about them, even if just for a second. I'm gonna say this right now: these are not cut-and-dry rules. سے طرف کی no means am I forcing آپ to follow them, and there will be exceptions. These are just suggestions, on how to make your OCs well liked and better off. So, with that being said, in no particular order, here are 15 suggestions for making good OCs.
1. Ask yourself if making a new OC is really necessary.. Don't contribute to the overcrowding unless آپ truly believe that the club will be improved with the addition of this character. It helps if the new character has some relation to one of your existing characters, but it's not necessary.
2. Write something about them before آپ start posting. It can be as little as a bio, یا as big as an entire مضمون series, but whatever the case, your character will generally be better recieved if we feel like we know them a little bit first.
3. Don't go overboard with the powers. I'd say no مزید than 5 distinct powers, otherwise it gets to be overwhelming and annoying if your character can do everything. No one likes the character that, whatever situation he یا she is in, can pull out another trick out of his یا her hat.
4. If آپ absolutely must give your character tons of powers, then give them 1 to 3 "favorite powers". It's much less annoying if your character usually only uses a couple of his یا her powers, as opposed to all 20.
5. Make their powers related. It drives people nuts when your character has thirty different powers that are completely random and unrelated to each other. They should be logically connected. For example, my OC Jackson (Thunderblade). His main power is communication with metal, and his other two powers, swordfighting and magnetism, logically stem from that.
6. Hero names should have some relation to them and/or their powers. There are exceptions, but still. It's confusing when آپ have, say, BlackCat whose powers are flight and telepathy. It just doesn't make sense.
7. Try not to copy others directly.. Yes, yes, I know, imitation is the highest form of flattery, but no one likes a deliberate copycat. That seems to be a trend with this group. One character gets pregnant, and the اگلے دن you've got 3 other OCs that are preggo. One person creates a child that has some relation to their OC, and before we know it, the cave has turned into a daycare center.
8. Appearance and pets should, again, be related to their powers. Pets can be great when they are a familiar, that either has powers of its own یا is linked to the character. And my biggest example of the appearance thing is the حالیہ outcropping of characters with cat ears and sometimes tails. Those are fine when they're actually related to their powers (if they have catlike senses, for example, یا claws) but it's just annoying when they're completely unrelated.
9. Don't kill your character without a good reason. If آپ must kill your character, at least do it dramatically! And give a reason for why they must die! Don't just do it for attention, یا so that your other characters have a reason to moan and be depressed.
10. Don't reincarnate your character unless necessary and justified. Which it usually isn't. But there are exceptions. And if آپ do provide a good reason, at least make it a process that takes up time. For example, when Fin was killed, it was logical that she would be reincarnated, since she was part phoenix. And it didn't happen overnight. It took a couple months for her to come back.
11. Don't make your character completely invincible. Your character can have limited invulnerability, kind of like Superman, but they can't be completely resistant to death and damage. Make it realistic, people! Even superheroes couldn't get shot یا stabbed in the heart, then pop up منٹ later completely fine, like nothing had happened.
12. Give your character a unique personality. Put simply, don't make them dull یا flat. This goes back to the idea that a new OC should be making some sort of contribution to the group. It's a lot better if their personality affects the others in some way.
13. Give your character some weaknesses and/or flaws. Preferably both of them. That's all I can say.
14. Be careful if making your character related to یا dating a canon character.. Make sure that it's realistic and not annoying. Same goes with if they're related to یا dating another OC, especially if that OC was not created سے طرف کی you.
15. Make sure your character isn't a Mary Sue. No one likes a Mary Sue. link Mary Sues are honestly, just plain annoying. I'm not saying that if your existing character has some elements of "Sue-ism" that they're bad and need to be changed, but try to keep it in mind for new characters. If your not sure if your existing یا potential character is a Mary Sue, یا if آپ suspect he/she is, but don't know how to change it, آپ can take link. If آپ want, آپ can post the results here (Aisling got a 19, in case آپ were curious, which آپ probably weren't...).
So, that's all I have for now. Rage on me all آپ want, but just know that I don't care. Once again, سے طرف کی no means do آپ have to follow these. They aren't rules, merely a few suggestions.
For now,
AislingYJ :)
posted by Robin_Love
 Notte
Notte
Name: Dylan Spade
Alias: Notte
Occupation: Hero
Powers: Flight, shadows, dark energy, telekinesis, hand-to-hand combat, scythe
History: Dylan was born a mutant; یا so he was told. He had white wings and as a neko. He lived in an orphanage and grew up there. Those times were not happy and he found ways to keep himself from harm. He was taught many things, one of those being how to defend himself. Dylan was an expert with a scythe, a master in hand-to-hand combat, an ace flier, and able to control his powers at all times. When he was ten, Dylan fled. There were so many against him and his kind that...
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
Sorry for posting so much, but this is it for another two یا so weeks.

