I'm writing a book! Check out the prologue here and give me your thoughts!!!

Right. So my book is about four genetic experiments that escape from a secret scientific facility. These four kids aged 13, 17, 17 and 18 each have special abilities like moving things with their minds, healing powers, memory reading and hearing people's thoughts. The کتابیں coming along nicely and I have the basic plot-line worked out :)Here is the "prologue":

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