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A flame when somebody reads not even all of the first chapter of your story...maybe just a few sentences...and decides to shoot آپ in the foot and insult آپ until there is no tomorrow. They say things that hurt your feelings and make آپ doubt if your that good of a writer.

This is one thing آپ do not want to do to some authors....

Like her brother, Lindsay Potter had been noticing Malfoy sneaking out of class. One دن she decided to figure out where he was going , after Malfoy left Lindsay asked to use the bathroom. When she was out of sight, she quietly followed Malfoy feeling like a 15 سال old spy. Halfway to where ever they were heading, Lindsay started humming the mission impossible theme song quietly and Malfoy turned around. Lucky for Lindsay there was a statue that she hid behind
Finally Malfoy went inside of... Moaning Myrtle's bathroom? Lindsay went inside and hid behind the first stall. The lights were off...

((Happy Mother's Day! Just a little drabble in honor of the day. آپ might want to grab some tissues))


Hailey Potter was no ordinary girl. She was a witch, and twin sister to the most famous wizard of all time. کہا wizard was right اگلے to her, their father's old Invisibility چادر, فرغل spread across their laps.
"I wonder why Dumbledore gave the چادر, فرغل to me," Harry asked, running his hand across the fabric.
"Probably because you're the oldest," Hailey answered, looking down at her hands.
"Nah, that's not likely. You're the مزید sensible one."
"I'm not مزید sensible, I just pick my own fights."
"Wish...

Im not sure how it happend...but it did.Oh....I'm sorry my name is Amanda.Im in Griffindor and im 16 years old.And last night I did something baaaad.Ok so let me start from the beggining.

3 days earlier....

"Hey guys."I کہا to my دوستوں Harry,Hermione and Ron."Hey."They said.As we walked through the hall Malfoy stopped us."Potter."He کہا smirking.Athough I never really like Malfoy I had to admit he was rather good looking."He looked at me."Harvly."I rolled my eyes."What do آپ want Malfoy?"He looked at me."Many things at the moment."I glared at him."Stay away from her Malfoy."Harry sneared.Malfoy...

in which A is a slightly tipsy James,
B is the bright idea of going sledding کے, سلیڈانگ and
C is some ridiculously adorable fluff.

You're sitting in the Gryffindor common room, something آپ do quite often on Saturday afternoons, and attempting very diligently to do your homework while simultaneously watching the Marauders, well, be Marauders – an activity which tends to be quite loud and, if Sirius is in the room, slightly graphic at times, and therefore very distracting from homework, even if کہا homework is a most interesting Charms essay. You'll turn your head down, scribble down a few words, and...

"So, ready to tango?" James asked with a glint in his eye Lily couldn't quite identify.

"Yeah, sure – actually, James, wait. We need to talk."

"Oh, Lily, surely آپ can't be breaking up with me already!"

"James!" Lily hit him again, and was prepared to do it again and again; because even though she was opposed to physical violence on principle, it was literally the only thing that worked on James. "Shut up. Can't آپ take this seriously, just for once?"

"Is something wrong, Lils? Is it Snape? Did he... do something?"

"No, James, nothing's wrong. And it isn't Snape. It's you, actually."

"Me? But...

The سال is 1966 - Bellatrix Lestrange is at ہوم for the summer - playing with her sisters. ( یا so she calls it )-Tormenting them is مزید like it.
" CISSY!!! Get IN HERE! I want to practice something on you." Bellatrix demanded of her littlest sister Narcissa. In walked this this slender little pale blonde. She looked annoyed with her boisterous sister.

" AND-what if I say NO! What about THAT, آپ never thought about my answer did آپ BELLA?" replied Narcissa with a haughty tone.

" OH get the stick out of your پچھواڑے, گدا CISSY. You're not SOME RICH BROAD آپ know. IM THE OLDEST, what I say goes."...

Chapter Three

All throughout their patrol, it was all James could do to keep his attention (and eyes) on the task at hand. He was still going over the گھنٹہ before patrol in his head, trying to make sense of it. Lily Evans, always the stoic one, afraid? It was hard to get his head around. Lily had always been the one to keep her head in the most panic-worthy of situations – like the time she found out that Remus is a werewolf.

It had been a particularly difficult full moon, the last one of their sixth سال at Hogwarts. Wolf-Remus had been مزید vicious than usual and both James and Sirius were...

Snap's pov
I walkedfrom my chamber.It was chrismas break so I had no classes to teach.As I made my way to the great hall I saw her.Sara Moconally she was not really a tipical which.She was actually McGonagall's grandaughter.She had the ability to change her aperence like hair color and eye color.She was the darkest lookingGriffindor I had ever met.She had perfect grades and keep to her self mostly but as I look around she seemed to have many friends.She just didnt realize it.I knew that Draco fancyed her which suprized me.She was a blood traitor.Today she ws wearing all black and looked quiet...

This is just an idea - its still in progress so check back regularly :)
I had the idea to chronicle Bellatrix's decent into madness using her sexual encounters.
Very mature rating with themes of rape and violence!
They will be in form of about 20 short drabbles.

Here we goooooo

Bellatrix Black: Walnut, 12¾", dragon heartstring

1st)
Bellatrix blinked back the tears that had formed in her eyes as Rosier shrugged on his robes and quickly excited the room. Laius Rosier was an old friend of her fathers whom had just دیا her the first glass of firewiskey she had ever had. She hadn’t liked it,...

