What can I do to improve these song lyrics?

Monday Money Problems

It's time to buckle down

I know that I must

Start workin' my head

'Till it's feelin' like rust and dust

I desire to suceed

but I can't sit down and

stop procrastinating



And now I'm sittin' here

nine-fifteen monday night

lookin' Washington

dead in the eyes



Don't wanna be rich,

but creative yet simplistic

strong enough to support

a healthy family of six

I wanna be real

in everything that I sing

and now I finally can

'cause I've grown my wings



And now I'm sittin' here

ten-fifteen Monday night

lookin' Washington

dead in the eyes



I desire to know my destiny

but I get stuck while doin' the work

God please help me on my feet



Most would rhyme to delight, but me?

No, آپ silly bee!

I do it solely for the epitome

of becoming

what I want to be! (*2)



And now I'm sittin' here

eleven-thirty, monday night

Lookin' washington

dead in the eyes



Thanks. I know it's really hard without the actual tune, but hopefully آپ get the just of it.