Hey Thankyou all so much for the comments! I still have my MAJOR writers block, but I will try and see how this turns out...
I hope you're enjoying my story. Don't forget to تبصرہ and tell me what آپ think, and if there is any thing I can improve on. Okay since of my writers block I just got this Idea... I hope آپ guys like it... I wrote part of this at 4:30 in the morning, so sorry if it doesn't make sense.
So here is the last bit That I had done in Edwards POV... It was so long ago....
"Bella, are آپ okay? What's wrong?" I knew Bella wouldn't call me unless it was an emergency. "Edward someone is here, in the house!" Bella sounded so scared, I wish I was there to protect her. Then it sunk in. "Bella, get out of the house now! Go to Jacob's." I knew Bella would be محفوظ there until I came back. There was no reply, "Bella are آپ there?" I was starting to get really scared that this would be the last time I could talk to her. "Edward, I Love you" Just when I was about to say it back, I heard a loud screaming sound coming from Bella. "Bella!" was all I could get through the phone before it went dead, "Beep, Beep, Beep."
"Carlisle, Esme, Jasper, Alice, Emmett, Rose!" I shouted out, they were all here within seconds. "what's the matter Edward?" Carlisle asked me, I could see he was thinking the worst scenario's that could happen. "It's Bella, We have to get back!"
Edward's POV
We all rushed to our cars, I was in the car with Alice and Jasper, Emmett and Rose were in Emmett's jeep, and Carlisle and Esme were in Carlisle's car. I looked at the clock it was 7:14, it had been 7 منٹ since Bella had called. I tried calling her back, "I'm sorry but this number had been disconnected" The annoying computer voice coming out of the phone told me.
"Ahhh!" And I threw my phone on the ground.
"Edward calm down. Bella will be okay." Alice کہا in a soft voice.
"Alice? Can آپ see Bella?" I asked her frantically.
"I'm trying Edward" Alice کہا back, almost as frantically as me. I felt like yelling at Alice, but it wasn't her fault. It's just so hard when I don't know if Bella is okay یا not. I would have asked Alice to drive faster, but she was already going the سب, سب سے اوپر speed to her car of 300km/h. I took a long deep breath and closed my eyes. I would not take this out on my family I repeated this over and over again in my head. Bella is going to be fine, Bella is going to be fine, Bella is going to be fine, Bella is going to be fine...
"EDWARD!" Alice shouted at me.
"WHAT?!" I shouted back.
"Will آپ shut up! Bella is going to be fine!" Alice half yelled at me now. Oops I didn't know I was saying that out loud.
"But آپ can't know for sure." I told her.
"I know Edward. But we have to think positive, for Bella's sake."
"I guess you're right." I replied
"Yes, I usually am." Alice said, she was thinking in her mind all the times that she was right and I wasn't.
"You're pushing it Alice." I warned her.
"I know" She کہا with her Alice grin.
I tried to block out Alice and Jaspers thoughts, it was a bit harder to block out Alice's though. I leaned back and closed my eyes again, hoping Bella was okay. What if she wasn't? What would I do without her?
There were so many سوالات swimming around in my mind. And how long was this car ride going to be?!?! Bella needs me and i'm stuck in this car, even if it is faster then us running, I just feel so helpless. The car ride normally takes us an گھنٹہ but that is going half the speed of what we are doing right now.
I only then realise that Alice was trying to get my attention, when I opened my eyes I saw here pointing to a sign. It was only then that I realised that it was the sing to Forks. I looked at the clock 7:46 we had been driving for 32 minutes, record time!
"Thank آپ Alice." I told her.
"Its okay, I'm worried about Bella too. We all are." She replied.
"Yeah" I کہا with a sigh.
"Edward, she will be okay." Alice told me... again.
"But what if she's not? What will we do then?" I asked. I know I should be thinking positive, but its so hard to do that when Bella isn't here with me.