Ayo, so, I'm back.. Which آپ probably gathered that.. Well, a few characters need to go, and I'll add a few, only because they're important. I wanna write this huge پرستار fiction with many chapters, but idk how everyone would tie and just- ((Whitney.) nevermind. Here's the فہرست of who stays, who is going. Anyone who isn't listed is terminated, unless I forgot someone who was meant to live.

Staying:
•Fang (bio completed and updated)
•Jaime (updated, needs posted) Jaime's kids, Parker and Finnian are also staying, but do not...
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posted by ComicSans
-I چرا لیا, چوری کی this outline from some past مضامین i found on here. Uhh, i'd love to RP with some of آپ bros and broettes. woo.-

Name: Malachi (Mal-i-kai) Reiner

Occupation: He's an ex-hero

Hero Name: Jasper

Age: 19

Date of Birth: November 3,1996

Nationality: Canadian-American

Hair: Undercut style. He has dark brown almost black hair

Body: He's about 6'2" but he's lean and toned, strong and lanky. SO WooO. He also has gages and a tattoo between his shoulder blades that had his gf's name but now says "Tolia, The Queen Bitch" since they broke up.

Eyes: Forest Green

Powers and Ability's:
Through growing up...
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
Fang sat tapping his fingers on the computer, staring up at the monitors as his dark eyes scanned over them. "This is useless, there's nothing even going on.." He sighed out and leaned his head on the keyboard, hitting his head against it a few times. He only rose at the sound of Batman entering the cave, but not looking from the monitors. "He's ready, Bats. Whether آپ see یا it not, I'm taking him out into the field." Fang stood and turned, crossing his arms as he earned a scowl. "It's been six months, Fang. Six. Might I remind آپ it was on purpose, not some accident." Batman کہا and locked...
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posted by SilverWings13
 random foxy!
random foxy!
Creature: Kitsune

Origin: Japan ("kitsune" means "fox" in Japanese)

Type: mythical

Lifespan: immortal (technically)

Weaknesses: icy weather یا water saps their energy, high metabolisms (meaning they must consume مزید food than most humans to stay healthy)

Strength is drawn from: other kitsune, heat, red meat (so... not really vegetarians)

Common traits: quick tempers (especially when around other kitsune), glowing irises at certain times

Summary: First documentation of a kitsune was in the 4th century A.D. as creature of myth in Japan. Full blooded kitsune have the ability to shape-shift into any...
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posted by Robin_Love
 Amal's Lamp (her necklace)
Amal's Lamp (her necklace)
Hey. I know. "Oh great. Another one!" Well...I have plans for them all so I want to introduce this one to you.


