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 "Kill the Flaws!" - Garth
"Kill the Flaws!" - Garth
Okay..

As I remember there's one for Kate, Lilly and Humphrey as well.

But I don't know if these stories are still able to be found.
Keep in mind. I read these a long time ago.
Way before being a Brony, and discovering fanpop shortly after (though the reasons for each, are not at all connected).

I would be willing to review the messed up one that was for Humphrey.
He loses his sight, and than his SANITY.
As he kills Winston, and then, fully snaps.

But if I were to disguess a story about Humphrey snapping.
I would do that delated one, I think was called "cold wind blows"
it ties with ROCKET TO INSANITY, for being one of the sadest creepypastas I ever read, ever.
Plus, their both about a protagonist losing all forms of sanity.
For Humphrey, Kate dies, and he starts killing Eastern wolves.
Thinking their ALL as bad, as the to jerks that laughed about Kate's death..

But. Anyway.
Getting off track.

The one I'm here to disguess, isn't about Humphrey going evil, it's, GARTH going evil.

Now..

To be quite honest.
I never really cared for Garth.
After all. One of my most مقبول stories, VENGEFUL SPIRIT, has Garth becomes possessed, and his body used to go graphically murder others.

But even 'I' didn't fully enjoy seeing him go insane, in the way he did.

Though. At least there's a reason.

Though it's a very stupid one.

Despite Lilly being his wife, he has zero respect for Omegas.
Calling them nothing مزید than 'flaws'. But eventually, he snaps, and murders one of those berry eating girls, Janice. Simply for being an omega.

From than on, Garth wasn't Garth. He was murderous monster.
Mostly shown when he murders a husband and wife in cold blood, than scratchs the children as 'reminder of him'

Eventually Garth took over the Southern pack, after killing all the omegas, they become his personal army. (something like that, I don't remember, okay!?)

Now.
There be those of آپ thinking
"Connor? How could آپ hate this story? It sounds awesome!"

I would agree with you.
If it weren't for the fucked up twist near the end,

For no reason at all.
Kate joins Garth.
She betrays everybody.

God!
Why did everybody hate Kate back than!?
Every story I read, had her become a کتیا, کتيا in some way یا anouther.
Everyone cared about Lilly,
But why not Kate.
Nobody cared about Kate.
Obviously, they do NOW!
But. It was depressing at the time.

This always happens in these things.

It's Princess Twilight all over again.
Can't tell آپ how many times I had to deny invites کلب decated to stopping Twilight being princess.
Everybody was so over dramatic.
It's a fuckin show!
Why do آپ give a fuck, what happens to the fuckin characters!
Besides. Twilight is pretty as a alicorn.

Uhhh..

Anyway.
That's all I got.
Please leave responses.

And let me know if there's something آپ want me to review.
posted by REDWolfleader
I awoke to tugging on my leg and saw it was Kelly,
"What is it Kelly?"
"I-I have to go to Alpha school today."
"Good!"
"You don't know how long it lasts do you?"
"No."
"It lasts a ماہ of hard training at those mountains."
"So آپ won't be able to come back til a ماہ from now?"
"Correct.I'm sorry,but I will come back."
"Ok well have fun."
"I will thank you.I'll tell mom to keep an eye on you."
"I highly doubt that's necessary."
"All the مزید reason to. I love you, goodbye."
"I love آپ too,bye honey."I کہا walking out to hunt. I went and caught a large caribou that would last the day.I ate and then...
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The evening had begun now, kicked off with a symphony of howling from every other member in the pack. Just opposite of that, Eight stood and stared in silence into a pair of ice blue eyes. Not because he wanted to be silent, there were so many things he wanted to say, so many thoughts racing through his mind.
But a that moment, a simple request kept them inside.
It echoed through his mind in with the other thoughts and سوالات he had, all the things he wanted to say یا ask doubled around over and over and between each thought was those words.

He hadn't been there for 15 منٹ and yet, all...
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posted by Red_Pyramid206
This ones a little sad...