"Edward. She will be okay!" Alice half yelled at me. "And if she's not, we will go to the ends of the Earth until she is okay." Alice said, she seemed very determined. And I knew what she کہا was true, none of us would give up if she wasn't okay.
I looked out the window we had slowed down, we were just about to come into Bella's street. I looked behind me to see Emmett and Rosalie in Emmett's jeep. He gave me a big grin. Rosalie gave a shy smile, I know she is not a big پرستار of Bella, but she would deffiently help. Behind them I could see Carlisle and Esme, in a deep convosation.
We stopped outside Bella's house just then, Charlie wasn't ہوم yet but he would be soon. I was the first to get out of the car, everyone else followed. I knew where their house key was, and quickly let us all in.
I was hit سے طرف کی the smell of Bella, but also the very strong smell of a Vampire. I was guessing everyone else could smell it too, there was a few hissing sounds from behind me. I could hear all their thoughts and most of them were thinking the same thing "Who is here... یا who was here?" Except Emmett, he was thinking "Whoooo! Hopefully I can fight someone... It's been awhile since I have had a good fight with-"
"Emmett! This is serious!" I yelled at him
"I'm sorry dude, but آپ know how I am." Emmett replied sheepishly.
"I know, I'm sorry. I'm just a bit tense." I said
"Its okay dude, Bella will be okay." He replied.
"I don't know this scent." Carlisle spoke up.
"neither." I replied. "I don't think any of us have."
"We don't know who یا what we are up against then." Esme کہا worried, not only for Bella's sake but for her whole family as well.
I decided to check out the house before Charlie came home. I started to climb the stairs, when Alice called out.
"Wait Edward! Charlie will be ہوم in 10 minutes, lets see if any of us can find a clue then we have to get out of here."
We all تقسیم, الگ کریں up, Emmett, Alice and I went up stairs while Rosalie, Jasper, Carlise and Emse stayed downstairs to look for some clue as to where Bella was.
"Wait Alice. What are we going to tell Charlie?" I asked.
"Crap. I don't know. What about if we call Charlie after he gets ہوم to say Bella is sleeping over, and that will سے طرف کی us sometime to figuer out what to do." Alice was good at coming up with Idea's.
"Okay" I said
I went into Bella's room, and that's where I saw a letter sitting on her Bed, on the envelope was written The Cullen's in neat hand writing, it پگھلانا, سودھنا of Vampire.
"Alice, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie, Carlisle, Esme. I found something!" I called out to everyone.
They were all here within seconds.
"What is it Edward?" Rosalie asked.
"A note."
"Well are آپ going to open it anytime soon Bro?" Emmett asked.
"How about we do it when we get home, Charlie is 1 منٹ away from the house." Alice said. So we all rushed to our cars, speeding off only 10 سیکنڈ before we were standing in Bella's bedroom. I held the note in my hand, desperately wanting to know what was on the note, but also not wanting to.
"We will open is back at the house if آپ want to یا not." Alice کہا quite sternly. Of course Alice could see my future changing.
"Yeah, I know" I کہا with a sigh. I was blocking out Alice and Jasper's thoughts I didn't want to here what they would most likely be thinking. The car stopped, I looked out the window and here we were back at home. We all didn't rush to the living room, but we didn't go at human pace either. I was still clutching the letter in my hand, Did I want to open it یا not?
"I'll open it." Alice کہا a bit frustrated.
"No." I کہا and opened the letter.
I hope you're enjoying my story. Don't forget to تبصرہ and tell me what آپ think, and if there is any thing I can improve on. Okay since of my writers block I just got this Idea... I hope آپ guys like it... I wrote part of this at 4:30 in the morning, so sorry if it doesn't make sense.
So here is the last bit That I had done in Edwards POV... It was so long ago....
