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It's called "Daughter of Darkness" سے طرف کی V.C. Andrews.

This book was just aweful. It's about a 17 سال old vampire girl named Lorelie Patio (Mary Sue alert!) whos only purpose in life is to be her Daddy's sex slave. This book is filled with shallow evaluations of beauty, anti feminism, poor morals, and disgusting turn of events.

Lorelie has three sisters who are manipulated and emotionally abused سے طرف کی their father. The worst thing about it is that it's never seen as a bad thing. It's disguised as fatherly love. None of the characters recognize the manipulation یا abuse. آپ have to read between the lines to pick up on it. It's almost identical to Twilight here, but at least Bella snapped back at Edward a couple times. Lorelie's father kills her boyfriend and she says "Oh, he's just protecting me because he loves me." She doesn't even get upset.

Literally every other page we're told how beautiful Lorelei is, and half the time it's Lorelie looking in a mirror thinking about how beautiful she is, then she starts complaining that her beauty is a curse because it makes too many boys notice her. Her beauty is so horrible that her teachers even lust after her. She freaks out every time a guy looks at her. Her beauty is described in the mose shallow way imaginable. She's beautiful because she's tall, has large, swelling, perky breasts and soft curly hair. Way to knock down the self esteem of 90% of girls.

At least in Twilight, all the beautiful characters looked different. آپ have short skinny Alice, tall and curvy Rosalie, huge and buff Emmett, short Jane, awkward and lanky Jasper, matronly and a little pudgy Esme. In Twilight there different types of beauty, in DoD, there's only one. Tall, big books, and curly hair. All the sisters are beautiful, and everyone else is a hag.

Lorelei is the biggest Mary-Sue imaginable. All the girls in school are jealous of her, her sisters are jealous of her, all the boys want her, she doesn't even treat people well and she has a boatload of admirers, which s a lot like a certain Bella we know.

I can't tell what kind of messages it's trying to convey. Stay at ہوم and have no friends. Don't care about school یا education. None of that matters if you're incredibly beautiful.

The anti-feminist messages are loud and clear though. Obey your father and only your father. All the girls jump through hoops to impress their father. Even his older sister waits on him hand and foot. He pays her to be his maid!!
Do everything imaginable to please boys. Use your looks and sex appeal to make them happy.
Take 13 سال old girls to the ساحل سمندر, بیچ to teach her how to flirt with college boys. That's her destiny, after all. In twilight, nobody encouraged bella to throw herself at Edward. She did it on her own, but at least she wasn't TRAINED to do it.

Don't get me started on the "vampire legends" in this book. They don't react to the sun at all. Even sparkling is better than nothing. They go out on family vacations to the beach, for crying out loud!! THE BEACH!! In front of everyone!!
They eat regular food. Only the male vampires drink blood, but only once a month, and it's related to their menstrual cycle, whatever the heck that's supposed to mean.

There's no plot, whatsoever. Not even a weak and boring plot like in Twilight. There are no antagonists. No protagonists, no obstacles to overcome. Nobody to fear. No heroes. No climax. No conflict. The only conflict is Lorelei thinking she's too pretty.

The writing is AWFUL!!! twilight doesn't have great writing either, but at least آپ won't see sentences like "I saw the door open and Ava walked through the door." یا "I couldn't sleep to I cleared my mind and tried to sleep."

this book really made me cringe مزید and مزید with every page turn, it actually made me want to read Twilight just to bring my IQ back up a few points.
The saddest part is that there's a sequel coming out in 2013.
I fear for humanity.
added by TheCountess
Source: TheCountess
"W-What are آپ doing?" She backed up and her eyes grew wide. "Do آپ know why he didnt just kill you?" Skylar looked down and back up at him "No...Why?" Shadow smirked and she could tell something dreadful was about to happen "Because he felt something in his دل saying he shouldnt....He actually find آپ quite...intresting....Yet...I find you...food..." Shadow کہا eyes glowing red. Skylar's eyes gleamed and she could tell he was serious."Let me make آپ a deal.....Eather....I kill Tony...Or آپ let me drink your blood...." Skylar looked puzzled."But....Isnt he your brother?" Shadow smirked...
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A 15 سال old blonde girl who was as beautiful as the night sky running ہوم so her mom wouldnt kill her because she was late for curfew. A dark figure stood infront of her he looked about 17 not moving a inch. "Where are آپ going little girl" The man asked "My mom is going to kill me if im late again!" The man look puzzled at the girl and a smirked appeared across his face. "Speaking of killing....." He put his hand on her neck,moving her hair away from her neck. She looked closely at him and studied him. Two sharp teeth growed out of his mouth and the girl got shocked and jumped. "Excatly...What...
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Chapter 21:Alex took me to a thrift store down the سٹریٹ, گلی so I could pick out something مزید conferrable than my satin gown. I picked out some black ripped skinny jeans, a black laced corset, black combat boots and a black sweatshirt کے, سویاٹشارٹ with گلابی hearts. I pulled my red hair back in some feathered chopsticks and applies some very red lipstick and a pair of sunglasses, to hid my already black turning lips and red turning eyes a signal I'm getting hungry.
"Are آپ okay Christa? آپ seem a little on edge" Alex said.
"I'm just starving, haven't eating in 2 یا 3 days is all, no biggy" I replied in a...
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Chapter 15:As Antonio approached me I did not flinch, I knew a way out of this situation it was just a matter of selling it.
"Antonio آپ look well. How long has it been 3,4 years? آپ haven't aged a bit." I کہا with a smirk.
"You humor me Fang, I'm very disappointed آپ left, آپ see Lust is no were near as entertaining as you." I could see my sister clench her jaw at the remark. She had always loved Antonio but he fell for the girl with hair red as blood instead of my raven haired sister.
"Antonio I'm prepared to make a deal with you." I کہا without thinking.
"Oh is that so love, I haven't...
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Chapter 5: So i had gone from the satans creation to Alex's guardian angle, what the hell is that about? I knew from the text i had gotten from Patrick 'as of know Alex is fair game' یا somthing like that and i knew he ment every word. For now he was stuck in that old wearhouse but as soon as night fell Alex would be in danger. All though as a vampire my instinct was to kill anything with a pulse my attraction to him was clouding my instincts, oH well i didnt have to worry right know it is only 8 یا 9 in the morning,i had time.
I had never been to Toronto so i figured i should make the most...
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posted by sshannahmontana
Chapter 2 Part 3