Chris' point of view now

Katie and I woke up to another beautiful دن and to my beautiful girl. Damn, I would go crazy if something happened to her. Little did I know, I was in for a crazy day. "Morning hun." Katie said, kissing me. "Did آپ like my new moves last night?" I then remembered. I forgot wolves have that "scent" down there that makes the guys 'big'. Damn, Katie's was good. Where did she learn 69 too? I sat up and stretched. "Yeah, آپ were awesome last night." I said, kissing her. "Hey, I'm going to shower, آپ wanna شامل میں me?" Katie said. I nodded. I opened...
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Dustin's POV

I awoke in my ماند, خلوت خانہ to find that it was morning, the sun was shining into my ماند, خلوت خانہ illuminating it. I got up on my paws and stretched, I could hear some commission going on outside so I decided to have a look. I walked out of my ماند, خلوت خانہ and found Hutch along with Candu and some other wolves talking about something.

"Hey what's going on?" I asked walking up to them
"Oh did آپ hear what happened to Hunter?" Hutch said
I then knew what he was talking about "No, what happened to him?" I asked pretending like I didn't already know what happened
"Hunter mated with River" Hutch said
"He what?" I said...
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Stern gave a look to each member as he explained, as though to make sure they all understood his full meaning - tonight was a little different than most. Tonight was the night of the Moonlight Howl. And the small bodied بھیڑیا made sure that everyone knew.

"Tonight is the Moonlight Howl." He started, all business "I know آپ all wish that we would have no patrols tonight, but suck it up. Its gotta be done, especially tonight."
He walked around each member, passing his gaze from one to the next, locking their full attention even after he moved from بھیڑیا to wolf.
"Its a bright night. Everyone...
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posted by VengeanceWolf
I was writing up orders for troop movements to be ready for a new war I decided to inflict on the already war-weakened countries of Black and White, when a familiar, yet dreaded mind brushed lightly against my own.
I set down my pen and allowed the mind to connect to mine.
"Keirrn, it has been a while."
"For good reason, your the one who came up with the plot to kill Alec two years ago. It was you, who got Mephistophiles to mate with Cassandra, my daughter no less, so that I would attack him. He lived and escaped with those two stupid cougars. It was آپ who sent my daughter to die, at the hands...
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NO SPOILER!

*Morning*
“Damn that was some awesome playing Humphrey”I کہا to the sleeping Humphrey
“What?! Oh yeah did آپ keep the score?”Humphrey says dozily
“10 ME 9 You”I Said
“What time did we play to”Humphrey says
“About 4:00AM”I Said
“Wow!”Humphrey کہا giving the iphone to me
“Time to go to bed”I said
“But its 9:00AM
“Im Tired”I Said
*I Fall Asleep*
*EVE DREAM!!*
“AHHHHHH GET AWAY FROM ME!!!!!!!!!”I Say in my sleep
*From what I saw was whiteness out of the den*
“Its Snowing?! IT IS WOOOHOOO!!!!!!!!!”I Say Hopping with joy
*Since I lived in new Zealand it didn’t...
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SPOILER: NEW CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!! TRUE WINTER CHAPTER:4

