ok so this is my first stoy so please تبصرہ and tell me if آپ want me to continue and if آپ have any ideas it would help.plz.=D
(bellas pov)
I was studying for the dartmouth finals when edward walked in and through my book across the room.the اگلے thing i knew he was on سب, سب سے اوپر of me.you study to much he whispered in my ear his lips traced along my jaw and back up to my lips.then there was a knock on the door.go away alice!edward کہا angry.i pushed edward off me and sliped into my defenive crouch. its ok bella its just alice.no its not i کہا through my teeth then the door slamed down.a girl walked in and edward started screaming so i put my sheild around him and he stoped. who are آپ and what do آپ want!?!i asked hard.my name is جیسمین, یاسمین im from olimpia.then i relaxed my crouch because i knew of olimpia.jasmine smiled your from olimpia to right.i nodded im a telapath just like you,am i correct.yes i کہا guilty.edwards eyes were confused and in shock.
(bellas pov)
I was studying for the dartmouth finals when edward walked in and through my book across the room.the اگلے thing i knew he was on سب, سب سے اوپر of me.you study to much he whispered in my ear his lips traced along my jaw and back up to my lips.then there was a knock on the door.go away alice!edward کہا angry.i pushed edward off me and sliped into my defenive crouch. its ok bella its just alice.no its not i کہا through my teeth then the door slamed down.a girl walked in and edward started screaming so i put my sheild around him and he stoped. who are آپ and what do آپ want!?!i asked hard.my name is جیسمین, یاسمین im from olimpia.then i relaxed my crouch because i knew of olimpia.jasmine smiled your from olimpia to right.i nodded im a telapath just like you,am i correct.yes i کہا guilty.edwards eyes were confused and in shock.