Chapter 6 part 1 : Somthing just isn't right..
NOTE: This is just a VERY short chapter thats being گیا کیا پوسٹ leading up to the اگلے large chapter which will be گیا کیا پوسٹ TOMOROW @ 5 PM EASTERN.
This is IN THE POV OF JACOB. Starting from where the last chapter ended.
I put this in because I found that what happened while Renesmee is gone was an small - put very important peice of the اگلے few chapters and thought I should share it with you.
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Chapter 6 - Part 1: Somthing Just Isnt right..
I sat beside Elisabeth as I waited for Renesmee to return. Elisabeth was playing aimlessly with one of her dolls, giggling. She reminded me a little bit of Nessie when she was small. Speaking of Renesmee, she was taking longer then expected.. Maybe somthing is wrong.
I started to worry as I let the thought wander my mind. Just as I stood up to check on her, she walked in. Somthing was wrong - She seemed a bit shooken up.
"Renesmee?" I asked slowly as she walked in.
She looked up at me - realising what she had looked like and smiled. She was pretty good at hiding her emotions - unless of course she is caught off guard like this time.
"Oh, ارے Jake. How is Elisabeth?"
I looked down to check - but she had already dropped her toy and was holding onto Nessie.
"Renesmee!" She exclaimed happily.
I smiled watching them interact. There was somthing..special about it. Maybe it's the fact they can interact with eachother so well - It was always a mystery to me how she was able to do that. Renesmee is just generaly good with children.
"How are آپ feeling?" Renesmee asked Elisabeth.
"Im good"
Renesmee is always worrying about everyone- but herself of course. I watched her for a moment. Her face smiled but her eyes were careful - watching me as if im going to acuse her of somthing. I swiftly walked towards her, Careful of Elisabeth.
I kept her gaze for a moment, watching her eyes. I could tell somthing was off - She looked back down avoiding me.
"Elisabeth, Why don't آپ go play some more?"
she suggested - سیکنڈ after Elisabeth was on the ground with her doll again.
I stood infront of Renesmee, taking a hold of her hand carefully.
" Is everything alright, Nessie?"
She hesistated, startled سے طرف کی my question. Looking down she smiled and nodded once;
"Everything is fine"
I stood there with her - silent. Somthing was up - and we both knew it. She wasn't one to lie - especialy to me. I started to worry مزید - my دل beated faster as i considered the posibilites.
She didn't seem injured - Maybe she knows somthing about Elisabeth یا - I didn't even wan't to think of someone injuring her. I lightly pulled her face towards me,
"Renesmee?" I کہا - challenging her earlier statment.
She bit her lip, watching me. "Really Jake, everything is okay"
She pulled away, and went to go sit with Elisabeth. Somthing was off, somthing wasn't right. Renesmee isn't usualy this distanced..
Suddenly an awful smell filled the air - I turned around meeting his - it's gaze.
"Alec" I heard Renesmee call - standing behind me.
I imedeitly tensed up. I wrapped my arm around Renesmee, holding her closer towards me. I didn't like this kid one bit. I don't understand how Renesmee could be so forgiving towards him after what he had done to her.
I glared at him - hoping he would be leaving soon.
" I hope I'm not inturupting anything.."
He was speaking towards me, yet his eyes stayed on Renesmee. I hated the way he looked at her - It was as if he owned her یا somthing, which definitly is not the case. But it wasn't just looking - it was staring.
I flashed my eyes towards Renesmee - who I expected to be avoiding him yet she was staring back.
I started to worry - What was going on between them? I pulled Renesee a little closer in response to my thought. It stayed like this for a moment - until Renesmee broke the silence.
"Was there somthing آپ needed?" Her voice was a bit on edge - annoyed, almost. This gave me some relife.
He looked at me for a second, then back to Renesmee.
"Aro would like to speak with آپ - and Elisabeth"
I felt her stop for a moment. Stop talking, breathing, moving. Just stop. As if her life had been put on pause.
I looked down nervously at her. She had a worried, wide eyed expression on her face as if she was just دیا terrible news.
I looked back accusingly at Alec - In time to see him shake his head. Following, she let out a breath - regaining composure. What had worried her? Could it have to do with the way she was acting earlier?
She nodded once and turned to meet my gaze.