Name: Raja Owens
Alias: Amal (“hope; aspiration”)
Powers: Ultimate Cosmic Powers
Occupation: Genie
Weakness/Limits: Can only use powers when summoned یا wished upon.
History: Amal was created out of hope in the ancient times. She lived for years on end till her physical body was unable to carry her and was dissolved in chaos. Since then she has been embodied into multiple bodies every century. She chooses a different name each time, something close to her own. Amal takes on different...
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posted by godmor
( This is the first of a series of Bio's aimt to explian, companion caraters thad play a part in storys i write, and who therwise micht not get thad explanation.
Beceas they are companion and not full blown OC's, these Bio's micht be sorther than normal.)

General

Full Name: Boris Ivanof
Nickname: None
Reason for nickname:
Age: 33
Gender: Male
Place of Birth: Saint Petersburg
Birthday: 15.3.1982
Currently living in: Gotham
Species/Race: Human
Ethnicity: Cacasian
Blood Type: A
Occupation: Bodyguard, Criminal.
Sexual Orientation: Heterosexual
Social Status: Higer midelclass.
Relationship Status: Singel
Status:...
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posted by SilverWings13
There was a breathless silence between the boys. Even the lantern flame seemed to be frozen, unable to break the silence from its glass house.

"Wh...what?" Leon had finally found his voice.

"I'm sorry, I should have told آپ sooner. There was no time-"

"N-no."

"Sorry?"

"No." The small boy was suddenly on his feet. There was no where to run, but there was no hint of fleeing in his tense muscled and clenched fists. It was the lighting quick temper that Tommy recognized from both his sister and father. "No! آپ are lying."

"I'm not-"

"Yes, آپ are! I thought آپ were my ally."

"I'm not your ally, Leon......
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posted by SilverWings13
I knooooow, I totally let this go bad on the back burner. But I had a few hours to kill on the 6 hours of plane rides to Alaska. Here's a long-ish passage of these cuties to make up for it, for anyone still interested~

Tommy was glad he had spent so many hours training in the snow with the jeeps. Speeding down a trail, winding between the trees, snowflakes blowing into the windshield. His mitch-matched eyes flickered to the rear view mirror, feeling relief at the empty path left behind, no sign of pursuing trucks. He turned his eyes back to the trail, then quickly glanced to the boy in the passenger...
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posted by XxSilverScarsxX
Character’s Name, Nicknames, and Aliases
Naomi Piers. Nicknamed "Mel" یا "Birdy". Aliases listed from most known to least: "Melissa Adams," "Joanna Heath," "Kylee Gillsburg," "Sarah Pike."

Age, Sex, Ethnicity
14, female, caucasian

Hair colour, Eye colour, Height, Weight
Hair is jet-black, eyes are مرکت, ایمرلڈ green. She is a muscular 5'9, 145lbs.

Scars, Birthmarks, Tattoos, Piercings and other Defining Features
Major scarring on arms, torso, legs, and face.

History

At birth, Naomi was pronounced dead. In reality, she was very much alive, and was taken to a School facility.

From the time she was taken to...
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added by DiscordYJ
Source: me
posted by GlitterPuff
Can I post stuff that has nothing to do with any of my OC's یا the fandom in general? I'm just going to anyways, but just heads up this is purely creative writing
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She didn’t know what to do. Sitting on her bed, she stared down at the single rose in her hand. It was short stemmed, the thorns neatly cut off so she wouldn’t get pricked. The petals were a light pink, still bright with color since morning when it was دیا to her. She sighed, twirling the stem between her fingers. This girl, Haleigh, gave it to her. Haleigh seemed to be in love with her and she had no idea what to do about...
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added by SilverWings13
Source: NOT MINE [tumblr: demonslayingnephilim]
posted by KatRox1
B/C آپ guys are probably UBER confused every time I talk about Bella...

