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1) We never get to hear about Edward's bachelor party, and did Alice even plan a bachelorette party for Bella?

2) There was not enough character development for the Denali clan. I felt like they were just empty, filler-characters to give the Cullens allies later on in the book.

3) The story of the 'immortal children' was just randomly thrown into the story at the wrong time and felt out of place. I would have rather learnt مزید about the Denali clan than their deceased mother.

4) I absolutely loved the wedding ceremony that Alice planned (Go Team Alice!) and in my head, the dresses, decorations, and Edward in a tux were all beautiful. My only qualm with this scene is that I don't think Bella should have cried as she said, "I do." Plus, their little make-out session at the altar is gooey and out of place. I know that Bella supposedly loves Edward مزید than anything else in the world, but she is, as a part of her nature, extremely self-conscious and dislikes attention. But that's just me being a little too picky as I go back and scan the book for the parts that bothered me.

5) I would have liked to have seen مزید of the humans at the wedding reception, but oh well. (as a side note, when did Edward vomit the piece of cake he swallowed at the wedding?)

6) I loved how Jake showed up outside the wedding, but, of course, Bella has to cause even مزید werewolf angst and go into the 'gritty-details' of her wedding night. I totally agree with Jake here, since he, throughout the entire book, is the only one who really wants to keep Bella محفوظ and is desperate to do anything for her.

7) Ok, who else thought that Isle Esme was completely ridiculous and gooshey (yes, i do own the copyright to the word gooshey now haha). Of course, Edward just can't take Bella to Hawaii یا Europe (but far enough away from the Volturi). No, he has to borrow an island his family OWNS! *heavy sarcasm

8) I'm starting to sense a really out of character-ness for Bella. She's not objecting to any of these ridiculous things Edward is giving her and she's shoved the Jake fiasco into a 'Jacob-drawer.' Ridiculous. Even on her honeymoon she would be angsty and worrying about Jake.

9) I think Bella's nervousness and her courage as she goes out to the ساحل سمندر, بیچ was perfect and I think that Stephenie did a great job in this scene. Although I really think Alice would have included some sweat pants for Bella.

10) Fade out to morning after, Edward's typical self-hate, and the pillows were all good to the storyline. Steph starts to use مزید curse words here, which kind of surprised me.

11) Can Bella only eat eggs?

12) Bella's hormones eventually take over and she 'seduces' Edward with her dream. Kinda freaky? haha. Then she completely DOESN'T want to become a vampire, even though she had absolutely decided to become one at the end of Eclipse.

13) Ok, the cleaning crew. Come on, I mean what are the chances of having a superstitious cleaning crew who knows everything there is to know about vampire-human relations. Its just downright obvious that Steph has something planned with these people in the future, even though there's no character development with these random strangers.

14) Ok, now it starts to get ridiculous. Hasn't Stephenie told us that vampires can't get pregnant? I mean, I know that Bella still can but the idea is so utterly preposterous that I can't believe that Meyers would do this to the book. At this point I was thinking, "Did someone put a fake copy of this book in the bookstore just to fool with someone's head!? It's reading like a fan-fiction I read months ago, but somehow worse!"

15) Why would the cleaning woman, so utterly terrified of Edward's vampiric qualities, help him and give him information that he needed? How did he ask the right questions? Its not like, "Hey, Kaure, I just knocked up my human gf and we think she's kinda sorta really pregnant, so what will the weird thing inside of her do?" No. That could not happen. Even Edward with his dazzling charms could not pull off that conversation.

16) Ok, so now that I'm furious at Edward for being so careless and stupid and disappointed that Bella has gotten a personality makeover and really angry at Steph for doing this to me, the only character left to me is Jake. I will admit that I was one of the Jacob haters before the release of the book. Now, Team Jacob all the way! I enjoyed part of the book in Jake's point of view, but it seemed to drag too much.

17) Claire/Quil was cute, but the baby talk was annoying and demeaning.