"I'll be right back"
I pulled her in and hugged her. I never liked her leaving - The last time she کہا I'll be right back, she snuck off to Italy, possibly to her death. I sighed.
She carefully took Elisabeth سے طرف کی the hand - Who nervously went to her side. Elisabeth didn't like the Volturi either - if only Renesmee had as much awareness of what danger was..
"I promise" She assured me before leaving.
I felt empty when she was gone - Like half of me had just gone up and walked away. In reality - it had. I looked back towards where Alec stood and to my surprise he hadn't gone with her - he stared slyly back at me.
"A little over protective, are we?" He said, accusingly.
"Do آپ blame me? I can't trust your kind" I کہا bitterly towards him.
He laughed "You think your any safer, dog?"
I looked at him, angrily. "I would never hurt Renesmee!" I spat through my teeth.
"..Well not on purpose - But we all have our slip-ups.."
"What are آپ trying to say, bloodsucker?"
He walked closer towards me , stopping only a couple a feet infront of me.
" I'm just saying that your not her only choice.."
I watched him in awe. No, he wasn't taking Renesmee from me! I'm not going to lose the one I love to a dirty bloodsucker, not again.
"You stay away from her" I warned him - staring into his mocking bloodred eyes.
He smirked "You know Jacob, your pretty lucky. For now, Renesmee's young - easily persuaded. It won't take long.."
Before I could respond he was gone.
No!
This can't be happening, it can't. He isn't good for her, not like I am. But I have to trust Renesmee, She loves me. And I'll always love her -
even if she does decide to -
No, I can't think like that.
Had he confronted her? Is that why she was so shooken up earliar?
I might have to keep a closer eye on her then I thought. I can't beilive this is happening to me again.
And I can tell he isn't going to back down without a fight - so if it's a fight he wants, then it's a fight he'll get.
NOTE: This is just a VERY short chapter thats being گیا کیا پوسٹ leading up to the اگلے large chapter which will be گیا کیا پوسٹ TOMOROW @ 5 PM EASTERN.
This is IN THE POV OF JACOB. Starting from where the last chapter ended.
I put this in because I found that what happened while Renesmee is gone was an small - put very important peice of the اگلے few chapters and thought I should share it with you.
COMMENT, BECOME A FAN, LIKE .. ETC. It lets me know آپ care <3
Ill almost shut up (; just one مزید thing; Let me know if آپ want مزید different POV'S and who آپ want them to be in - maybe someone such as Alec? یا if your prefer staying in Renesmee's pov (:
THANKS FOR READING/MESSAGING/GIVING FEEDBACK
<333 -Brianna
Chapter 6 - Part 1: Somthing Just Isnt right..
I sat beside Elisabeth as I waited for Renesmee to return. Elisabeth was playing aimlessly with one of her dolls, giggling. She reminded me a little bit of Nessie when she was small. Speaking of Renesmee, she was taking longer then expected.. Maybe somthing is wrong.
I started to worry as I let the thought wander my mind. Just as I stood up to check on her, she walked in. Somthing was wrong - She seemed a bit shooken up.
"Renesmee?" I asked slowly as she walked in.
She looked up at me - realising what she had looked like and smiled. She was pretty good at hiding her emotions - unless of course she is caught off guard like this time.
"Oh, ارے Jake. How is Elisabeth?"
I looked down to check - but she had already dropped her toy and was holding onto Nessie.
"Renesmee!" She exclaimed happily.
I smiled watching them interact. There was somthing..special about it. Maybe it's the fact they can interact with eachother so well - It was always a mystery to me how she was able to do that. Renesmee is just generaly good with children.
"How are آپ feeling?" Renesmee asked Elisabeth.
"Im good"
Renesmee is always worrying about everyone- but herself of course. I watched her for a moment. Her face smiled but her eyes were careful - watching me as if im going to acuse her of somthing. I swiftly walked towards her, Careful of Elisabeth.
I kept her gaze for a moment, watching her eyes. I could tell somthing was off - She looked back down avoiding me.
"Elisabeth, Why don't آپ go play some more?"
she suggested - سیکنڈ after Elisabeth was on the ground with her doll again.
I stood infront of Renesmee, taking a hold of her hand carefully.
" Is everything alright, Nessie?"
