(This is based on my first fanfiction "Continuation of Burning Low" I made my own character named Emily Hallison she a human from the town Goldlion)
(it was just another regular دن and as usual pb was kidnapped سے طرف کی the ice king and as usual finn and jake were running and trying to save her)
Finn: let her go Barf breath!(running)
Jake: yeah she'll probably faint because of your breath haha (running too)
Ice King:What?! (stopping in mid-air) I'll have آپ know that I brush my teeth 3 times a day!!
Finn: And I'll have آپ know I'm gonna kick your butt!!(doing a flying kick on ice Kings face)
Emily's POV
(its Sembreak school doesn't start for the اگلے 2 weeks. It was just a normal دن in Gollion the trees were decorated with the most wonderful shades of مالٹا, نارنگی and red, just as I was halfway ہوم Amanda Tuffwood the most مقبول girl in school and her group blocked my path)
Emily: What do آپ want Amanda?
Amanda: Just a little something Ms. Jayloon gave you.
Emily: آپ mean the lead role for the play?
Amanda: Good girl, now I want آپ to tell Ms . Jayloon that آپ don't want the role and say that she should give it to me.
Emily : What no way!!(she کہا furiously) I'm not like آپ little maid that will do everything آپ want!
Amanda:(she glared at her evil-like) Fine I guess i'll have to take it سے طرف کی force , girls!! (then two of her accomplices charged after her but dodge all of them and ran and ran until she could run no more)
(then she found a cottage with The name "Ooo Royal" she saw that the door was left open and knowing that Amanda and her دوستوں will catch up to her soon she had no choice but go in the old cottage and wait. When she turned around the cottage was rather small and dusty but what caught her eye was the words in red on the دیوار it read "The gate of the Land of Ooo is upon you, say it once say it twice and it will open for you)
Emily: (she began reading it) The gate to The Land of Ooo is upon,say it once say it twice and it open for you
(in an instant a potal sucked her into the Ooo)
Finn's POV
(they finally defeated Ice King and freed pb when a portal opened and something came out of it and it landed on Finn)
Emily: ahh off!(as she landed on finn and they both fell down on the snow)
Finn and Emily: Owww (both raising there heads and at once there eyes met)
to be continued-
(well tell me what آپ think about this, I know its not [perfect but I love it, ohh and tell me what آپ think about Emily)
(it was just another regular دن and as usual pb was kidnapped سے طرف کی the ice king and as usual finn and jake were running and trying to save her)
Finn: let her go Barf breath!(running)
Jake: yeah she'll probably faint because of your breath haha (running too)
Ice King:What?! (stopping in mid-air) I'll have آپ know that I brush my teeth 3 times a day!!
Finn: And I'll have آپ know I'm gonna kick your butt!!(doing a flying kick on ice Kings face)
Emily's POV
(its Sembreak school doesn't start for the اگلے 2 weeks. It was just a normal دن in Gollion the trees were decorated with the most wonderful shades of مالٹا, نارنگی and red, just as I was halfway ہوم Amanda Tuffwood the most مقبول girl in school and her group blocked my path)
Emily: What do آپ want Amanda?
Amanda: Just a little something Ms. Jayloon gave you.
Emily: آپ mean the lead role for the play?
Amanda: Good girl, now I want آپ to tell Ms . Jayloon that آپ don't want the role and say that she should give it to me.
Emily : What no way!!(she کہا furiously) I'm not like آپ little maid that will do everything آپ want!
