CHAPTER TWO
Present day
THEO
Theo sat in an alleyway, for the past nine years his life had been horrendous. When he arrived at the orphanage, his life hadn’t gotten worse, but it had gotten weirder, then he was kicked out for some other weird stuff he didn’t understand. But he couldn’t dwell in the past, he had to move on. And here he was, homeless, cold and terribly broke.
He was half Latin American, half African American, he had black hair with thick short curls. His mahogany eyes gleamed brilliantly in the dark alley. He wore tattered clothes after spending a month on the streets of New York. He slipped out an old crumpled folded paper from his pocket. He opened it and his eyes became teary. In the picture, was his parents. They held a little baby in their hands. He held his head in dismay as he wondered what his life had come to.
All of a sudden, a man in a military uniform and haircut walked into the alley. He stood in the middle of the alley and stared at Theo. Theo slipped the picture in his pocket and rose from the floor.
“Umm, can I help you?” he asked as he wiped the tears and grime from his cheek.
“Yes, you can he help me,” he replied in a soft but dangerous voice. He smirked as he walked closer. Then his silhouette transformed. He grew taller and his hands changed to claws.
Theo’s eyes opened wide. He tried to make a run for it but it was like the military/ monster thingy was somehow shooting huge iron rivets from behind him. Quickly, Theo picked up a garbage can lid and ran with it out of the alleyway using it as a shield from the flying rivets.
He ran onto the highway dodging cars so he could reach the median. Theo turned and he saw the monster perfectly now. He still wore his military uniform, but his claws curled from his fingertips. And a dark tail behind him like a scorpion’s. The tail shot another rivet, this one Theo saw perfectly, it was shiny and fatally sharp. Theo ducked his head and barely missed that one.
He still had about 12 feet from the median, he dodged another car and tried to dart toward the median again but he hear a loud smash behind him, he turned and saw the monster 10 feet away from him holding in his hands above his head, a Mitsubishi, Lancer.
The Monster threw the car at Theo. He screamed at the top of his lungs as the car soared through the air in is direction. Frantically, he ran across the median and dodged the car. The scorpion monster advanced surprisingly quickly.
In desperation, Theo held up his hands, from nowhere, grapevines burst through the asphalt in the highway and wrapped around the scorpion monster. More vines burst through the cracks and tightened themselves around the monster turning him into a giant grapevine stalk.
After seeing what occurred, Theo’s head pounded with pain. His vision got blurry and he staggered to the ground. It was probably his imagination, but he saw a kid, about a year older than him peering over him. He had sea-green eyes and jet black, windblown hair. He wore an orange t shirt. There was another kid, she was about three years older than him, had a buff torso and had stringy brown hair. She folded her hands over him.
“Is he alive?” she asked.
After that, Theo blacked out.
hey guys, maybe you can help me out by giving me some criticism, is it good, bad, or alright? thanks :)
Present day
THEO
Theo sat in an alleyway, for the past nine years his life had been horrendous. When he arrived at the orphanage, his life hadn’t gotten worse, but it had gotten weirder, then he was kicked out for some other weird stuff he didn’t understand. But he couldn’t dwell in the past, he had to move on. And here he was, homeless, cold and terribly broke.
He was half Latin American, half African American, he had black hair with thick short curls. His mahogany eyes gleamed brilliantly in the dark alley. He wore tattered clothes after spending a month on the streets of New York. He slipped out an old crumpled folded paper from his pocket. He opened it and his eyes became teary. In the picture, was his parents. They held a little baby in their hands. He held his head in dismay as he wondered what his life had come to.
All of a sudden, a man in a military uniform and haircut walked into the alley. He stood in the middle of the alley and stared at Theo. Theo slipped the picture in his pocket and rose from the floor.
“Umm, can I help you?” he asked as he wiped the tears and grime from his cheek.
“Yes, you can he help me,” he replied in a soft but dangerous voice. He smirked as he walked closer. Then his silhouette transformed. He grew taller and his hands changed to claws.
Theo’s eyes opened wide. He tried to make a run for it but it was like the military/ monster thingy was somehow shooting huge iron rivets from behind him. Quickly, Theo picked up a garbage can lid and ran with it out of the alleyway using it as a shield from the flying rivets.
He ran onto the highway dodging cars so he could reach the median. Theo turned and he saw the monster perfectly now. He still wore his military uniform, but his claws curled from his fingertips. And a dark tail behind him like a scorpion’s. The tail shot another rivet, this one Theo saw perfectly, it was shiny and fatally sharp. Theo ducked his head and barely missed that one.
He still had about 12 feet from the median, he dodged another car and tried to dart toward the median again but he hear a loud smash behind him, he turned and saw the monster 10 feet away from him holding in his hands above his head, a Mitsubishi, Lancer.
The Monster threw the car at Theo. He screamed at the top of his lungs as the car soared through the air in is direction. Frantically, he ran across the median and dodged the car. The scorpion monster advanced surprisingly quickly.
In desperation, Theo held up his hands, from nowhere, grapevines burst through the asphalt in the highway and wrapped around the scorpion monster. More vines burst through the cracks and tightened themselves around the monster turning him into a giant grapevine stalk.
After seeing what occurred, Theo’s head pounded with pain. His vision got blurry and he staggered to the ground. It was probably his imagination, but he saw a kid, about a year older than him peering over him. He had sea-green eyes and jet black, windblown hair. He wore an orange t shirt. There was another kid, she was about three years older than him, had a buff torso and had stringy brown hair. She folded her hands over him.
“Is he alive?” she asked.
After that, Theo blacked out.
hey guys, maybe you can help me out by giving me some criticism, is it good, bad, or alright? thanks :)