Here's some lyrics I wrote, hope آپ all like them. please comment. The song is called A Wish قوس قزح

So many wishes never come true
I’ve lost all my hope, so soon
It’s like it was doomed
To never come true

(BRIDGE)
Cuz another color turns
All black inside
Is the قوس قزح of colors
I always knew
fading away


(CHORUS)
I keep making these wishes
So far out of my reach
I just keep hoping
They’ll come true
I don’t understand why
I can’t see the colors
Of the قوس قزح
Anymore
It’s like they all
Disappeared right out
of the sky

Can I find a pot of سونا
at the end of the قوس قزح
یا is that just a myth
Can I paint with
the colors that exist
یا is that just a myth

(BRIDGE)
Cuz another color turns
All black inside
Is the قوس قزح of colors
I always knew
fading away


(CHORUS)
I keep making these wishes
So far out of my reach
I just keep hoping
They’ll come true
I don’t understand why
I can’t see the colors
Of the قوس قزح
Anymore
It’s like they all
Disappeared right out
of the sky

Does a shooting سٹار, ستارہ
wish come true
یا is that just a myth
Does the wish I made
On that special دن
Come true
یا is that just a myth

(BRIDGE)
Cuz another color turns
All black inside
Is the قوس قزح of colors
I always knew
fading away


(CHORUS)
I keep making these wishes
So far out of my reach
I just keep hoping
They’ll come true
I don’t understand why
I can’t see the colors
Of the قوس قزح
Anymore
It’s like they all
Disappeared right out
of the sky


(CHORUS)
I keep making these wishes
So far out of my reach
I just keep hoping
They’ll come true
I don’t understand why
I can’t see the colors
Of the قوس قزح
Anymore
It’s like they all
Disappeared right out
of the sky

I’ll just keep my hopes up and keep on wishing!

 karateyki posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک
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Albino said:
Huh, I wrote a song once:
Hey, hey, he-e-ey
I'm not sure whether I should keep. On. Goin'
Maybe I should just lay down
and let everythin' bring me down.
Maybe I should give up...

یا I could somehow break freeeeee!
I've been wrapped in chains of fear.
Maybe..maybe it's tiiiime to break freeeee!
Everythin' will be fiiiine!
No worries.
No pain.
No feeear!

I've been holed up,
covered from everythin'.
I let myself be beaten do-o-own.
What a fool I was.
There was always something that told me to be free
But I never heed it words.
I told myself that freedom would expose me to the woorld!

یا I could somehow break freeeeee!
I've been wrapped in chains of fear.
Maybe..maybe it's tiiiime to break freeeee!
Everythin' will be fiiiine!
No worries.
No pain.
No feeear!

(oo-o-oooh!)

I knew it was wrong to be the way I was.
But I was to afraid to step outside.
Every time I was ripped dooo-own (down)
Yeah, I was a fool
Hidin' from everthin' that came my way.
I couldn't even try to face it
All I could do was hiiiide

یا I could somehow break freeeeee!
I've been wrapped in chains of fear.
Maybe..maybe it's tiiiime to break freeeee!
Everythin' will be fiiiine!
No worries.
No pain.
No feeear!
(oo-o-ooh)
No fear....no feeear...
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pretty good, actually REALLY GOOD
karateyki posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک
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Thanks! Yurs is great too!
Albino posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک
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thanks
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Spi_Kat_Penguin said:
I pretty much like it

-Spi
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thanks
karateyki posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک
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:)-Spi
Spi_Kat_Penguin posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک
ShadowIsBack said:
nice! :)
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thanks
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spongesrule said:
yeah, rainbows!
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o_OULookWeird said:
I advise آپ not to put songs آپ made yourself on the internet. Because someone could steal it, become famous off of it, and take all credit D:
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