Young Justice Article: my first fiction notes (no haters past this point)

my first fiction notes (no haters past this point)

posted by Dezzylove3

Name:Impulsia

Secret Identity:Allison Carter

Powers:she can control آگ کے, آگ from her hands and when she kicks.

Apperance:she has shoulder length dirty blonde messy and flyaway hair,tattoos on neck and over body,that symbolize fire,wears a choker ہار enhansed with magic from Doctor Fate that conceal her tattoos while shes in civil atire.

Civil Atire: A long sleeved belly shirt(dont wory shes well fit)a black leather جیکٹ belly length also,black jeans with a chain attached to her wallet in her back pocket,red high-top sneakers,and the black choker necklace,sometimes she wears sunglasses,but not always,firery red eyes rimed with black eyeliner

uniform: a long sleeved black kevlar شرٹ, قمیض that has ripps up both arms,black kevlar pants that just gos past her knees but just only that,and black kevlar اتر جانا, پرچی پر shoes,and a dark red utility belt, she has no choker but she wears biker glovesfor her hands.red eyeshadow and red paint under her eyes.

Age:15

Mentor:Volcanis (a girl)made up i know shes secretly in love with the bats <3

Home:Boston

Personality:fun, go getting,she has a short temper,and when she gets mad her hair catches on fire,she used to be in an all girl gang but she put that behind her,she carys a پرس, تھیلی with a bunch of hand tools in it like bobby pins for picking locks,and hammers and stuff,funny, shes intelligent when she wants to be,shes clumsy but can fix things easily, shes always trying to set her mom up with bats,its quit funny,her mom works for bruce wayne so its hard for her to hide her wuv!!

siblings:Older brother-Branden Carter,age 17,Younger sister-Michelle Carter-age 9,Younger brother-Jonathen Carter,age 3.they all look like her.

so there آپ go Allison Carter's bio tell me if i should make an intro story for her یا not,remember no haters thanks T.T

Mclovin_69 i like her already :)you have potential.... in making characters

Dezzylove3 thank you

Dezzylove3 should i make story??

Mclovin_69 :) if u want

66Dragons Isn't everyone in love with bats? Or robin? :) Anyway, nice OC!

Mclovin_69 ive always like Robin but more in a little brother kind of way XD the brother i never had, ive always loved Wally though <3

Dezzylove3 FINISHED MY FIRST OC PWEASE READ

اگلے in Line, Part Two

posted by Candy77019

"I expected Batman to be here, but life isn't fair."

"Are آپ sure آپ want to patrol Gotham سے طرف کی yourself?" asked a very concerned Erica.
I sighed. "How am I ever gonna practice my new moves if آپ never let me do anything on my own?"
I heard her laugh on the other line. "You're right. Have fun, but be careful."
I put the phone in the left pocket of my new costume, feeling proud. I had it made based on Batman's costume--black all over, with a few pockets to hold my belongings, but no cape.
I stepped away from the edge of the building, not wanting to fall. Tonight, Gotham was quiet.
Huh. Maybe I don't have to patrol tonight after all. I was about...

Night Crawler Chapter 6

posted by Skittles98

“No! No, no, no!” I struggled as Megan and Artemis pulled me out the door to the ساحل سمندر, بیچ in my new swimsuit. When I got back to Mt. Justice with my bathing suit, I realized almost the whole back was open. I had wanted to return it and find a new one, but I was like it was made for me. It was shaped perfectly to outline my slight curves. Then it dawned on me that there would be guys on the ساحل سمندر, بیچ and I was hesitant to go out. At the dojo where I grew up, no males where allowed. I had slipped on the flip-flops that Artemis had gotten for me and walked out, not realizing Artemis and Megan were...

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An Opening Chapter 5 A Tale

posted by Skittles98

“No one make any sudden movements” I murmured
The dog got closer and I realized there were a few people on its back. Then it pounced on me and started licking my face. I realized the people on its back had gotten off and the hellhound had a collar.
“Mrs. O’Leary? Is that you?” I asked as I wriggled out of her grasp
She howled in response.
“If your Mrs. O’Leary, then the people in your back must be friends!” I thought “Hmm… who owns a hellhound that lives in Manhattan, has a girl friend with curly blonde hair and is دوستوں with someone who radiates death?” I wondered sarcastically...

A سال After, Part Fourteen (FINAL)

posted by Candy77019

"I found myself at the edge of a cliff, with a roaring waterfall down below."

A fog cleared in front of me, revealing a mossy forest. The air was full of smoke, making me breathe harder. Then suddenly, all the trees surrounding me burst into flames.
"What's happening?!" I shouted into the fire.
And then it hit me: I was in the Spirit World.
But I don't remember meditating... I took a step toward the flames, making them blow away.
I ran through the forest, determined to find that mysterious cave. The آگ کے, آگ seemed like it was following me; like it knew every اقدام I was about to make.
I found myself at the edge of a cliff, with a roaring waterfall down below. I jumped into...

A سال After, Part Eleven

posted by Candy77019

"This is something I need to do."

Batman pulled into the cave after an eternity of flying. سے طرف کی now, it would be morning, but I had no thoughts of going to sleep.
He pressed a button that made the roof open.
I frowned. "You're going to investigate, aren't you?"
He nodded, not saying anything.
"The team will be curious," I warned him.
"I know."
"And if they're willing to search, I won't stop them," I said.
He sighed. "I know."
I climbed out of the plane, disappointed. "It won't hurt to ask for help," I suggested.
He shook his head. "This is something I need to do. Don't tell the team, let them figure out themselves."
"I can't...

A سال After, Part Ten

posted by Candy77019

"Ah, Erica Richards, the Avatar. It's a pleasure to meet you."

After what seemed like forever, a tall brownish tower appeared into the night. I guess it was the Tower of Babel, according to what Batman had کہا earlier.
He landed the plane amid some bushes, then climbed out.
We snuck behind a few trees. "Erica, آپ do exactly what I tell آپ to do, when I tell آپ to do it. No buts. Understand?"
"Umm, yeah?" Not really.
He nodded, then raced into the greenery with me close behind him.
It took a while for us to climb the tower without me flying, but we managed to make it work.
My hands were clutched onto the stone ledge, praying that I wouldn't slip with...

An Adventure chapter 10

posted by Skittles98

When I spoke, the words sounded loud and commanding yet I was speaking softly.

Suddenly, I wasn’t there any more. I was with Poseidon when he was teaching me how to use my ocean powers.
”Remember, Sarah, if آپ wish an ocean creature to do something, focus your mind on it. Clear your head.”
”Clear my head” I murmured
I opened my eyes and focused on the drakon that was lunging for Robin. Somehow I was at the drakon before it moved 5 inches. Also I was wearing a beautiful dress of white linen. When I spoke, the words sounded loud and commanding yet I was speaking softly.
”No” I repeated “Drakon, this is not your place to be. Go back to the ocean where you...

Adventure chapter 2

posted by Skittles98

After explaining to Kalder’ahm that I was ok, he asked what I was doing at the bottom of the ocean.
”If I tell آپ truth, promise not to turn me in to the police ”I said” don’t worry, I’m not a criminal” I added quickly after seeing his eye’s widen
”First, let’s bring آپ to ساحل to meet the person who first noticed آپ might be in trouble” Kalder’ahm کہا grabbing my hand again
”I know how to swim, in fact I’m actually a very strong swimmer” I snapped
As we swam to the ساحل سمندر, بیچ and I remembered my promise to my mom, to call her when we reached land.
”Hey Kalder’ahm-“...