Is this a good poem and do آپ think مزید could be added?

Please be honest

We had such fun
Trying anything to talk to eachother
We'd find away
But then it stopped
We hardly spoke یا saw one another
We were a couple
And a really cute one to
Afraid of my reaction
آپ had a friend deal with the brake up
They wrote a note
And I thought it was a joke
One from a friend
A secret admirer
یا your brother
Hearing from my sister
It was no joke
آپ کہا it was akward
And that آپ still love me
But I think I pushed آپ too far
What did I do
To make آپ push me away
It may sound strange but
I still want آپ in my life
Even if as a a friend
I'll b e here for آپ even if
The rest of the world leaves you
I won't
I'll stay
But if آپ want me back
Prove آپ won't hurt me again
Never again آپ will آپ hurt me
The same way twice
Cause boy
آپ fucked up