"Bella, are آپ okay? What's wrong?" I knew Bella wouldn't call me unless it was an emergency. "Edward someone is here, in the house!" Bella sounded so scared, I wish I was there to protect her. Then it sunk in. "Bella, get out of the house now! Go to Jacob's." I knew Bella would be محفوظ there until I came back. There was no reply, "Bella are آپ there?" I was starting to get really scared that this would be the last time I could talk to her. "Edward, I Love you" Just when I was about to say it back, I heard a loud screaming sound coming from Bella. "Bella!" was all I could get through the phone before it went dead, "Beep, Beep, Beep."
"Carlisle, Esme, Jasper, Alice, Emmett, Rose!" I shouted out, they were all here within seconds. "what's the matter Edward?" Carlisle asked me, I could see he was thinking the worst scenario's that could happen. "It's Bella, We have to get back!"
Edward's POV
We all rushed to our cars, I was in the car with Alice and Jasper, Emmett and Rose were in Emmett's jeep, and Carlisle and Esme were in Carlisle's car. I looked at the clock it was 7:14, it had been 7 منٹ since Bella had called. I tried calling her back, "I'm sorry but this number had been disconnected" The annoying computer voice coming out of the phone told me.
"Ahhh!" And I threw my phone on the ground.
"Edward calm down. Bella will be okay." Alice کہا in a soft voice.
"Alice? Can آپ see Bella?" I asked her frantically.
"I'm trying Edward" Alice کہا back, almost as frantically as me. I felt like yelling at Alice, but it wasn't her fault. It's just so hard when I don't know if Bella is okay یا not. I would have asked Alice to drive faster, but she was already going the سب, سب سے اوپر speed to her car of 300km/h. I took a long deep breath and closed my eyes. I would not take this out on my family I repeated this over and over again in my head. Bella is going to be fine, Bella is going to be fine, Bella is going to be fine, Bella is going to be fine...
"EDWARD!" Alice shouted at me.
"WHAT?!" I shouted back.
"Will آپ shut up! Bella is going to be fine!" Alice half yelled at me now. Oops I didn't know I was saying that out loud.
"But آپ can't know for sure." I told her.
"I know Edward. But we have to think positive, for Bella's sake."
"I guess you're right." I replied
"Yes, I usually am." Alice said, she was thinking in her mind all the times that she was right and I wasn't.
"You're pushing it Alice." I warned her.
"I know" She کہا with her Alice grin.
I tried to block out Alice and Jaspers thoughts, it was a bit harder to block out Alice's though. I leaned back and closed my eyes again, hoping Bella was okay. What if she wasn't? What would I do without her?
There were so many سوالات swimming around in my mind. And how long was this car ride going to be?!?! Bella needs me and i'm stuck in this car, even if it is faster then us running, I just feel so helpless. The car ride normally takes us an گھنٹہ but that is going half the speed of what we are doing right now.
I only then realise that Alice was trying to get my attention, when I opened my eyes I saw here pointing to a sign. It was only then that I realised that it was the sing to Forks. I looked at the clock 7:46 we had been driving for 32 minutes, record time!
"Thank آپ Alice." I told her.
"Its okay, I'm worried about Bella too. We all are." She replied.
"Yeah" I کہا with a sigh.
"Edward, she will be okay." Alice told me... again.
"But what if she's not? What will we do then?" I asked. I know I should be thinking positive, but its so hard to do that when Bella isn't here with me.
"Edward. She will be okay!" Alice half yelled at me. "And if she's not, we will go to the ends of the Earth until she is okay." Alice said, she seemed very determined. And I knew what she کہا was true, none of us would give up if she wasn't okay.
I looked out the window we had slowed down, we were just about to come into Bella's street. I looked behind me to see Emmett and Rosalie in Emmett's jeep. He gave me a big grin. Rosalie gave a shy smile, I know she is not a big پرستار of Bella, but she would deffiently help. Behind them I could see Carlisle and Esme, in a deep convosation.
