write a poem یا some sad thing but IT HAS TO RHYME !

mine :
" Depression is when آپ hate everyone around
Depression is when آپ don't want to make a sound
Depression is when all آپ want to do is cry
Depression is when آپ feel like you’re dying inside
Depression is when your thoughts wonder all the time
Depression is when آپ can't sleep even though you’re tired
Depression is when آپ don't want to go on
Depression is when آپ can't stop shaking outside
Depression is when آپ hide who آپ are
Depression is when آپ put on a mask to hide what آپ feel
Depression is when آپ feel weak all the time
Depression is when آپ give in to everything around
Depression is when آپ don't care what happens anymore
and is just another دن in my life ... so lets take a چھری ... "
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FeelmySwagger said:
I feel weird in a world unknown
I pray to my savior in different a tone
how i hate living and just want to end it
but am still held back with accomplishing it
''ur just beginning'' he says
dont follow that outer voice astray
it leads to oblivion
i keep on opening like an onion
I find truth in His words
as i heal i feel their words like swords
poking me inside
still He will not leave me aside
i keep on rising and rising
and now I sing


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posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک 
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the sing thing was totally random
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kk
4422 posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک
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*best answer*
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hobbit1121 said:
The dark ground is stained red
Where all the brave soldiers bled
Their weapons were useless
The enemy was ruthless
All those tears were in vain
The men knew death was release from the pain
On their graves the poppies grow
And to this دن they still blow
The soldiers are at peace
As they knew the enemy's آگ کے, آگ did cease
To this دن we pray for them
And we know their souls are as priceless as gems
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Wow. That really was sad.
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POPclogger216 said:
Dogs dying*
Kids lying**
Girlfriends crying***
I, myself sighing.****











































*Their فر, سمور blue: It's the new brown.
**On the ground, laughing their heads off at a joke
***for joy, seeing that their boyfriend just proposed to them.
***** Because i can't make a sad poem to save my life.
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That was really funny! I can't write sad either. :)
melidogs posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک
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the same here :D
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melidogs said:
Birds fly up so gentle
like a feather on the breeze
Like the rain that falls so softly
like the snow up to my knees

What is their inspiration?
How do they find their soul?
And nothing but their smile
Is gonna make me whole.

Some دن I will do my best
While looking to the sky
I'll find my دل once hidden,
Grow my wings and fly.
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Love it:);):];] I also❤smilies!!!!
hobbit1121 posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک
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thanks! :D
melidogs posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک
4422 said:
Super sick
i hate the way i feel cos im sick
i cant eat, i cant drink my mouth stinks.
Mum force me to go eat,
but im not fit...
Crazy fever, when will u leave
wen its sunny u make me shake
my leg shake, my head aches
i cant think, im now thin
my eyes hurts n guess what
im now blind, i cant see wen u stand ..
So Dear God, i need my health back!

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wow thats good thx for answering !
fanofzeldafan posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک
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0_0 rubbish
4422 posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک
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i wrote rubbish
4422 posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک
Lady_Rebel said:
Bravery

Standing in the light
Looking at the night
What is your fright?
The feeling that my path is not right.

Do آپ keep going?

Standing still as the dead
Looking at the names of the dead
What do آپ dread?
I fear the fatality of death.

Do آپ continue?

When آپ are faced with the grave
And yes, off course in the night
And frozen with terror,
If آپ keep going through the fright
We will name آپ “brave”.

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posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک 
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not really sad...
Lady_Rebel posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک
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wow thats good thx for answering !
fanofzeldafan posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک
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kk
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DarkCEpitome said:
Suddenly, the rod breaks and pierces her
Blood of my dreams splatters on the wall
The pieces of her hang in the air
Shards of her, where she looks out and stares
Watches her pieces dance all about
And when each little piece breaks off, the shard
shall give out a shout
Yes, the girl watches herself
She watches them all
Then briskly and briefly wonders
why the torn, broken pieces of her
strangely never fall...
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Sorry if it doesn't make too much sense....I just got over having writer's block, I'm slowly getting back to the whole turn of things :(
DarkCEpitome posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک
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wow thats good thx for answering !
fanofzeldafan posted پہلے زیادہ سے سال ایک
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That was cool
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