18) Edward asking Jake to get Bella pregnant?! I mean, come on Stephenie. Even in his darkest pit of torturous despair, he never would have asked that. It was out of character entirely. I couldn't believe that Jake had the courage to actually discuss it with Bella because it was so out of the question.

19) Now, Rosalie is made into a hero in Bella’s eyes, only because Rose wants Bella to die so Rosalie can get what she always wanted, a child. I wish Carlisle and Edward had temporarily disassemble Rosalie because she’s annoying and cause me to lose all of the positive opinions of her I had after reading Eclipse. She just turned into a desperate, baby-starved, psycho vamp.

20) I do love the titles for Jake's chapters. They're just so...Jake.

21) The italicized type for the thoughts of the werewolves was a tad confusing.

22) Its great that Jake forms his own pack and I now love Seth and Leah. Team Leah! Because she’s independent and can hold her own.

23) It was so obvious from Jake’s first thought of Bella drinking blood that she would end up doing it. If vamps are supposed to be so much smarter than humans, then how did these idiots not think of having Bella digest blood. It seems like all of them are rapidly losing their IQ.

24) With the biological explanation of Bella’s baby, it seemed like Stephenie was trying to make the idea of mutant spawn plausible, which was utterly ridiculous and annoying.

25) Ok, Bella drinks blood. And. She. Likes. It. WHAT?! This story makes no sense and Bella has lost all of her humanity. Wasn’t she horribly repulsed سے طرف کی blood from the very start? As a side note, why does Carlisle have a virtual hospital at his house and why does he have human blood if he’s a vegan vamp? He کہا the blood was for Bella when she changed, but why would she drink human blood if she was trying to be a veggie vampire like the rest of her family? No. Sense. Whatsoever.

26) Too much werewolf angst and tension that wasted about 100 pages. I suffered through the 700 page book.

27) I love how Leah gets furious with the pack if they think about seeing her naked and the blonde jokes are hilarious. Plus I love the dog food bowl and You. Got. Food. In. My. Hair.

28) Rose gets so territorial it’s ridiculous.

29) A فاؤنٹین, چشمہ of blood? Ok, now the birth scene. Gruesome. It was stupid of Carlisle to leave hunting when Bella needed him the most. He should have done a C-section یا something. Her spine cracks? I think Steph is just playing it up to دکھائیں that Bella is sacrificing everything she has, just to leave her dead with a husband who is going to commit suicide because of her death but has to suffer and take care of her mutant spawn. I can add pregnancy and birth to my فہرست of phobias because of this horrific, violent birth scene. Thanks Steph.

30) I thought that once people’s hearts stopped beating, it was impossible for venom to bring them back to life. Oh well, since we’re so far out with vampire babies why not add some مزید impossibilities to tick us off. I mean, I know that the world of vampires is not reality, but still, it must have some rules and boundaries and the rules can’t bend and break for Bella just because she’s ‘special.’

31) RENESMEE?! What kind of a name is that?!

32) WHAT?! Jacob. Can. Not. Imprint. On. Bella’s. Mutant. Spawn. If I wasn’t for Team Jacob I would have laughed at his unluckiness. But of course, Steph is trying to make this a happy story for everyone, even though it’s just turning out into a disastrous death spiral of crappy writing. For the other three books, the problems throughout the book for at least one character were the things that made the کتابیں seem like reality. In this book, it reads too much like a fairy tale with everyone living their own happy, perfect lives. That does not happen. Reality is not a fairy tale with happy endings. Bella and Edward can’t just walk off into the sunset, abandoning their problems and expecting all their troubles to disappear forever.

33) The representation of the pain was good, but when she awoke as a vampire, something didn’t feel right to me. I finally realized what was the matter. The Twilight series up until this point was focused around the central problem of Bella remaining human and attracting bad luck because of her blood. I was halfway through the book and the main problem of the entire series was over. The rest, I realized, was just going to be fluff. And I was right.

34) Her ease at becoming a vegan vamp is just sickening and utterly absurd.