We stopped outside Bella's house just then, Charlie wasn't ہوم yet but he would be soon. I was the first to get out of the car, everyone else followed. I knew where their house key was, and quickly let us all in.
I was hit سے طرف کی the smell of Bella, but also the very strong smell of a Vampire. I was guessing everyone else could smell it too, there was a few hissing sounds from behind me. I could hear all their thoughts and most of them were thinking the same thing "Who is here... یا who was here?" Except Emmett, he was thinking "Whoooo! Hopefully I can fight someone... It's been awhile since I have had a good fight with-"
"Emmett! This is serious!" I yelled at him
"I'm sorry dude, but آپ know how I am." Emmett replied sheepishly.
"I know, I'm sorry. I'm just a bit tense." I said
"Its okay dude, Bella will be okay." He replied.
"I don't know this scent." Carlisle spoke up.
"neither." I replied. "I don't think any of us have."
"We don't know who یا what we are up against then." Esme کہا worried, not only for Bella's sake but for her whole family as well.
I decided to check out the house before Charlie came home. I started to climb the stairs, when Alice called out.
"Wait Edward! Charlie will be ہوم in 10 minutes, lets see if any of us can find a clue then we have to get out of here."
We all تقسیم, الگ کریں up, Emmett, Alice and I went up stairs while Rosalie, Jasper, Carlise and Emse stayed downstairs to look for some clue as to where Bella was.
"Wait Alice. What are we going to tell Charlie?" I asked.
"Crap. I don't know. What about if we call Charlie after he gets ہوم to say Bella is sleeping over, and that will سے طرف کی us sometime to figuer out what to do." Alice was good at coming up with Idea's.
"Okay" I said
I went into Bella's room, and that's where I saw a letter sitting on her Bed, on the envelope was written The Cullen's in neat hand writing, it پگھلانا, سودھنا of Vampire.
"Alice, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie, Carlisle, Esme. I found something!" I called out to everyone.
They were all here within seconds.
"What is it Edward?" Rosalie asked.
"A note."
"Well are آپ going to open it anytime soon Bro?" Emmett asked.
"How about we do it when we get home, Charlie is 1 منٹ away from the house." Alice said. So we all rushed to our cars, speeding off only 10 سیکنڈ before we were standing in Bella's bedroom. I held the note in my hand, desperately wanting to know what was on the note, but also not wanting to.
"We will open is back at the house if آپ want to یا not." Alice کہا quite sternly. Of course Alice could see my future changing.
"Yeah, I know" I کہا with a sigh. I was blocking out Alice and Jasper's thoughts I didn't want to here what they would most likely be thinking. The car stopped, I looked out the window and here we were back at home. We all didn't rush to the living room, but we didn't go at human pace either. I was still clutching the letter in my hand, Did I want to open it یا not?
"I'll open it." Alice کہا a bit frustrated.
"No." I کہا and opened the letter.
i couldn't let myself even think for a سیکنڈ that i could ease Rosalies Pain.
i never thought that anyone could, not even Emmett at his full best, and here i sit with everything she ever wanted, and i dont even want it. how could i be so selfish to tie the knot and give up the chance that i might regret for a long time adn might risk a wonderful friendship.
What about Alice, and esme? They may not have asked but i know they would pass up the oppurtunitie.
And what about myself. I've already had a baby, ive got a daughter, but i will regret this later too.
I have the most precious gift for a vampire in my grasp and idont want it, if only i could give it away.
What would Happen to me, if i did use this. would i die, really truely die,
and jacob, his pack wouldnt not agree. i cant please anyone.
"Bella" i tunefull voice whispered outside.
i never thought that anyone could, not even Emmett at his full best, and here i sit with everything she ever wanted, and i dont even want it. how could i be so selfish to tie the knot and give up the chance that i might regret for a long time adn might risk a wonderful friendship.
What about Alice, and esme? They may not have asked but i know they would pass up the oppurtunitie.
And what about myself. I've already had a baby, ive got a daughter, but i will regret this later too.
