Twilight in Sugar Magazine 2009

This is sort of a short one...

"Hey, Renesmee, wait up!"
I didn't have to turn to know the voice. It was Mrs. Malagwa, my art teacher, the only person at Brenton who insisted on calling me 'Renesmee.'
I turned and smiled at her. "Is there a problem, Mrs. Malagwa?"
"No, no problem." she panted, out of breath, though she'd only jogged a few steps. I waited for her to continue. "The Valentine's دن Dance is coming up," she said. "And آپ have such artistic ability. We need مزید members on the Decorating Comittee." she held up a sheet that was half filled with signatures.
Ah, the dance. I was...

This is the Twilight fanfic story I'm working on. I just finished the first chapter.Hope آپ guys like it and let me know what آپ think in تبصرے =)
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I looked at the Cullens. Jasper and Alice were holding hands, Emmett was fooling around, Rosalie stared at me coldly, and Edward held me in his arms tightly. I could feel his cold chest against mine. I was wondering what Jacob was doing with his new girlfriend, Sarah. But that didn’t matter now. I was with my family and the love of my life. I glanced at Alice, who was still holding Jasper’s...