Alright, I got some تبصرے on my last Slendermane story. Most of them کہا stuff like "It should be 20% longer". So I revised it, and made it, just as the شائقین requested 20% longer. Here it is!
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Twilight Sparkle groggily jumped out of bed, wobbling when her hooves hit the floor. She had been at one of Pinkie Pie's midnight parties again, and she was beginning to suffer the cosequences of it. Black lines were under her eyes and her mane was all out of place. She picked herself up and yawned.
"Goood moooorning Spiiike...." she groaned.
"Hey, Twilight!"...
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