Eclipse stars on set

i brush my hair and went down stairs when i got down
5 persons went inside the house
wow i mean this house is big but so many people i dont know

they were 2 really big and strong men on was pale ,beautiful and curly dark hair

and the other one had a darker skin he was good looking i guess

then the only woman was a blond girl probably the envy of every super model that had ever live

the other guy was also blonde and also sltong but not too strong

When i look at the last gut that enter i saw that he was already looking at me i couldn't understand his expresion i look away from his gaze confused...

I'm writing a fanfic called "Almost Alice" about Alice, Jacob, Jasper, and Bella, and I'd really like it if you'd review. If آپ like it, I can put up a link to the story (which is much farther along than the first chapter, I can tell آپ that). And if you're gonna be mean about it, don't bother commenting. Thanks!
-Alice <3

Almost Alice
Chapter One: Smoke


“I win,” Alice کہا smugly, holding out her hand towards Edward. “Again.”

Edward rolled his eyes as he searches his backpack for Alice’s “prize.” I smiled. She was getting to be exactly like Jasper, always betting on something....

bella's pov

"hello everybody this is Bella" edward کہا happily
"hi" i muttered shyly

carlisle step foward
and shook my hand" is a pleasure to see آپ again bella, this is my wife Esme" the older woman she must be 26 years old she was beautiful and her look was warm and sweet the look of a mother
"edward had told me a lot a bout you" esme کہا and smile at me

edward squeeze my hand i look at him and smile getting lost in his eyes

"i suppose آپ remember emmet" edward کہا while emmet کہا hi with his hand

"of course i remember" i کہا and emmet laugh a booming laugh

"and this is my angel rose" emmet...

bella's pov

edward took my hand and we walk toward my parents

when my mother look at me her eyes got wider and my dad look surprized
edward was still holding my hand i was getting مزید nervous with each step a took foward

"Hello mother , father" my mother nodded and also my father
after a منٹ of silence
then my father look at edward
"Are آپ carlisle younger brother Edward??" my dad ask and look at me when he کہا his name

probably remembering when i interrupt him and کہا edwards name i look at edward and he was repressing a smile probably someone was thinking something funny
my edward was...

-Jasper wants to go.

I frowned, turned my head and looked at her curiously, waiting for the rest of what she knew.

-But, Why?!

She sighed and said:

- He doesn’t talk with anyone. Not even me! And this shocks me. All I can see is that Jasper goes away. And if he goes away, I can’t survive. Not without him! He’s my other half.

I could feel pain with every word she said. I understood what she was saying. I had the same feeling when Edward went away. But at that time there was no one for me to talk with. She still had her eyes on the road, but after ten سیکنڈ of silence, she said:

-Bella, I’m...