35) Bella has lost all of her personality when she becomes a vampire. She is no longer self-conscious and dependent upon Edward. She’s intelligent now as a vampire (sorry but her stupidity in parts of the other کتابیں annoyed me) but I think Bella was right about one thing when she was a human, that she wouldn’t be the same after her transformation. And she was right. There is no one in this book that we can relate to now. All the characters have been distorted and lost all of their former characteristics.

36) Renesmee is just annoying the hell out of me. She’s the perfect, most beautiful child in the world who’s already able to communicate, doesn’t make any messes, has special powers, and is adored سے طرف کی everyone. It’s just sickening. When Bella says, “my little nudger,” it makes me cringe.

37) Bella is just strange when she gets mad at Jake when he imprints on her freako spawn. Why should she be mad at Jake? She already knows that imprinting is involuntary. She’s just having another human spaz attack, but as a vamp with perfect self-control. Jake, at least, gave the creature a decent name, Nessie, instead of freaking Renesmee.

38) Bella gets a loveshack for her birthday? Are آپ serious? Totally fanfic.

39) CHARLIE?! What? Ok, now I’m furious at Steph. Everything Bella sacrificed as a human is coming back to her like her choice to become a vampire had no adverse consequences. Plus, I’m pretty sure Charlie WOULD freak out if he saw Jake get naked and then transform.

40) Carlie? Now this is totally cheesy. I’m cringing too much.


41) I know the strength of newborns is supposed to be much stronger than the strength of an older vamp, but come on, Emmett’s strength feeling like a feather? That’s too extreme.

42) Bella receives a jumbo diamond from Aro. Totally random and unnecessary.

43) Irina going to the Volturi? If Irina was mentally scarred سے طرف کی the fact that her mother was killed because of her immortal children creations, then why would she want the Cullens to experience that kind of grief and unending torture? I mean, why would she want to be a ‘purist when it came to the law?’ Can’t she hear the spawn’s heartbeat? Seriously, if vamps can hear what is happening miles away, can’t they hear a half-human’s heartbeat?

44) I think the idea of meeting all the other Amazonian and Scottish vampires is an awesome idea, but since they’re so many of them, I feel like each is just a printed name on the page with no depth.

45) When Alice writes in her note, “There isn’t time to write,” it annoyed me because aren’t all vampires able to write super-fast?

46) Why has the entire treaty disappeared and why does no one care about it anymore?

47) The whole sub-plot with J. Jenks had potential to be cool, but it fizzled out because it went nowhere. Plus, all that effort Bella went through wasn’t needed and it just wasted مزید pages in this already long and stretched out book.

48) I think Alec’s talent is totally bamf. Eleazar is an awesome name, too.

49) I think the shield power is really weird but necessary in order to find an answer to solve this droning, convoluted plotline when the Volturi come. سے طرف کی this time I was suffering so much that I only skimmed the paragraphs.

50) Bella gets all defensive about Renesmee which gets old really quickly.

51) I suppose its Steph’s good intentions, but the thing between Sue and Charlie is kinda weird. Its nice that Charlie has someone to cook for him and someone to talk to, but as long as they don’t get married یا anything…which would be really creepy in my opinion. It’d be like, hey, lets have Charlie marry the wife of his dead best friend. Eww. No. That can’t happen.

52) Kate/Garrett is kinda cute, but really undeveloped and a little empty in my opinion.

53) Bella saying goodbye to Renesmee (eww the name is just so wrong and strange and eww) is just a waste because we all know that the Cullens will win against the Volturi like they always do. It’s just wasting paper on family gushy-ness which is sickening.

54) I absolutely love how the Volturi appear into the meadow because of its graceful creepiness. They produce an aura of unquestionable power and fear when they walk in their organized, graceful formations.

55) Of course, the Volturi have their moments of stupidity and can’t hear Renesmee’s heartbeat even thought their hearing is one thousand times better than human hearing.

56) Wait, so werewolves are no longer werewolves? They’re…shape-shifters? Wow, thanks Steph, I really needed to know.

