SandMCLASSIFIED .........wow.....just...WOW!!!.....was NOT expecting tht.....

Icicle1penguin I liked the beginning. XD

kowalkielol i am sorta,....,.... ?ing thisss......... after glancing at it and reading some wordsssssss,...... 0__0

kowalkielol OK NOT READIN IT!!!!! :x

kowalkielol I READ IT !!!!!! I AM SCARED 4 LIFE!!!!!!! :(

kowalkielol ........................ ...... grosssssss

yokaisummoner As for smut fanfics go, this was very well-written, but I still think that this is slightly inappropriate because they're are alot of younger users on fanpop, am I correct? It's probably best that for fics like this, there are warnings before the actual story begins about how explicts the content is, just so when it get to the steamy stuff... the younger users of fanpop can keep their innonence safe by they're own choice to read on or not. I, on the other hand, don't mind too much for these fics, (if its well written most won't mind it either. Plus, I am an older person in my twenties... so I know this stuff already and I wasn't as offended as the younger users... most of them seems offended due to lack of understanding or knowledge about the reproduction/sexual behavior topics.) But, there was one thing about this fic that actually bothered me, I don't think the anatomy of a penguin can actually mate in the way you described. Penguins do NOT have intromittent organs. There are varying reasons as to why intromittent organs would be evolutionarily advantageous to the penguin species. I recommend that if you are interested in writing smut fics, you should check this webpage and understand the actually biology of the avian species and understand their sexual behaviours. Again, it's only a recommendation. http://tuxxie.org/ethology/ethology-sexual.html Clips of Penguin mating rituals: (view these if you truely want to learn more about said topic) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yuc6yr_VO3w http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-4Gt6uapucY http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V5lYNYMz-W0 So, not bad I guess for a sixteen-year old, and surprisingly there are alot of interspecies mating in the natural world so an owl mating a penguin is not that big a deal as long no mutant offspring is the outcome of such acts because I don't that's even possible unless it was done like a scientific experiment with test tubes or such.