She hesistated, startled سے طرف کی my question. Looking down she smiled and nodded once;
"Everything is fine"
I stood there with her - silent. Somthing was up - and we both knew it. She wasn't one to lie - especialy to me. I started to worry مزید - my دل beated faster as i considered the posibilites.
She didn't seem injured - Maybe she knows somthing about Elisabeth یا - I didn't even wan't to think of someone injuring her. I lightly pulled her face towards me,
"Renesmee?" I کہا - challenging her earlier statment.
She bit her lip, watching me. "Really Jake, everything is okay"
She pulled away, and went to go sit with Elisabeth. Somthing was off, somthing wasn't right. Renesmee isn't usualy this distanced..
Suddenly an awful smell filled the air - I turned around meeting his - it's gaze.
"Alec" I heard Renesmee call - standing behind me.
I imedeitly tensed up. I wrapped my arm around Renesmee, holding her closer towards me. I didn't like this kid one bit. I don't understand how Renesmee could be so forgiving towards him after what he had done to her.
I glared at him - hoping he would be leaving soon.
" I hope I'm not inturupting anything.."
He was speaking towards me, yet his eyes stayed on Renesmee. I hated the way he looked at her - It was as if he owned her یا somthing, which definitly is not the case. But it wasn't just looking - it was staring.
I flashed my eyes towards Renesmee - who I expected to be avoiding him yet she was staring back.
I started to worry - What was going on between them? I pulled Renesee a little closer in response to my thought. It stayed like this for a moment - until Renesmee broke the silence.
"Was there somthing آپ needed?" Her voice was a bit on edge - annoyed, almost. This gave me some relife.
He looked at me for a second, then back to Renesmee.
"Aro would like to speak with آپ - and Elisabeth"
I felt her stop for a moment. Stop talking, breathing, moving. Just stop. As if her life had been put on pause.
I looked down nervously at her. She had a worried, wide eyed expression on her face as if she was just دیا terrible news.
I looked back accusingly at Alec - In time to see him shake his head. Following, she let out a breath - regaining composure. What had worried her? Could it have to do with the way she was acting earlier?
She nodded once and turned to meet my gaze.
"I'll be right back"
I pulled her in and hugged her. I never liked her leaving - The last time she کہا I'll be right back, she snuck off to Italy, possibly to her death. I sighed.
She carefully took Elisabeth سے طرف کی the hand - Who nervously went to her side. Elisabeth didn't like the Volturi either - if only Renesmee had as much awareness of what danger was..
"I promise" She assured me before leaving.
I felt empty when she was gone - Like half of me had just gone up and walked away. In reality - it had. I looked back towards where Alec stood and to my surprise he hadn't gone with her - he stared slyly back at me.
"A little over protective, are we?" He said, accusingly.
"Do آپ blame me? I can't trust your kind" I کہا bitterly towards him.
He laughed "You think your any safer, dog?"
I looked at him, angrily. "I would never hurt Renesmee!" I spat through my teeth.
"..Well not on purpose - But we all have our slip-ups.."
"What are آپ trying to say, bloodsucker?"
He walked closer towards me , stopping only a couple a feet infront of me.
" I'm just saying that your not her only choice.."
I watched him in awe. No, he wasn't taking Renesmee from me! I'm not going to lose the one I love to a dirty bloodsucker, not again.
"You stay away from her" I warned him - staring into his mocking bloodred eyes.
He smirked "You know Jacob, your pretty lucky. For now, Renesmee's young - easily persuaded. It won't take long.."
Before I could respond he was gone.
No!
This can't be happening, it can't. He isn't good for her, not like I am. But I have to trust Renesmee, She loves me. And I'll always love her -
even if she does decide to -
No, I can't think like that.
Had he confronted her? Is that why she was so shooken up earliar?
I might have to keep a closer eye on her then I thought. I can't beilive this is happening to me again.
And I can tell he isn't going to back down without a fight - so if it's a fight he wants, then it's a fight he'll get.
i couldn't let myself even think for a سیکنڈ that i could ease Rosalies Pain.
i never thought that anyone could, not even Emmett at his full best, and here i sit with everything she ever wanted, and i dont even want it. how could i be so selfish to tie the knot and give up the chance that i might regret for a long time adn might risk a wonderful friendship.
What about Alice, and esme? They may not have asked but i know they would pass up the oppurtunitie.