Amanda:(she glared at her evil-like) Fine I guess i'll have to take it سے طرف کی force , girls!! (then two of her accomplices charged after her but dodge all of them and ran and ran until she could run no more)
(then she found a cottage with The name "Ooo Royal" she saw that the door was left open and knowing that Amanda and her دوستوں will catch up to her soon she had no choice but go in the old cottage and wait. When she turned around the cottage was rather small and dusty but what caught her eye was the words in red on the دیوار it read "The gate of the Land of Ooo is upon you, say it once say it twice and it will open for you)
Emily: (she began reading it) The gate to The Land of Ooo is upon,say it once say it twice and it open for you
(in an instant a potal sucked her into the Ooo)
Finn's POV
(they finally defeated Ice King and freed pb when a portal opened and something came out of it and it landed on Finn)
Emily: ahh off!(as she landed on finn and they both fell down on the snow)
Finn and Emily: Owww (both raising there heads and at once there eyes met)
to be continued-
(well tell me what آپ think about this, I know its not [perfect but I love it, ohh and tell me what آپ think about Emily)
Thanks to all my شائقین that read my story!!!!! :D
Fionna's POV
I plopped down on my بستر and stared at the ceiling. I started thinking about how PG saved me. It was so unlikely of him to do that!!!! Why did he do it anyways???? Did he.....care for me??
"ARE آپ EVEN LISTENING FIONNA?!!" کہا Cake.
"Oh, um,yea,hehe........"
"Fionna! Stop zoning out and listen!!!!"
"Ok, fine!!", I say.
I سہارا myself up on the bed. I sat there, looking at Cake, zoning out again.
"So, I was walking along Breakfast Kingdom....."
"Is this about Lord Monochromicorn again?", I said. Cake talks about him ALL the time.
"Maybe.....", کہا Cake.
Beemo stared to beep.
"Bath time Fionna!", کہا Beemo.
"Okay Beemo," I said. I walked into the bath room and took a nice, long bath.
Fionna's POV
I plopped down on my بستر and stared at the ceiling. I started thinking about how PG saved me. It was so unlikely of him to do that!!!! Why did he do it anyways???? Did he.....care for me??
"ARE آپ EVEN LISTENING FIONNA?!!" کہا Cake.
"Oh, um,yea,hehe........"
"Fionna! Stop zoning out and listen!!!!"
"Ok, fine!!", I say.
I سہارا myself up on the bed. I sat there, looking at Cake, zoning out again.
"So, I was walking along Breakfast Kingdom....."
"Is this about Lord Monochromicorn again?", I said. Cake talks about him ALL the time.
"Maybe.....", کہا Cake.
Beemo stared to beep.
"Bath time Fionna!", کہا Beemo.
"Okay Beemo," I said. I walked into the bath room and took a nice, long bath.
Some may be valid some may be not ? Either way their just our opinions.
1) What if she becomes unstable again?
I mean remember in "Burning Low" Pb کہا "She's
stablelized were محفوظ for now" get that "For NOW"
that does not mean forever.
2) She's made of FIRE!
I mean its kind of a hastle to keep putting tinfoil یا flame shield on finn. I mean any time the flame shield could were off یا the tinfoil could rip. And she could burn finn without even trying.
3) She sometimes can't control her powers.
I mean remember in "Vault of Bones" she couldent control them she just kept burning away. Remember she کہا the The Power of DISTRUTION!!! (come on!!!) she spun out of control!
4)She may not have the same taste with finn. Remember in "Vault of Bones she didnt like finn's way . (HERE) "Finn im not having any fun
i dont like doing things your way." see what i mean.
Shelby, Shelby!
Yes Jake?
um mm, we're going for a walk in the forest, stay here and watch the house cuz we are taking BMO as well.
yes Jake
(Finn,Jake and BMO go out)
Sooooooooo, what to do? what to do..
(NEPTR pops out)
Hello Shelby, wanna play hide and seek?
Nah.
oh man!
mmmmm, why don't i trash a party, i'll call all (shelby is calling all his friends)
the door گھنٹی, بیل rings...
come on in guys
ارے Shelby, i bought snacks
nice one Bob!
i gots some games...
awesome!
so the worms set the party... then it was party time!
AFTER SOME HOURS....
oh my glob, i feel like im about to explode!
(the door opens)
Shelby, what have آپ done!?
Oh god Shelby, آپ jacked up our place.
Get out worms, get! yeah that's right!
And آپ Shelby, Don't آپ ever, ever mess with me again!
(shelby went back to jake's viola, crying)
Yes Jake?
um mm, we're going for a walk in the forest, stay here and watch the house cuz we are taking BMO as well.
yes Jake
(Finn,Jake and BMO go out)
Sooooooooo, what to do? what to do..
