What do آپ guys think of my عملی حکمت character?

This is Shinsen Bara (which means fresh rose in Japanese). She is half human and half fox. Why half fox? You'll see soon. She is fully Japanese and speaks nothing but Japanese and never English. She lives in a small Kingdom in the very center of Japan called the بونسائی Kingdom. She is almost always is in a good mood and has a very silly personality. She has a tendency for candy, cake rolls and other sweat treats. She likes to go exploring all over her kingdom and all over Japan and even go venturing through other people's properties. Every Friday night, she goes over to her پسندیدہ night club and when she is not in the mood of controlling herself, her ears transform into لومڑی ears and she grows out her long لومڑی tail and lets the animal in her soul out. So what do آپ think of her?
 What do آپ guys think of my عملی حکمت character?
 sMCCarthyTV posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک
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MissChicky97 said:
What really matters is whether یا not آپ like it, to be honest.


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As for the 'fully Japanese' portion of your character description... in my humble opinion, unless you're a proficient یا native speaker یا extremely familiar with their customs it's not going to be very realistic.
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What now? I don't understand.
sMCCarthyTV posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک
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okay I guess you're right. Maybe I should add some tuicks to her.
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boytoy_84 said:
Looks awesome!!! :)
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XxKeithHarkinxX said:
it's unique that's for sure.
but unique is gr8
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IT? What is she a non-human? lol
sMCCarthyTV posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک
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well noting that she's half human half fox, yes, she's not entirely human, and even with that she's just a made up character not pertaining to the actually "humanness" if آپ will, but i was مزید referring to her character rather than her as a whole.
XxKeithHarkinxX posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک
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oh yes. She has the body of a human but the soul of a لومڑی
sMCCarthyTV posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک
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Very unique.
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misscrazel said:
I think she's a great character. The drawing is great too. Did آپ draw it? If so I could give آپ some suggestions if آپ wanted.
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Yes actually I drew her all سے طرف کی my self. And I have a deviantART page where I post most of my drawings so maybe I can accept your suggestions :)
sMCCarthyTV posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک
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It's a really good drawing, the hair and face are perfect, don't change anything about those, but آپ just need to work on the body a little. عملی حکمت bodies are hard, I can't draw tthem either. If آپ have a picture of an عملی حکمت character to copy آپ could use that to practice. Hope I helped.:) Also I'm really impressed with your drawing skills. Do آپ have any tips on how آپ did the hair?
misscrazel posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک
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well, one tip that I can give on hair is that they MUST have highlights and shading. The colors all depend on what the actually hir color whether it's blue, green, red, blonde, whatever it is, it need to have the basic color of what the hair is suppose to be and it needs to have a darker tone for the shading. The shading always takes place on the bottom strands of the hair like Shinsen Bara's does and they must not go past the highlighted area. speaking of the highlighted area, it needs to be pure white and see who SB's highlights are zig zag? Most hair has that but they can be smooth too. Shinsen Bara's hair border is on the left of her head and it's also why from right to left, the highlight gets smaller and as it passes the Border line, it gets bigger. It depends on where the light is coming from. If it's on the left then the highlight will be bigger like how the picture displays it to be but is on the right, well... then the highligh will be bigger on the right. This never happens in Manga but in Anime, the eyebrows and سب, سب سے اوپر lashes actually go over the hair than underneath. But in Manga, the eyes and eye brows go under the hair. Hope this was helpful for you.
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KissKissHannah said:
She looks nice, but I probably can't understand her! XD
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smartone123 said:
ya it would be kinda hard to make her full japanese so i would give her something that for would make it easier for آپ to protray her to the adiance.Also give مزید of her back story and extend on her personalilty,ticks and streagths,it would make your character مزید relat.able.Now on the design,the hair is pretty but the designs abit plain maybe make one that would reflect on her personality abit more.
Overall,not bad but maybe just add abit مزید so she مزید relatiable and her design reflects مزید of her character
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pookafusmcgee said:
It's cute and all, but the body is kind of dis portioned. Others wise I like it!! The story is original!!! :3 good job.
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pokemonfan909 said:
I think she looks cute, but to be honest and no offence, her body and head don't seem to be in proportion.
But I like the idea, it is pretty clean for an عملی حکمت but it is cool.
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dustydeer said:
she's nice i like her, is she your first OC?

though if آپ was to expand on her, i think آپ should give a reason on why she reveals her لومڑی features a bit مزید یا what sets her off to do that, also how she became half لومڑی in the first place (unless this is a magical kingdom where foxes and humans can have children heh)
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animegurl235 said:
it's ok i guess. a bit generic, and the body proportions need some work.... but i like it !
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