And what about myself. I've already had a baby, ive got a daughter, but i will regret this later too.
I have the most precious gift for a vampire in my grasp and idont want it, if only i could give it away.
What would Happen to me, if i did use this. would i die, really truely die,
and jacob, his pack wouldnt not agree. i cant please anyone.
"Bella" i tunefull voice whispered outside.
i never thought that anyone could, not even Emmett at his full best, and here i sit with everything she ever wanted, and i dont even want it. how could i be so selfish to tie the knot and give up the chance that i might regret for a long time adn might risk a wonderful friendship.
What about Alice, and esme? They may not have asked but i know they would pass up the oppurtunitie.
And what about myself. I've already had a baby, ive got a daughter, but i will regret this later too.
I have the most precious gift for a vampire in my grasp and idont want it, if only i could give it away.
What would Happen to me, if i did use this. would i die, really truely die,
and jacob, his pack wouldnt not agree. i cant please anyone.
"Bella" i tunefull voice whispered outside.
Rose
10 Ways to Annoy Rosalie Hale:
10. Tell her that, because everyone thinks she and Jasper are twins, they should get together. When she asks why, say that Incest is in at the moment.
9. Call her “Ice Queen” behind her back and to her face.
8. Whenever she argues anything, respond with “Whatever, bimbo.”
7. Claim that being a human ain’t so great.
6. When she argues the above claim, respond with “Whatever, bimbo.”
5. Try to exorcise her and her evil ways.
4. Tell everyone that Edward didn’t go to Italy because Rosalie کہا Bella was dead – he went to Italy because he envisioned Rosalie’s ugly face.
3. Call her “Hoe-salie” at least once, to her face.
2. Remind her that Edward chose a pathetic human girl over her.
And the Number One way to annoy Rosalie Hale?
1. Steal her silver cell phone and change the ringtone to “Roxanne” سے طرف کی The Police. When she asks why the hell آپ did it, say that she reminds آپ of Roxanne.
10. Tell her that, because everyone thinks she and Jasper are twins, they should get together. When she asks why, say that Incest is in at the moment.
9. Call her “Ice Queen” behind her back and to her face.
8. Whenever she argues anything, respond with “Whatever, bimbo.”
7. Claim that being a human ain’t so great.
6. When she argues the above claim, respond with “Whatever, bimbo.”
5. Try to exorcise her and her evil ways.
4. Tell everyone that Edward didn’t go to Italy because Rosalie کہا Bella was dead – he went to Italy because he envisioned Rosalie’s ugly face.
3. Call her “Hoe-salie” at least once, to her face.
2. Remind her that Edward chose a pathetic human girl over her.
And the Number One way to annoy Rosalie Hale?
1. Steal her silver cell phone and change the ringtone to “Roxanne” سے طرف کی The Police. When she asks why the hell آپ did it, say that she reminds آپ of Roxanne.
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Summary: Edward was investigating the perfect murder. Part of his job was to protect the only witness's identity from the murderer. But can he control his feelings for her, and can he handle the secrets she hides? AH/AU;E/B
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Summary: Edward was investigating the perfect murder. Part of his job was to protect the only witness's identity from the murderer. But can he control his feelings for her, and can he handle the secrets she hides? AH/AU;E/B
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With Eclipse on the horizon it would be fun to share our پسندیدہ Eclipse quotes. Quotes should be left as تبصرے and with a page number so we can all see them in context. So what is your پسندیدہ line in Eclipse?
I love it on page 58 when Bella is recalling watching Edward and Alice play chess: "Edward and Alice playing chess was one of the funniest things I'd ever seen. They'd sat there nearly motionless, staring at the board, while Alice foresaw the moves he would make and he picked the moves she would make in return out of her head. They played most of the game in their minds; I think they'd each moved two pawns when Alice suddenly flicked her king over and surrendered. It took all of three minutes."
I love it on page 58 when Bella is recalling watching Edward and Alice play chess: "Edward and Alice playing chess was one of the funniest things I'd ever seen. They'd sat there nearly motionless, staring at the board, while Alice foresaw the moves he would make and he picked the moves she would make in return out of her head. They played most of the game in their minds; I think they'd each moved two pawns when Alice suddenly flicked her king over and surrendered. It took all of three minutes."