57) The Volturi seem fine after they destroy Irina, actually happy to be there with the weird half-human mutant spawn. Then, they apparently have a sudden onslaught of PMS and immediately change their minds. Who knew old vampire men were so hormonal?

58) Garrett suddenly has his speech-moment which was really nice, but at this point, nothing could salvage the book.

59) Why does everyone have a little make-out session when they think they are all going to die? Annoying. Gooshey. Repetitive.

60) I like how Alice suddenly appeared with their ‘savior mutants’ but I really missed her throughout the book.

61) Happy Ending? Ugh. Out of character. Too perfect. Unrealistic.
posted by karpach_14
sorry guys this is my old story i couldnt log on my old account karpach_13 so i had to make this one and im moving all my stories here. thanks plz dont forget to تبصرہ

When I was entering my school. In every single conversation my name was repeated. Some of the people کہا ‘I don’t mind going out with her’ with a evil smile and the others were usual. Like ‘ who is she’ and ‘I can’t believe she is going to be at this school’ and ‘you don’t even know her’. I kept on walking without talking to someone یا not paying anymore attention to what people were saying. I got to...
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posted by teamalice_0
My last post was shorter than I would have liked so I made this one better. PS تبصرہ please and Have a good thanksgiving!(stuf your faces without feeling guilty ;)
-teamalice_0
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Tuesday morning, joy. Everyone hated Mondays and Tuesday was usualy dreary but better than Mondays. On the way to school I told Angela about my dream and کہا some of them were the Cullens but she never saw Dr.Cullen یا his wife. She thought it was odd because Im blind and I had a dream about them.

School has whispers going aroud, مزید than normal might I add, either...
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posted by LexisFaith
The Ending. Ages of all characters are at the bottom.
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Edward POV

"The kids will be here any second. آپ did get hot dogs for the little ones right?" Bella was finishing up the potato salad.

"Yes." I assured her. "And I even got some diced peaches so they could have something sweet."

She turned to me and smiled. "You were a great father. Still are." She walked over to me and kissed me.

"And you, were a wonderful mother. Still are." I kissed her fourhead and pulled her to the living room to sit on the couch. We looked around at the pictures that were...
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posted by Hellohoudini
Brazil Filming: The Sunday Update, Lapa Streets Blocked Off and Stephenie Visits With Fans
By Twilight_News | 7 November 2010
According to FoForks a series of streets in the LAPA section of Rio are closed today for Breaking Dawn filming. Preparations included changing the names on the سٹریٹ, گلی signs and adding in some graffiti. Rumor has it that it’s a scene involving a taxi driving through the streets of Rio. There is also some speculation about a scene involving Jacob and Nessie on the run in Rio (Bella’s vision/plan in Breaking Dawn II). However, in that neither Taylor Lautner nor MacKenzie...
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posted by uniquezandy
Edwards POV
Closer and closer, the thing was lurking around. I started to panick, so I quickly jumped on the branch; of the tree. But as I turned around, the she devil, (with مالٹا, نارنگی hair,) suddenly appeared. "You are playing games with me Edward, where is the human?" Victoria asked mysteriously. "I don't know." I yelled. "Well, give me what I want, یا it's Bellas life that would pay." She warned. I felt so mad when she کہا it. "Harm her and I will kill you." I warned back. The thing she wants, is a family herloom, what she can do with it, could be lethal. She vanished finally. What could I...
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posted by GothicGirl0525
Chapter 4
Once we get to the house, I looked around everywhere. Making sure Charlie یا anyone is not around hiding on the outskirts of my home. After I made sure it was safe, I unbuckled and gathered my stuff ready to blot inside my محفوظ home. Edward got out of the car, I noticed. He was opening my door for me. I gathered all of my جنک, فضول and was ready.
    “Are آپ alright to walk?” he asked. While he asked the questionable question, He grabbed all of my things out of my arms. I didn’t answer. “Are آپ okay to walk, Bella?” He asked again, after a few minutes. I just...
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posted by uniquezandy
This is a story where I added myself in.Yes, I am the vampwolf! Hope u like it.
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"She can't stay with us because she is part vampire!" The Quiliets protested. "The problem is she can't stay with us, being part Werewolf. Could she?" The clan threw back. "Hello, don't I get a say in this. آپ are deciding for me, like I am something to pass around and throw out when آپ get bored!" Marie-louise shouted. Hi, I am Marie-louise, sadly I am with the Denali clan at the moment and they are...
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posted by uniquezandy
I got the idea in history. Its just a story so don't hate me for it.
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Monday 21st April 1876
Dear diary,
Why must my father choose a suitor for me? Oh yeah now I remember, woman don't have power یا freedom and the father must choose. My father is dear Charles, (But I call him Charlie, because it's easy.) I used to have my mother Renne with us, but she got permission to leave town, because my father keeps beating her. It's horrible, everyday before she left there were a new bruise or...
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posted by jacob_lover5253
thank آپ soo much LexisFaith! This عنوان goes perfect for the fanfic! -Kayla

