What do آپ think of my عملی حکمت drawing?

It's cute! :) Keep drawing ~

Not Bad
Practice makes Perfect

cute maybe make the head smaller but still very cute XD

Connect the body and the head.
Keep trying.
Cute.

[Sorry for the terrible English. I just woke up :v]

•The head's too big (Unless if this is a chibi)
•Make the hair lively (And سے طرف کی lively I mean آپ should let it flow)
•The eyes are too narrow
•Why are there only 4 fingers :v (Yes, all of us are having issues with drawing hands :V)
•From what I remember, characters' still have cheekbones and chins (Not all chibis has a chin سے طرف کی the way. That is, if this IS a chibi)
•The legs are out of proportion. It seems like this girl doesn't have hips. With that said, I suggest آپ to make them a little bit far away from each other
•If those are the eyelashes/eyelids/whatever آپ call them, connect them.

I'm gonna stop now since I suck at explaining and suggesting

Also, just practice hard and I'm pretty sure that one day, you'll be tumblr famous/DA famous/Fanpop famous یا nyargh -w-