What do آپ think of my drawing?

umn its good,you draw good...but maybe آپ could use some better shading techniques then it will look even better.

9/10 tbh. Welkomen ('Welcome' in Dutch) back :)

I normally enjoy shitting all over bad art on fanpop, but this really isn't bad. The only problem that I have with it is how آپ added shading on the hair but nothing else

it’s really awesome em somthing about the lips i don’t like

So, I didn`t really understand from what آپ کہا - is this supposed to be realism یا عملی حکمت style, but for now I`ll assume that anime. It`s not bad. One thing that stands out a bit for me are eyebrows. I don`t know anything about this character, but males usually tend to have thicker eyebrows without as much curvature/sharp angles as females. Another thing that stands out (only for me) is the small nose. For مزید masculine look usually nose is a bit wider at so called 'ala' area of the nose. But that`s مزید my pet peeves about character not drawing itself. :) In عملی حکمت style it`s مزید about character expressions and emotions, so there any proportions and too realistic looks can be forgotten.
About the drawing technique, shading is a bit weird in the hair and face مجموعی طور پر needs a lot مزید shading. If not light crosshatching, then just a small blended shade would be nice. But آپ can add it to your drawing anytime really.
But the composition is nice and base sketch also isn`t bad at all. 👍

100/10 bro!

It looks great

مجموعی طور پر it looks really nice! I wouldn't say it looks "realistic" though- it's definitely still very stylized and آپ can see a lot of the عملی حکمت influence. A lot of the features are still very exaggerated- like the eyes and chin in particular- and that can make it a little difficult to tell what was done intentionally and what wasn't. It still looks really nice, though. Especially the hand.
You've got a pretty good grasp on proportion and placement so it still looks pretty solid even with the exaggeration.
I'm not a پرستار of how you've approached the hair texture, though. I don't recommend drawing every single thin strand as آپ have- it can look a little stringy and lose some of the form. I understand why آپ would chose to do that as i's a pretty intuitive step, but I think آپ would get a better result سے طرف کی thinking of hair as different clumps and how they would respond to light. It would be a lot stronger if there were noticeable highlights and shadows in the hair. Other than that though it's pretty solid.

This doesn't have anything to do with the quality of this specific drawing یا anything but I cannot stress enough to آپ how important it is to study the fundamentals of art and drawing. Don't skimp out on studying real-life anatomy, proportions, and value even if آپ intend to keep drawing in a very stylized way. آپ don't have to be a master at those things سے طرف کی any means, but having a basic knowledge of the realistic figure and striving to further your understanding of it will also benefit your stylized art tremendously.
You're probably sitting there like "Yeah well duh I know that" but I've seen too many talented people fall short of their potential because they wanted to only draw عملی حکمت یا cartoons to not say something.
Some resources I would reccommend:
Books
Andrew Loomis- Drawing the Head and Hands, Figure Drawing for All it's Worth
Jack Hamm- Drawing the Head and Figure
Burne Hogarth- Dynamic Drawing Series
John Vanderpoel - The Human Figure
Harold Speed- The Practice and Science of Drawing

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Anyway I hope I didn't bore آپ too much.
Happy drawing!