(NEPTR pops out)
Hello Shelby, wanna play hide and seek?
Nah.
oh man!
mmmmm, why don't i trash a party, i'll call all (shelby is calling all his friends)
the door گھنٹی, بیل rings...
come on in guys
ارے Shelby, i bought snacks
nice one Bob!
i gots some games...
awesome!
so the worms set the party... then it was party time!
AFTER SOME HOURS....
oh my glob, i feel like im about to explode!
(the door opens)
Shelby, what have آپ done!?
Oh god Shelby, آپ jacked up our place.
Get out worms, get! yeah that's right!
And آپ Shelby, Don't آپ ever, ever mess with me again!
(shelby went back to jake's viola, crying)
Hey, guys! I'm sorry to bring up a sore subject but after looking on a few کلب I found out how some people have easily bagged a medal.
They were here first, and I mean it, literally. All آپ need is some major club activity in the early days of the site and you'll be an instant fan, then you'll progressively rise up and up every time آپ make a move. Eventually, you're on the سب, سب سے اوپر five in the page.
I haven't tried it myself, and I don't plan to, but this is the most evident way I can find.
And another thing I noticed is how آپ اقدام towards a much higher ranking if آپ write articles. Something I noticed when I wrote a few مضامین here (My rank was moved three times).
So that's all! Don't try and point fingers on who آپ consider the culprits are, true as it may be, and we don't know. It isn't supposed to be a serious subject matter, but then I brought it up, lol, never mind. I just wish to inform you.
They were here first, and I mean it, literally. All آپ need is some major club activity in the early days of the site and you'll be an instant fan, then you'll progressively rise up and up every time آپ make a move. Eventually, you're on the سب, سب سے اوپر five in the page.
I haven't tried it myself, and I don't plan to, but this is the most evident way I can find.
And another thing I noticed is how آپ اقدام towards a much higher ranking if آپ write articles. Something I noticed when I wrote a few مضامین here (My rank was moved three times).
So that's all! Don't try and point fingers on who آپ consider the culprits are, true as it may be, and we don't know. It isn't supposed to be a serious subject matter, but then I brought it up, lol, never mind. I just wish to inform you.
Fathers and Sons
PROLOUGE: EXPERIMENTS
"Thank آپ for like saving my life Finn and Jake."LSP said. LSP ran off. "Bye LSP."Finn said. "Phew! What a دن man."Jake کہا as they walked along. But they didn't notice that Ice King was lonely. Despair. Loneliness. All he wanted was something مزید than a princess. He just can't put his finger on it. Maybe if he steals some hair from Finn, he would know the answer to his problem.
Later that evening when Finn and Jake were asleep, the Ice King flew carefully inside. All he brought was a pair of scissors. He gently removed Finn's hat, cut a piece of Finn's hair, put the hat back from Finn and flew away. Ice King has an installed DNA scanner that was kept in for years. He opened it, cut his beard, put Finn's hair and his beard in the scanner and waited for two hours.
2 hours later...
Ice King heard a beep signal. He woke up. He checked and discoverd the truth.
PROLOUGE: EXPERIMENTS
"Thank آپ for like saving my life Finn and Jake."LSP said. LSP ran off. "Bye LSP."Finn said. "Phew! What a دن man."Jake کہا as they walked along. But they didn't notice that Ice King was lonely. Despair. Loneliness. All he wanted was something مزید than a princess. He just can't put his finger on it. Maybe if he steals some hair from Finn, he would know the answer to his problem.
Later that evening when Finn and Jake were asleep, the Ice King flew carefully inside. All he brought was a pair of scissors. He gently removed Finn's hat, cut a piece of Finn's hair, put the hat back from Finn and flew away. Ice King has an installed DNA scanner that was kept in for years. He opened it, cut his beard, put Finn's hair and his beard in the scanner and waited for two hours.
2 hours later...
Ice King heard a beep signal. He woke up. He checked and discoverd the truth.
