Dose anyone have a tile sugestion and is this any good?

Have آپ ever been hurt سے طرف کی the one آپ love
Have آپ ever wanteed to change
Who آپ were, who آپ are, who آپ will be
Feeling as though your life is all laid out
Wondering why آپ have the life آپ have
آپ have it for a reason
Figure it out!

Have youo ever been hurt سے طرف کی the one one آپ love
Have آپ ever felt so betrayed
That آپ wanted to die
Don't give up
Things will change...for the best

Have yoou ever tired to change the world
With just a song
Try to change a دل just سے طرف کی saying "hello"

Have آپ ever though آپ had true love
Then found it in a total stranger
Have آپ ever had so much hate
Then saved a soul that was dying alone

All of us have in one way یا another
Live life your way
The futures always changing








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Poetry جوابات

BittenGirl said:
wooow!that is amazing!you should write مزید poems because آپ are really good!
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irena83 said:
It's a nice poem, emotional, partly dark but filled with a hope.
Suggestions for the tittle could be:
- Eternal struggle
- Pieces of living hope
- Wondering mind
;)
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