Chapter 2.

I pushed myself out of the بستر and went into the bathroom to get changed out of my pajamas. I looked myself over in the mirror. My eyes were red from crying. I didn't look okay. Oh well. I walked back to Edward in the bedroom. Only to find him gone. Great. He had to leave me alone. In my time of pain.

There was a knock at the front door. I ran down to get it. I opened the door to find Jacob standing there. He hugged me really tight with tears streaming down his face. "I know آپ miss her." I started to tear...
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posted by uniquezandy
Bellas POV
New school... new place... help me! I don't know why I am scared, but is is because; a saying might slip out from a centuary ago? Times have changed, and (unfortunatley,) I have to keep up with them. It's hard.
So it's 8 in the morning and I have to put on (what people call) jeans and a sweatshirt. It's comfortable honestly, but I prefer a dress anyday. Oh well now I have to go to the place of hell..

Edwards POV
New school... new place... help me! I am silly for being scared, but it is just school. I still wish my Bella was here with me though. She would make it all better. It's now...
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posted by GothicGirl0525
Chapter 1: BPOV
    “Isabella Mary Swan, get your پچھواڑے, گدا down here right now!” he yelled. I hurried out of بستر and ran downstairs to face the impending danger of my so called “father” Charlie Swan. My dad is the police officer for Forks, Washington. I know what you’re thinking that because he’s a cope he should be the good guy well guess again. Charlie has two different kinds of hobbies that make him different from about 75 % of the fathers of the United States of America. His first is to drink and when he wasn’t drinking he was doing his سیکنڈ hobby which was...
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posted by jacob_lover5253
Edward's POV:

I ran out the door with Jacob trailing me in his بھیڑیا form. What's happening? Jacob thought. "Bella was taken سے طرف کی Aro." I said. I heard a bang. A loud bang. Please don't let that be Aro hurting Bella let it be Bella hurting Aro. I ran faster and before I got any closer I heard three trees snap and the pack and Carlisle come up اگلے to Jacob and I. I'm not done with Bella just yet. One مزید and she's dead! I saw Bella through Aro's eyes. NO! She's hurt so bad. Her eyes are slowly closing. NO, BEllA, NO! آپ WILL LIVE! I thought to myself.

We broke through the trees just in time....
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posted by aMMazing14
I ran and ran, away from my problems away from my life, away from my Dad. I reached a grassy area in the woods that was surrounded سے طرف کی trees,
right now I could escape the reality of my life and just be at peace. I could enjoy the darkness and the cool breeze that crept past the trees. But
seeing that I'm me, something bad always has to happen, and as usual it does. So why am I so surprised? Woud anyone really care If I died right
here? یا would anyone even know?