Previously on the Vampire:imagine that
We spent the night سے طرف کی playing games,eating ad drinking and partying all night and we slept on the سوفی, لٹانا and the boys slept on the floor.And when the اگلے morning. We were being scold and we don't know what to do?So we went to our homes.

Part 3

When we got to our homes,our parents were waiting for us and they were scolding us.I can't stand the scolding anymore so i phoned to Crystal,Danny and Jake and told them we would meet at a fancy restaurant.And we sneak out of our houses even though we are grounded so when we got there we made a conversation...
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posted by sshannahmontana
Chapter 1 Part 5

Previously on the Vampire:imagine that I think there are new vampires in town.And while i was gone i left Danny alone and i think he bit it.

Part 5

Hey Sally be cool کہا Jake.You know that Danny likes آپ right."What!"He likes me but he never told me about that.I said.Jake کہا Oops!Danny کہا not to tell آپ but promise me not to tell Danny because he told me that he will tell his feelings سے طرف کی himself.Anyways i was wrong about Danny so i gotta go apologize to Danny.So i went downstairs to find Danny but i didn't found Danny but i found some mysterious girls at the dark corner...
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posted by sshannahmontana
Chapter 1 Part 2

Previously on the Vampire:imagine that
Sweety we have some good news to tell you.I کہا what would it be mom.She کہا sweetheart i wanna tell آپ for a long time.I don't understand mom what are آپ saying.Mom and Dad face look sad and کہا "Sweety we are a vampire so did آپ too."I was freaked out and کہا "what"."How could آپ not tell me earlier and today is my birthday."I کہا how could آپ do that to me,I shouted out loud that i hate آپ and then ran upstairs.When i got upstairs,i was suprised because i saw Danny.He کہا "Hey Sally"I کہا how did آپ get here so did آپ hear...
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posted by ICEhanica
4th part of story!!!



…“Sandara are آپ vampire?”
“Yes, and I bite you!”

“What, why?”
“Cause I want آپ live forever whit me.”
“OK, but we than can’t go in same school that all years!!!”
“I know. I already buy tickets for plain.”
“Where we go?”
“We go in SAD, there is school for vampires!”
“OK, than where are my parents?”
“Are آپ don’t see message?”
“What message?”
“Message it’s on table, in the kitchen!”
“I go pack my things and call ma parents, then we can go!”
“I pack it all your things and tell your parents already.”
“When?”
“At time...
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posted by ICEhanica
3rd part of story



“Brthy I think I know what is wrong whit you!
You are vampire!!!”


„What? Are u serious, یا just craizy?“
„Srry, but that is true.“
„Ok,ok, well see…Vampires not exist!!!“

My BFF is gone from the room, and returned for 5 minutes. Has brought a book.

“Here read this!!!” say she to me.
“Why, what is that?”
“It’s book, book about vampires.”
“I don’t need it!!!”
“Yes آپ need, here take it!!!”

I take the book and start to read aloud:

You become a vampire only if vampire bite you.
Then filling the severe headache, and thirst for blood.
If these biting...
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posted by Gothheart13
Once upon a dead time,A girl named Alie was just a girl but her life changed when Knight came along he was a VAMPIRE,this is how their story began.