*as me and Kate were getting ready for the hunt I felt a surge of hunger I thought if I should ask Winston یا hutch about this*
“Hey آپ ready?”Kate says
“Yep Im ready to take the stock down!”I say
*Oh and we used tail signals as well it’s a good way to communicate without Talking*
“I never knew tails were so useful!”I Whisper to myself
*Suddenly Kate flicks her tail*
*We Jump into action I got 4 again but I wounded one Kate finished it off*
“A good breakfast!”I say
*I Freeze as I hear a noise…It’s a tv*
“Kate do آپ hear that...
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Upon their arrival to the Den, Stern instructed Eight to remain at the base of the mesa and insisted that it would be a much better idea for him to rouse Deogee and the others from their sleep. With a few hours til the sun kissed the earth with مالٹا, نارنگی light, the den, all but those on patrol this evening, would still be in slumber.
It took little time for Stern to return with Deogee, Otto, Benjamin and Jayne. They each traveled around to the rear of the ماند, خلوت خانہ rock and toward the woods just a little way, they were near the night patrol's pre-duty meeting spot.
Each of the wolves sat in a semi-circular...
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posted by VengeanceWolf
I swirled my finger over the hilt of my sword and stared at the five wolves, leaning my cheek and the other hand.
As the were new they were still unclothed and obviously did not know what modesty meant.
The one with golden فر, سمور stepped forward, "Is there no other way to get home, Kierrn?"
I flicked my ear in annoyance, "There is, any of the three kings could make آپ a portal home, that includes me, but I have decided to keep آپ here. As my pets."
The red muscled بھیڑیا stepped forward, "I am no ones pet," he growled.
I smiled and attacked his consciousness with the full weight of my mind until he...
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posted by josemurcia2
after hearing that explosion very close, they all decided to go and check it out.
they get there and see about 7 holes on the ground.
kate: what happen here, did u see what happen dad
winston: no i havent
humphrey: what can it be then.
everyone was so confuse, then.
drone: RAAAAAAAAAAAAA
they all see hands coming out of the holes. when they came to the surface, they started to shoot.
kate: run everyone run!
everyone was panicking. hutch and a friend manage to get the emergency gun. there was a محفوظ house at the end of the forest.
hutch: keep running, i will hold em off.
but they over power him, but hutch...
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that's right, my سب, سب سے اوپر 11 پسندیدہ فلمیں of 2013 list, that's done and outta the way. now, it's time to write down my سب, سب سے اوپر 11 worst فلمیں of 2013. یا as i like to call it "the fun list". why am i making this? cause we all know every best فہرست needs a worst list, and shit فلمیں need love too یا at least just let 'em know they're shit movies. that's why i'm here, guys. also, thanks so much for checking my سب, سب سے اوپر 11 پسندیدہ فلمیں of 2013. and if آپ ended up hating everything on that list... well, sorry to hear that, but hey. everybody has their own opinion. that being said, let's get started with...
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added by KingSimba4Ever9
"This is it, the Apocalypse, whooah!, I'm waking up, I FEEL IT IN My Bones, enough to make my systems blow, welcome to the new age!" "Jesus my head hurts."

Humphrey herd the shrieking sound of metallic instruments slamming to the ground.

"Ow!"

He suddenly awoke he was in a rebellion he could tell سے طرف کی the coal black armor. They called themselves hell jumpers the ones with black armor.the world was distorted for a minute.

Did I survive the Apocalypse?" Asked Humphrey

He smelled smoke and saw the city behind him in flames, his jaw dropped as he watched its burning gaze. He was surrounded سے طرف کی a cloud...
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posted by Slenderwolf
Mission Detail:Kill all Enemies, Capture a Air Base.
Weapons:Ak-47 Red Dot Sight /w Grenade Launcher. Five Seven.
Localization:Iraq.
______________________________________
Day 2
January 5, 2014
Time:2:30 Pm
Air Force Unit.
Daniel "Eagle" Sanderson.
I took a F16 "Fighting Falcon" and fly off Carrier Base.
15 منٹ LATER...
"Target Located." Sandra said.
"Where is it?" Jack said.
"There is!" then Sandra destroy a Sam.
Jack destroyed a Sam too as I destroy one too. "Sam missile, dropping flares!" Sandra said. "Daniel, I need آپ to take care of that aircraft!" Sandra said. I destroy a aircraft. "I will take...
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chapter five of life with Alyssa, enjoy! Sorry for a short chapter اگلے one will be a whole lot better.

It had been five days since the death Shadow. Everything felt gloomy, during Jake and my work hours we felt the disseverance and the effect of Shadow's death. Crystal has been in her بستر 24/7, Alyssa brought food and cold drink for Crystal but she refused most of her offerings, she would just crawl in a ball and sniffle. Alyssa has been مزید phobic about me and Jake working out in the on the house, یا at less while we still have to put up the large wooden planks.  But we promised Shadow,...
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