I kept asking these سوالات to no one but myself as I saw the the large black بھیڑیا sourounded سے طرف کی a silhouette of silver moon light....
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Edwards Pov
I just can't get Bella out of my head! I can't stop thinking about her! The way we danced, and moved together and fitted together.It was like... we meant to be together. If only our families didn't hate eachother. When we got back , the سیکنڈ I tried to mention it; they hated the thought. And today we had a family meeting. Why must fate do this to me? It's so not fair...
" آپ know the past..." Esme began. Oh no! Here it comes. I can feel it. " Edward danced with Bella سوان, ہنس last night and آپ know the history Edward." Carlise stepped in. All my siblins just stared at me. It's so...
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I'm Bella سوان, ہنس and I'm 17. Í'm also the daughter of the Chief of Police of Forks, Charlie Swan, and Renee Dwyer, who died because of دل Disease.

And yes, I'm a girl, obviously.

But I'm transferring as a boy in Forks High.

Why, آپ ask? Because a girl isn't suppose to play باسکٹ, باسکٹ بال and I love باسکٹ, باسکٹ بال so very very very much. Even sacrificing my own gender just to get in the team. Well, I got in but the team hates me and of my good looks....at least they say I'm a hot looking boy and beats the crap out of me.

But accidentally fell in love with the wrong person...he's a jerk. a worm. an alien. a cockroach, a pig...

An angel sent from above.
posted by KatiiCullen94
 NESSIE at 2
NESSIE at 2
Edwards POV.

Bella waits in the meadow that no longer blossoms for us. Does the field even sense at as much as i would hate to admitt it that Bella and I have lost our love?
Or is just weeping it? Weeping for our nessie too? does this پھول remember the time when a little toddler brushed its petals and awweds. Does this balde of گھاس remember when my daughter played all day. Does this wind remember dancing in the locked of Renesmee?

FlashBack

"daddy come play!" renesmeee squiked in her ivory dress, while waddling in the tall grass.
A thud sounded in the tall grass, then a innocent chuckle.
"Daddy!...
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posted by whatupiloveyou
This chapter is just a filler. I wanted to update, but I have absolutely no ideas. All I know is that this story might be 2 یا 3 chapters longer. I hope to write another story when I get the idea, so if آپ have an idea and want to share it, I would love to hear it. Just a warning this is a shorter chapter, again just a filler. I was watching twilight and new moon last night after my baby was asleep, I found it weird that in twilight when Bella is like bleeding to death and Jasper is perfectly fine being in the same room with her. But in New Moon when she gives herself a paper cut, he has to...
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posted by lollipopszx3
"And done!" کہا Alice. She spun me towards the mirror.

I looked at myself closely. I didn't look that bad, actually. My skin looked a lot مزید cleaner. My hair was clipped and curled. The clothes I was wearing weren't actually the ones that Rosalie یا Tanya wore. They just showed a little مزید skin than I was used to.

"Well?" I asked for her opinon. I don't really know why I cared, but for some strange reason I did. Probably because of the talk that Alice was talking about. Maybe I didn't have to be mean to her after all.

"It's beautiful! Come on!" she کہا and pushed me downstairs. I moved...
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Hello, My Name Is: Death
Volume Seven
BuffyFaithfan1
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    I went up both staircases, knowing that Jerek went to his room upstairs, and I caught him just as he was about to close the door.
    "Jerek, just wait. Stop doing this. Stop shutting us out like we don't matter. I'm sorry about what happened, about what's happening. But...you can't keep hiding yourself up here, locking yourself away from the rest of us."
    "I'm not." Jerek said, and I closed the door behind me.
    "Then what are...
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Hello, My Name Is: Death
Volume Seven
BuffyFaithfan1
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    "Oh." I repeated, and she nodded.
    "We need to train, train, train, pronto!" She said, and started off for the lounge room that was full of everyone playing games and having fun.
    "Great." I said. "Another war."
    "No. Not another one. The last fight was a battle, this is the war." Jerek put an around me, and my eyes flicked to Tabra who was looking at us.
    "Are آپ okay, Tabra?" I asked him.
    "Just...
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