Alie was walking down سٹریٹ, گلی to school.Alie's teacher anounced that a new student is in her class his name was Knight.Alie's friend Ariana asked her 'Do آپ like the new kid' as she did a curious look,'No i dont' Alie anserwed.Knight sat اگلے to Alie,Alie blushed and felt nervous her face turned red and tried to ignore him,then Knight turned at her she felt embaraced then read her book called 'Vampires' with a picture of a boy vampire kissing a human...
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Chapter 2
"Suspicions"
This is the longest drive on ever. We pass the grocery store,church, and Riley's house. Once we get to school I can already tell this will be the worst دن ever.I sit in the gymnasium until I see the two love birds Riley and Jason walk in the building.Riley's orangey-brown hair down دکھانا off her hair's beautiful silky and wavy texture. She cant resist wearing her black combat boots on سب, سب سے اوپر of her ugly school pants.Riley is tall but not too tall,still she barely passes Jason up which makes them the cutest couple.I don't blame Riley for liking Jason,he has straight blonde...
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posted by carlislesnurse2
Original poem سے طرف کی me (please excuse if its a bad one but im new at this)


Climbing up these قلعہ walls
where the light of my candle falls
pulling me deeper into your room
filled with sorrow, filled with gloom

Making but a tiny sound
the wind from your lips blows the candle out

Sitting on سب, سب سے اوپر of the bed,
on your unused تکیا i rest my head

Your cold pale hand, those bright red eyes
pulling me in and i would never revive
longing and waiting, what takes آپ so long?

The words that آپ answer with make me smile


Then آپ lean in, baring those teeth

Sinking into me without a chance to scream
The red slowly dripping
The moon makes it gleam

without any warning آپ stop and pull away

And kiss me until my mouth tastes of my own blood
my eyes start to flutter

im slipping away

There is no mercy, i can not lie. for it was my choice to die.



On your unused تکیا i rest my head
As the sun comes out we go to bed.

Smiling with the fangs of the seductive undead.
posted by hassleberrygirl
The cops were walking in the alley and saw us vampires attacking a human in our house through the window.The cops kicked down the door hannah کہا hide everyone but Ethan was still sleeping and micah was sleeping to.The cops grabed Ethan and pushed his up against the wall.Ethan screamed WHAT THE HELL DO آپ COPS WANT.The cops کہا آپ guys all are vampires.Ethan کہا yeah and.The cops کہا we are taking آپ all to court and see what the judge wants.Micah got up and slapped the cops and screamed WHY THE HELL DO WE HAVE TO GO TO COURT BECAUSE WE ARE VAMPIRES WHY DONT آپ JUST THROW US IN JAIL.The...
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posted by renesmeeroxx11
Chapter 2

The اگلے morning was a Saturday so I slept in late.
And when I finally did get up it was already 11 o’clock.
“Mornin’ sleepyhead,” My mom smiled.
“Hi,” I yawned.
”Why don’t آپ go outside, it’s a beautiful day,” she suggested.
“Where’s Colin?” I asked.
“Over his friend’s house, now go outside!” She exclaimed.
“Ok fine,” I muttered and headed upstairs to change.
Since it was the middle of October I decided to wear a pair of skinny jeans and a purple and white tank سب, سب سے اوپر and sandals.
Don’t even ask about my hair.
Soon after that I was walking out my back door....
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posted by renesmeeroxx11
Chapter 1: Something strange
“Did آپ hear?”
“OMG!”
“I can’t believe it!”
“I’m scared!”
That’s what everyone’s been hearing and saying for about the past month.
I’m گلبہار, گل داؤدی BTW, just your average 7th grade girl living in a not so average town.
Doomsburg.
Literally.
I’m guessing آپ wanna know what happened, well just read on!
It was a dark and stormy night, midnight….
Hahaha just kidding, here’s the real story.
It was a warm, but dark summer night. So Ms. Katie Banks decided to take a walk.
She should have thought it over.
In her backyard are some woods, and that’s where this...
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posted by vampiregrrl999
All this talk about vampires, but what the heck is a vampire anyway? The definition has changed so much over time, that what once was considered a vampire is now called something else. The original European vampires were مزید like what we would call zombies today. Vampires have been based on demons and ghoulish spirits and reanimated corpses.
If we define a vampire merely as a creature that drinks blood, that would eliminate a lot of the creatures considered to be the ancestors to the modern types. Most of our concepts of vampires are evolved versions of the European legends. The word “vampire”...
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Chapter 11- Carmen
    “Are آپ okay, Wendi?” Colleen asked and I noticed that my whole body was shuddering. I focused on calming down, not wanting to feel weak. It helped some and the shuddering slowed slightly. Colleen figured out that I needed some help and once again, she calmed me down with her curious talent. I often wondered how it worked. It seemed so impossible. I was still a little upset so Stefan scooped me up into his arms and hugged me to his strong chest.
    We walked into the باورچی خانے, باورچی خانہ and Stefan sat me down in a chair at the long, mahogany...
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Dracula Was Angry To Find Out Roselyn Is مزید Than Just a Vampire, He Got Up From His Coffen & Walks Around In His Manison In Confusion, Roselyn
Was At Class Thinking If The Figure She Saw Was Her Father Who Might Come Back To Protect Her, She
Look Out Of The Window & Saw The Figure Again The Figure Was Wearing a Black Hooted جیکٹ & All She Can See Is His Glowing Yellow Eyes, Her Teacther Yelled *Miss Roselyn!* Roselyn Jump & Look At Her Teacther *Sorry* She Said, Roselyn Felt So Confused If That Is Her Father یا Not, Roselyn Walks Out Of Her School & Went With Kaite To...
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