I have the most precious gift for a vampire in my grasp and idont want it, if only i could give it away.
What would Happen to me, if i did use this. would i die, really truely die,
and jacob, his pack wouldnt not agree. i cant please anyone.
"Bella" i tunefull voice whispered outside.
Rose
10 Ways to Annoy Rosalie Hale:
10. Tell her that, because everyone thinks she and Jasper are twins, they should get together. When she asks why, say that Incest is in at the moment.
9. Call her “Ice Queen” behind her back and to her face.
8. Whenever she argues anything, respond with “Whatever, bimbo.”
7. Claim that being a human ain’t so great.
6. When she argues the above claim, respond with “Whatever, bimbo.”
5. Try to exorcise her and her evil ways.
4. Tell everyone that Edward didn’t go to Italy because Rosalie کہا Bella was dead – he went to Italy because he envisioned Rosalie’s ugly face.
3. Call her “Hoe-salie” at least once, to her face.
2. Remind her that Edward chose a pathetic human girl over her.
And the Number One way to annoy Rosalie Hale?
1. Steal her silver cell phone and change the ringtone to “Roxanne” سے طرف کی The Police. When she asks why the hell آپ did it, say that she reminds آپ of Roxanne.
10. Tell her that, because everyone thinks she and Jasper are twins, they should get together. When she asks why, say that Incest is in at the moment.
9. Call her “Ice Queen” behind her back and to her face.
8. Whenever she argues anything, respond with “Whatever, bimbo.”
7. Claim that being a human ain’t so great.
6. When she argues the above claim, respond with “Whatever, bimbo.”
5. Try to exorcise her and her evil ways.
4. Tell everyone that Edward didn’t go to Italy because Rosalie کہا Bella was dead – he went to Italy because he envisioned Rosalie’s ugly face.
3. Call her “Hoe-salie” at least once, to her face.
2. Remind her that Edward chose a pathetic human girl over her.
And the Number One way to annoy Rosalie Hale?
1. Steal her silver cell phone and change the ringtone to “Roxanne” سے طرف کی The Police. When she asks why the hell آپ did it, say that she reminds آپ of Roxanne.
Hello Everyone! I'm bringing another story that I'm writing called Bedroom Confessions! I'm posting the link, hoping آپ will take a look at it. This story is for mature audiences only as it contains violence and murder. 9 chapters & 487 reviews!
Summary: Edward was investigating the perfect murder. Part of his job was to protect the only witness's identity from the murderer. But can he control his feelings for her, and can he handle the secrets she hides? AH/AU;E/B
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Summary: Edward was investigating the perfect murder. Part of his job was to protect the only witness's identity from the murderer. But can he control his feelings for her, and can he handle the secrets she hides? AH/AU;E/B
If آپ like this one, make sure to check out the other stories listed on my profile! Thanks, and I hope آپ enjoy it!
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With Eclipse on the horizon it would be fun to share our پسندیدہ Eclipse quotes. Quotes should be left as تبصرے and with a page number so we can all see them in context. So what is your پسندیدہ line in Eclipse?
I love it on page 58 when Bella is recalling watching Edward and Alice play chess: "Edward and Alice playing chess was one of the funniest things I'd ever seen. They'd sat there nearly motionless, staring at the board, while Alice foresaw the moves he would make and he picked the moves she would make in return out of her head. They played most of the game in their minds; I think they'd each moved two pawns when Alice suddenly flicked her king over and surrendered. It took all of three minutes."
I love it on page 58 when Bella is recalling watching Edward and Alice play chess: "Edward and Alice playing chess was one of the funniest things I'd ever seen. They'd sat there nearly motionless, staring at the board, while Alice foresaw the moves he would make and he picked the moves she would make in return out of her head. They played most of the game in their minds; I think they'd each moved two pawns when Alice suddenly flicked her king over and surrendered. It took all of three minutes."