((Just a quick note. This takes place in late July, right about when the twins turn 18. Everything is as it happened in the series.))



Hailey Potter paused in the midst of writing a letter. She was responding, yet again, to a curious reporter from the "Daily Prophet" wanting to hear about Harry's adventures.
Setting down her quill, she listened to the sounds coming from upstairs. She thought to herself while looking up at the ceiling.
Harry had never been quite the same after the battle. She and Ginny had tried getting him to open up, but that only made it worse. He'd even stopped playing Quidditch....

Chapter 1:
It has been 2 years now. Ginny is still in school, it’s her final سال and Harry has left and now working in the ministry of magic. It is the Easter Holidays and Harry is staying at the Wesley’s for the night as Molly, Ginny’s mum had insisted he stayed as they was preparing a celebration.
Harry POV:
I just finished work and now going to meet Ginny at platform 9 ¾. Ginny still attended Hogwarts school of witchcraft and wizardry. It’s Ginny’s final year, I miss Hogwarts I finished last year.
It’s 3 o clock the train should be here in about 2 minutes. I sat down at a bench...

Chapter Five

They stood like that for the longest time, James resting his chin on Lily's forehead, holding her, trying to wordlessly communicate so many things that could never be کہا aloud, at least not yet, not while she was this vulnerable, not while the both of them were still finding their footing as seventh-years. But one دن they would be said, James promised himself, one دن before graduation he would tell her all those things he'd been dying to say ever since Christmas of sixth year. It had been then, as he watched her kiss some Ravenclaw under a bough of mistletoe and wished harder...

I walked into McGonagalls office."God he is so frustrating."She sighed."Yes well he is your ex-husband your bound to think that."I shook my head."I've been trying since we got divorced to find the right woman for him, somebody to match up with his personality. I'm beginning to wonder if the world population isn't too limited."She looked at me."Vicki."Her voice sounded frustrated."ItsHe wants to meet Sammy but I dont like it." "Well she is his too.And he hasnt seen her in 2 years."I sighed.She was right.
"Sammy!"I called.Seveus was here to take her with him for a coupple of days.Sammy came down."Hi!"She...

Chapter Six

As the first half of October drew to a close, Quidditch became a topic of interest as the first match of the season, Gryffindor vs. Hufflepuff, approached. There was none of the corridor violence that preceded Gryffindor-Slytherin (or Ravenclaw-Slytherin, یا Hufflepuff-Slytherin) matches, but Hufflepuffs and Gryffindors who found themselves in the same class that last week before the game didn't much speak to each other. Seeing as it was the first game of the season, the Ravenclaws and Slytherins didn't really have anything against either team, except for the normal rivalry between...

Chapter Two

James flopped down اگلے to Sirius with a sigh. ”For Merlin's sake, how does she do it?”
After six years, the Marauders knew not to interrupt when James started going on and on (and on) about Lily. “I mean, I didn't think it was possible for her to be مزید attractive than she was last سال – remember last year?” The Marauders nodded. “Yeah, well, Merlin knows it's about twice that now. I mean, she's just kind of grown into herself a little, yeah? And – and – I could go on all دن –“
“Please don't, mate,” Sirius said, effectively stopping James' rant. The not...

Chapter Four

The rest September passed pretty much without incident for the Marauders – a disrupted class here, a minor prank there – and they were itching to do something more, to remind the entire school who they were, and دکھائیں off to the firsties, many of whom had heard stories from their older siblings.
Well, Sirius, Remus and Peter were. James, on the other hand, was unwilling to risk the wary friendship he and Lily now had with something as immature as switching around equipment in the Potions supply closet. There was also the matter of his Head Boy-ship – to be quite honest, the...

Chapter Eight

Lily stared at the ground, at her hands, out the window; at anything that wasn't James's sympathetic gaze. She simply couldn't take it right now.

"Lily..." he began hesitantly. Lily looked still further away and snapped, "don't!". The illusion that she was somewhere within the lines of okay was kept up until James tentatively wrapped his arms around her. "I'm sorry," he said. "I didn't know."

Lily let out a کڑوا, تلخ laugh. "Of course آپ didn't know, آپ couldn't have! I haven't told anybody. Do آپ really think that I want people to know that the Ministry isn't even trying to find...

Chapter One

Lily knew that her seventh and final سال at Hogwarts was going to be the hardest yet. Not only was she just getting over the death of her parents in early March, but she had the N.E.W.T's coming up – and to add to all the stress of it, she had been chosen as Head Girl. She had tried to decline the position, politely of course, but Professor Dumbledore would hear nothing of it. The phrase he used in his last letter still made her smile when she thought of it: ”There is no other girl in the seventh سال that I would entrust this position to, due to certain special circumstances...

Delicate Lips

Just to give a heads up this is a femslash fic, if آپ don't like girl/girl couples I highly recommend pressing the back button in the سب, سب سے اوپر left-hand corner of your browser. If آپ are uncomfortable with somewhat sexual themes do the same. If آپ don't like this kind of story and do not heed my warning, do hesitate to leave rude comments.

From the first time Isabella saw Bellatrix she knew things wouldn't be quite the same. The night was still young and Isabella was still writing a letter سے طرف کی the soft glow of a candle. She put down the quill (her letter being at its end) and carried...