Name: Bella Harmony Watson
Nicknames: Bells, Mercy

Age: 19 (as of January 2, 2014)

Alignment: Neutral

Powers: Previously able to create and control آگ کے, آگ with her hands, her powers seem to have evolved to where she now can create آگ کے, آگ with her mind. The only catch is that if she is not constantly focused, her powers take on a life of it’s own and will randomly spark fires on objects in her surroundings. Additionally, she is only able to be in direct contact with flame for no مزید than a منٹ یا so. Her average body temperature...
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posted by MafiaYJ
Babylon followed closely behind Adrian's black robes with a serious face, her eyes baring holes into his skull, "Adrian, Ive been becoming extremely violent." she stated flatly.
"Oh have you?" Adrian replied as he looked around absently at the hall and the doors that lined them, some with ominous light and others temptingly open.
In annoyance Babylon moved her way to block his path, her hands on her hips, her stance دکھانا obvious emotion. "Adrian! Im serious! I threatened to experiment on my friends, to kill them even. Im getting far مزید violent then Ive ever been. Why? Why is this happening?"...
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posted by BladeYJ
The Four Sons of Serenity

Life
Name: Asher
Age: No one knows
Hair: Black
Eyes: Emerald
Height: 5'11"
Relations: Oldest of the four brothers
Costume: A white suit of armor
Weapon Choice: He's able to give life to anyone and anything.
Personality: He's quiet, gentle, and merciful
Weakness': Death
Background: Unknown

Peace
Name: Calum
Age: No one knows
Hair: Long and blue and gray
Eyes: various colors
Height: 6'0"
Relations: He's the سیکنڈ oldest of the four
Costume: A gray and blue suit with , black gloves, and his hair is tied into a ponytail
Weapon Choice: Waterbender and peacemaker...he's able to...
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posted by GlitterPuff
Name: Calypso Syntyche (Daughter of Thanatos: God of Death)

Age: 17

Birthday: December 17th

Height: 4’ 11”

Hair: Black, going halfway down her back

Eyes: Gray

Personality: Shy, doesn’t trust anyone

Handicaps: Terrible nightmares --> Psych Issues

Status: Single

Religion: Ancient Greek (Mythology)

Family: Mom – dead, no siblings that she knows of, and she met her dad once

Sexuality: Straight

Weaknesses: A small spot on the small of her back after she bathed in the River Styx

Strengths: Archery

Background:
-    Was born with the power to kill

-    Did not come...
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posted by SilverWings13
I wrote this a while ago, figured آپ guys may (or may not) like to read it. I wrote it as Alek speaking to Tara. Voici!

"We left for freedom. For her freedom. "
"Whisper's?"
"Noëlle's, Whisper's daughter,” he corrected.
The one being told the story was taken aback, "You left because..."
"Whisper was pregnant,” he confirmed in the sort of tone a story teller held when about to relay a very long, very true story, "It was the plan. The entire plan.
“I was raised on knowledge. My father created me so that he could have full responsibility over my upbringing. He made sure that my trials and tests.....
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posted by GlitterPuff
"Aachoo!" she sneezed into her tissue. Her sneeze could be heard throughout the entire apartment. Zack came in a moment later with a bowl of soup.

"Here. Eat this." He gave her the bowl and kissed the سب, سب سے اوپر of her head, making her face light up a bit.

"Thank you," Rene replied, her voice raspy and quiet, and she carefully blew on her سوپ and took a spoonful. "Mmm, yummy." He smiled and sat down on the edge of the bed, watching her eat her سوپ slowly. When she finished it, she set down the bowl and exchanged it for a tissue. The red head blew her nose as hard as she could, but she was still stuffed...
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posted by Robin_Love
His raven hair dripped crimson blood to the mistreated battle field. The spear had long been removed from his head but the bleeding went with the hours that had passed in useless war. His breathing was slowing; he could hardly see the outline of who had been his king through his icy blue eyes. It was a bloody fight, all lives lost except his and his king's. Now, he fought off the clouding death penetrating his senses.
“I had hoped for better with us.”
He smiled sadly at the word's his uncle spoke.
“As had I, my lord.”
“You tried to overthrow me and kill me. Treason is cause for death....
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